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Bedard sanam aapne dard diya nahi karte - 24th May 2009, 11:12 AM
Hi friends .....
Es baar aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hu ek aur chotti c koshish .... aur es baar aap sab ke saath kcuh seekha hai aur ...umeed karti hu aap sab ko neraash nahi karu ..aur dua karti hu ese aapka saath milta rahe ....aapki raaye ka intezzaar raheyga

take care

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Bedard sanam aapne dard diya nahi karte
Diye hue zakhm ko kabhi siya nahi karte

Nafrat hai tumse tumhari har cheez se
Ab tujhe yaad karke hum jiya nahi karte

mohabbat ke naam per dhokha dete ho
aaNsoo ki hum numayesh kiya Nahi karte

sakooN milta tha tujhi se baat karke kabhie
tumhara zikr laboN per ab liya nahi karte

NadaaN dil tujhe khuda bana baitha
bas tere liye ab dua kiya nahi karte

khush to rahoge mujhe dukh dekar bahut
bewafa ab hum ghum piya nahi karte


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24th May 2009, 11:22 AM
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Hi friends .....
Es baar aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hu ek aur chotti c koshish .... aur es baar aap sab ke saath kcuh seekha hai aur ...umeed karti hu aap sab ko neraash nahi karu ..aur dua karti hu ese aapka saath milta rahe ....aapki raaye ka intezzaar raheyga

take care

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Bedard sanam aapne dard diya nahi karte
Diye hue zakhm ko kabhi siya nahi karte

Nafrat hai tumse tumhari har cheez se
Ab tujhe yaad karke hum jiya nahi karte

mohabbat ke naam per dhokha dete ho
aaNsoo ki hum numayesh kiya Nahi karte

sakooN milta tha tujhi se baat karke kabhie
tumhara zikr laboN per ab liya nahi karte

NadaaN dil tujhe khuda bana baitha
bas tere liye ab dua kiya nahi karte

khush to rahoge mujhe dukh dekar bahut
bewafa ab hum ghum piya nahi karte
hay ji main marjawa
bohot bohot khoobsurat
likha aapne,,
aap ka likha dil main utar gaya ji,,
keep it up.

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24th May 2009, 05:07 PM
Mandeep Jii aadab........
Aapki koshish behad kabile tarif hai.......
Aur haan lag bhi raha hai ke aap kafi kuch sikh gayi hai...........

Bedard sanam aapne dard diya nahi karte
Diye hue zakhm ko kabhi siya nahi karte

Matala thoda aur achcha ho sakta tha.....
Nafrat hai tumse tumhari har cheez se
Ab tujhe yaad karke hum jiya nahi karte
Yeh sher kafi tikha laga... aisa laga jaise ghayal dil se nikla ho bahut achche...
mohabbat ke naam per dhokha dete ho
aaNsoo ki hum numayesh kiya Nahi karte
Kya Baat hai... waise Ansuon ki Numaish karni bhi nahi chahiye logon ko dil jalane ka mouka mil jata hai....
sakooN milta tha tujhi se baat karke kabhie
tumhara zikr laboN per ab liya nahi karte
Bahut khoob... Guzri hui baaten bhulne mein hi bhalai hai....
NadaaN dil tujhe khuda bana baitha
bas tere liye ab dua kiya nahi karte
Yeh kuch ajeeb sa laga khuda ke liye dua nahi khuda se dua karte haiN shayad isliye
khush to rahoge mujhe dukh dekar bahut
bewafa ab hum ghum piya nahi karte
Achcha message hai khushfahmi door karne ka............

Bahut hi achchi koshish lagi aapki ahsaas bhi achche hai aur andaze bayan bhi aap sikh gayi aisa lagta hai...

aapki shayari wakai nikhar gayi hai...

Yunhi likhate rahiye duaon ke sath daad kabool kijiye..
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24th May 2009, 07:17 PM
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Mandeep ji

aapki nazm dard ka ehsaas toh deti hai....par sameer ji ne jo sanket diye hai....usse aur bhi acha aapko likhne ki shakti milegi....

kul milakar aapki nazm mujhe padhkar achi lagi...thoda uske ehsaas meri aankho ko namm bhi kar gaye....aise hi likhte rahiye....humse milte rahiye....

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kis baat ka asar hone wala hai
koi raaz aaj teri zubaa se
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24th May 2009, 08:15 PM
Mann jee,
kaise ho aap......
bahot hi khubsoorat aur dil ko chhune wali ghazal kahi hai aapne
saare aashar mujhe pasand aayi

Nafrat hai tumse tumhari har cheez se
Ab tujhe yaad karke hum jiya nahi karte

yeh baat to bilkul sahi hai
jisse nafrat hai uski har chees se nafrat hoti hai
aap ki yeh ghazal mujhe apnasa laga
khus rahiye
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29th May 2009, 09:29 AM
ranii ji
kaise hian aap?

thanx alot jii

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29th May 2009, 09:31 AM
sameer ji

bahut bahut shukriya ...honsala afziye ke liye ...ji haan aap sab doston ka saath hoga toh zarror koshish per deyaan rahega ..

aap bhi saath dete rahye

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31st May 2009, 04:53 PM
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Hi friends .....
Es baar aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hu ek aur chotti c koshish .... aur es baar aap sab ke saath kcuh seekha hai aur ...umeed karti hu aap sab ko neraash nahi karu ..aur dua karti hu ese aapka saath milta rahe ....aapki raaye ka intezzaar raheyga

take care

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Bedard sanam aapne dard diya nahi karte
Diye hue zakhm ko kabhi siya nahi karte

Nafrat hai tumse tumhari har cheez se
Ab tujhe yaad karke hum jiya nahi karte

mohabbat ke naam per dhokha dete ho
aaNsoo ki hum numayesh kiya Nahi karte

sakooN milta tha tujhi se baat karke kabhie
tumhara zikr laboN per ab liya nahi karte

NadaaN dil tujhe khuda bana baitha
bas tere liye ab dua kiya nahi karte

khush to rahoge mujhe dukh dekar bahut
bewafa ab hum ghum piya nahi karte

Mandeep,

Aap ki yeh koshish mujhe bahot acchi lagi

aise hee likhte rahiye... khush rahiye


aap ki Dost

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5th June 2009, 08:52 AM
naresh jiii

kaise hain aap?

aapka bahut bahut shukriya...

yu hi saath dete rahyega

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diya jiiii

kaise hain aap?

aapko post per dekh kar bahut khushi hue....

ese saath dete rahe... aur humarii koshish jaari hai

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5th June 2009, 08:56 AM
janumanu jii

kaise hainaap?

aacha laga aapko yahan dekh kar ... koshish karugiii aur aap explain karte aur bhi aacha lagta

saath dete rahyega

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5th June 2009, 08:57 AM
purvi

kaise hain aap?

koshish pasand karne ke liye bhaut bahut shukriya

saath dete rahye

aapki dost

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