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Kya mujhe yaad karenge woh log? - 9th October 2008, 07:25 AM

aapki nazar ek aur koshish


Aate hai yu humari zindagi mein
Fir pardesi bankar chhod jaatey hai log

Jab dena nahi saath hummara
Esa rishta kiyu jhod jaate hai log

Manzil paane hasraat jagah kar
Jhoote khawabon ke mahal baante hai log

Kisi ko chahna ek khata to hogi
Yu hi nahi saza dete hai log

Guzarish hai ae khuda meri
Kiyu baaton se azmaate hai log

Kise du ilzam aye dil-e-nadan
Waqt insaan ko badal dete hai log

Mein to pani hu mujhe beh jaane do
Paathar banke raaste roke lete hai log

Saaton mujhe.. ek roz chali jaugi mein
Kya mujhe yaad karenge woh log?



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9th October 2008, 07:44 AM

DEar mandeep, ahsaas acche lage aapki poetry ke, poetry mein dard aur kisi ki be-rukhi saaf nazar aaye.....dear yaad to bewafa bhi karte haiN, chahe pyar se yaad kareN ya phir.....!

kush raho
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9th October 2008, 08:19 AM

Dearest Di
Kaise hain aap? Pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya

Koshish jarhi hai ..khush rehne ki
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yu saath deete rahye
aapki
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10th October 2008, 08:56 PM

Aadaab Mandeep ji aaj pehli baar aapka kalaam padha bahut accha laga ese hi apne khayalo se hame rubaru karate rahiye aur yanha ate raha kijiye meri daad kubool farmaye.n...........TC


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10th April 2009, 06:49 AM

Hi Kashiff ji

kaise hain aap? aap ko pasnad aayi yeh jaan kar behaat khushi hue ..yu hi saath dete rahe

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19th April 2009, 11:15 AM

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aapki nazar ek aur koshish


Aate hai yu humari zindagi mein
Fir pardesi bankar chhod jaatey hai log

Jab dena nahi saath hummara
Esa rishta kiyu jhod jaate hai log

Manzil paane hasraat jagah kar
Jhoote khawabon ke mahal baante hai log

Kisi ko chahna ek khata to hogi
Yu hi nahi saza dete hai log

Guzarish hai ae khuda meri
Kiyu baaton se azmaate hai log

Kise du ilzam aye dil-e-nadan
Waqt insaan ko badal dete hai log

Mein to pani hu mujhe beh jaane do
Paathar banke raaste roke lete hai log

Saaton mujhe.. ek roz chali jaugi mein
Kya mujhe yaad karenge woh log?

superb mandeep ji.............excellent feelings

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5th June 2009, 09:07 AM

zainy ji

kaise hain aap?

thanx alot...its always nice to see u

saath dete rahye aur comments bhi

take care

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