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| View Poll Results: APNE PASANDIDA GHAZAL/NAZM KO VOTE KIJIYE | |||
| NO 1.iin baadaloN kii aaR meN, zulf teri |
   
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10 | 35.71% |
| NO 2.Woh pal bhi kaisa pal hoga jab haath |
  
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3 | 10.71% |
| NO 3.Keh to dia hai tumse |
  
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4 | 14.29% |
| NO 4.Jab tak tum hum mile na the |
  
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7 | 25.00% |
| NO 5.bataana hai yahii jaanaa |
  
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4 | 14.29% |
| NO 6.paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho |
  
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7 | 25.00% |
| NO 7.MuradoN bhari woH haseeN raat hogi, |
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10 | 35.71% |
| NO 8.Main Khush hun aaj woh din aaya |
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2 | 7.14% |
| NO 9.Yay lamha....yay samaaa ..yay ghadee |
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2 | 7.14% |
| NO 10.Tumhe chaand kahun ya chaandni |
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4 | 14.29% |
| NO 11.shaam ki bahoN me ik chand utar aaya hai |
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10 | 35.71% |
| NO 12.Le ke paighaam e firaaq aane lagee dekho sahar |
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1 | 3.57% |
| Multiple Choice Poll. Voters: 28. You may not vote on this poll | |||
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6th June 2014, 06:43 PM
Dear members please do vote for your favrt Shaayri................
also provide your comments what you like about that . Shaad.... |
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6th June 2014, 09:56 PM
namaste
sabhii doston ka bahot bahot shukriyaah jo aap sab ne hissa liya sabhi ki koshishen bahot hi khoob haii. . best of luck aapka ~ Dhaval |
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7th June 2014, 07:34 AM
Bhai Masti ji ne mods ki voting per paabandi lagaa di hai...chaliye aakhri baar hum bhi vote de hi dete hain, agli baar se de na sakenge........
  Waise to honestly mujhe sabhi ghazal / nazm behad pasand aaye..kisi ek ya do ki tareef na mumkin hai...lekin phir bhi kuch hai jo dil ko behad achche lage..3rd 6th aur 11th.. Per maine apna vote sabhi ko de diya hai..kyun ki main nahi chahti kisi bhi member ki vote count zero rahe...sabne mehnat ki hai...sabko meri taraf se tah dil se daad aur shukriyah bhi.. May the best one win. Good luck to everyone. . Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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7th June 2014, 07:53 PM
Aadaab Dosto.... let me add my two cents as well....
I totally agree with Nazneen Sis, everybody should have equal rights to vote... and in any case the moderator's vote is not a special one I mean it does not hold any more weight than an ordinary member's vote. Aur waisay bhi jab chunavaon mayn neta log khud bhi vote daal saktay hayn tou hamaray Mods (jo unsay kayee darja saaf suthray hayn.....(.apparently  )) yay kyon nahee daal sakte..  Ahmad |
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8th June 2014, 12:14 PM
Ab Aa gayaa hu to kyaa qissa e firaaq kahu'n
Khushi Ka pal hai , ise bemazaa nahi'n karte. (NM) Finally I am back to SDC... Thanks to zainy jii....no more beating about the bush...creation no (3) is best one .....whether it's prosody or rhetoric.....spotless ness provides this nazm a winning edge over others. |
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8th June 2014, 12:59 PM
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8th June 2014, 01:05 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th June 2014, 01:07 PM
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Well...baat to aap dono ki bhi sahi hai.... ...Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th June 2014, 01:26 PM
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8th June 2014, 01:28 PM
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vote dene ka haq to har member ko hona chahiye, fir chaahe wo mods hon ya fir doosre members... even mods ke vote bhi normal hain without special powers so i think it can be continued. Shaad..... |
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8th June 2014, 06:44 PM
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9th June 2014, 12:16 PM
Zainy jii , shaad sahib aur ahmad jii....karamnawaazi Ke liye aap logo Ka bahut-2 shukriya
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9th June 2014, 04:03 PM
Sabhi dostoN se ek baar phir Guzarish hai ke apne pasandida ghazals / nazms ko zarur vote dein. .
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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9th June 2014, 06:19 PM
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Kripya mere kahe ko sujhaav ki tarah lein shikaayat ki tarah nahi, aur uss par gaur karna bhi zaruri nahi hai. Aur rahi baat admin ke vote ki powers ki toh phir iss niyam ko hataa dein ki kisne koun si likhi hai kisiko pata nahi hona chahiye, kyunki agar hum admin par viswaas karte hain ki woh naam dekhne ke baad bhi bias nahi honge toh humein apne members par bhi utna hi vishwas hona chahiye. Niyam aur kaayde sab ke liye ek hi hone chahiye, bas yahi main kehna chahti thi. Aap sab ki dost Masti |
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9th June 2014, 06:54 PM
Aur Haan, Main ek baat aap logon se kehna bhool gayi,
Agar yeh mudda sirf maine uthaya aur aap log issey sehmat nahi hain to isey nazarandaaz kar dijiye. kyunki " kuch toh log kahenge, logon ka kaam hai kehna' Apki Dost Masti |
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10th June 2014, 02:05 AM
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Sis the point you've highlighted is absolutely valid and I agree with that... yes there will always be perception of bias by the mods if we have to have a voting rights for the mods whilst hiding the identity of the participants just from the members.... hmmmm.. samassya hai... par samadhaan ki he tou talaash hum bhaee bahan mil-julkar koshish kar rahayn hayn yahaan.... nothing else... its a discussion between grown up family members and I don't see iy any other way bahna... Ahmad |
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10th June 2014, 09:49 AM
Sabhi dostoN ko mera Namste..............
meri yahaN apne do sujhaav rakhnaa chahtaa huN, ho saktaa hai ki maiN galat kah rahaa huN !! 1. TPT me moderators hissa hi naa leN .( kyoki mod ko shyd ptaa hotaa hai ki kis mod ne konsi rachnaa likhi hai) 2. Agar moderators hissaa lete hai to kisi ek (Jaise Zainy ji) ko sabhi members aur moderators(Jo TPT me hissa lenaa chahte hai)apni rachnaa PM kareN. es-se TPT ki kamaan sirf ek moderator ke haath me rahegi, aur sabhi vote kr sakte hai . Vote ka adhikaar sabhi ko honaa chahiye. ye meri apni nizi raai hai, zaruri nhi ki aap sabhi sahmat ho . shukriyaa zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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10th June 2014, 12:00 PM
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Shukriya mujhe samajhne ke liye, Jo samaadhaan Rajiv ji ne bataaya ki sab log including mods apne-2 kalaam ek mod ko bhej dein jo ki participate na kar raha ho, mere mann mein bhi aaya magar iski feasibility kya hai woh shaayd Mods he behtar bataa payenge. Apki Behen Sarika |
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10th June 2014, 02:29 PM
Sabhi ne apne qalam ke behetreen namoono ka muzahera kia hai bhut khoob Allah kre zor e qalam aur ziyadah
Aslam Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum |
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12th June 2014, 01:09 PM
Dear friends. .please give your valuable votes to your favourite ghazals or nazms and make the best one win...
ONLY 3 DAYS LEFT..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th June 2014, 01:21 PM
Hazreen-e-Mehfil ko Adaab...
Tasveer per Tehreer mein hissa lene walay tamaam dostooN ko dilli mubarakbaad.... Wese to sabhi nazmieN aur GhazlieN qaabil-e-tareef hain lekin mera Vote 3, 9 aur 11 k liye hai.. DuaooN k saath ijaazat,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th June 2014, 01:26 PM
sabhii doston se guzaarish hai kj we vote zaroor den.
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13th June 2014, 08:57 PM
Please vote!..................................
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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13th June 2014, 09:18 PM
bahut mushkil si mushkil hai ye vote.
bahut dino se koshish kar raha tha ki vote kar du. to maine ise aise solve karne ki koshish ki pahle best of three choose kiya no-5,6,7 phir criteria banaya with importance in same order as listed 1] kya tehreer us ' tasveer par hai'? 2]kya tight and polished hai? 3]ya metered hai? ghazal no 5 jo mujhe all 11 me sabse acchi lagi thi mere banaye gaye criteria par general lagi..letter ya spirit or both me 'tasveer'follow nahi hui.( my personal opinoin ofc.) ghazal no 7 bahut rawaa hai..magar poori ghazal monotonous lagi mujhe. and sher no 2 also set me back a bit.( my apologies to the writer, that sher may as well be the best sher in others opinion) ghazal no 6 mujhe sab criteria me fit nazar aayi. i can feel the finesse in making it. har lafz toola hua sa hai....i may as welll stic my tongue out and say that it is by an accompolished writer...atleast this is an accompolished work. magar sabko badhaaii..sabne mehnat ki...do taKe ki reply dekar agee jaana nahi chahta tha...sabki mehnat to saaf nazar aa hi rahi hai regards |
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14th June 2014, 04:24 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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14th June 2014, 04:30 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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15th June 2014, 08:40 AM
LAST DAY OF VOTING!!
Dear members please give your valuable votes to the best ghazals/nazms and make sure the best one wins this contest. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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15th June 2014, 01:59 PM
Zainy ji yahaN to sabhi kalamkaar zahen se nikle ahsaasoN se zaheen kalaam liye baithe haiN....-yahaaN to likhne wale hamaari vote se kahiN ooper kii baat liye hue haiN lekin kisi ek ko vote karna hai bahut mushquil sa sabab bana hai...iske lie ab yahaaN taqneeki baat kii jagah ahsaasoN ko hi parkhana hogaa...jo ghazal ke liye badii ahem sii baat hai...aaj maiN zainy ji aapki muhabbatoN ke liye tah-e-dil se mashkoor-o-mamnoon hooN..ki aapne mujhe yahaaN ka raasta dikhaya our yahaaN aakar bade bade shayaroN ke .KhyaaloN ki bulandiyoN ko jaana....jo mere bhi khyaaloN ko roushan kar gaye jiske liye maiN beintaha aabhaari hooN>>
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