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3rd June 2009, 09:21 AM
Aadaab ...Doston
hamesha ki tarah kohish karti hu aacha likhne ki aur pesh karnii ki bhi..
aaj meien kuch technically zehaan mein rakh kar nhai likha... bas kuch ehsaas hain so rok na paayi post karti hue...
umeed karti hu aap aapni raaye zarror baatayega intezaar rahega
take care
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kuch sawal aapni kismat se kar baithe
kiyu tumse mohabaat kar baithe
khushi se aapni zindagi je rahi thi
kiyu tumse mulakaat kar baithe
kuch aur soochti toh zindagi sawar jaati
kiyu tumse dil ki baat kar baithe
kash samajh leta nadaan dil mera
kiyu khud se baghaawat kar baithe
ae khudaa dilki awaaaz ek bar sunleti
kiyu aapse sikayaat kar baithe
milte rahenge sabhi tarah ke logg
kiyu aapne bure halaat kar baithe
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~"REBELLIOUS IN LOVE"~
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3rd June 2009, 09:25 AM
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Originally Posted by mann_chand
Aadaab ...Doston
hamesha ki tarah kohish karti hu aacha likhne ki aur pesh karnii ki bhi..
aaj meien kuch technically zehaan mein rakh kar nhai likha... bas kuch ehsaas hain so rok na paayi post karti hue...
umeed karti hu aap aapni raaye zarror baatayega intezaar rahega
take care
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kuch sawal aapni kismat se kar baithe
kiyu tumse mohabaat kar baithe
khushi se aapni zindagi je rahi thi
kiyu tumse mulakaat kar baithe
kuch aur soochti toh zindagi sawar jaati
kiyu tumse dil ki baat kar baithe
kash samajh leta nadaan dil mera
kiyu khud se baghaawat kar baithe
ae khudaa dilki awaaaz ek bar sunleti
kiyu aapse sikayaat kar baithe
milte rahenge sabhi tarah ke logg
kiyu aapne bure halaat kar baithe
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hmmm....Mandeep ji
achchca likha hai aap ne....pata chalta hai ki yeh aap ki dil ki awaaz hi hai
good work. keep writing
Love n Regards
Praneeta
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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5th June 2009, 09:01 AM
parii ji
kaise hain aap?
its nice to see u here.... thanx alot
saath dete rahye
take care
love ya
aapki dost
mandeep
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5th June 2009, 01:21 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mann_chand
Aadaab ...Doston
hamesha ki tarah kohish karti hu aacha likhne ki aur pesh karnii ki bhi..
aaj meien kuch technically zehaan mein rakh kar nhai likha... bas kuch ehsaas hain so rok na paayi post karti hue...
umeed karti hu aap aapni raaye zarror baatayega intezaar rahega
take care
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kuch sawal aapni kismat se kar baithe
kiyu tumse mohabaat kar baithe
khushi se aapni zindagi je rahi thi
kiyu tumse mulakaat kar baithe
kuch aur soochti toh zindagi sawar jaati
kiyu tumse dil ki baat kar baithe
kash samajh leta nadaan dil mera
kiyu khud se baghaawat kar baithe
ae khudaa dilki awaaaz ek bar sunleti
kiyu aapse sikayaat kar baithe
milte rahenge sabhi tarah ke logg
kiyu aapne bure halaat kar baithe
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Bahut hi khoobsurat aur awesome peshkash hai Mandy..... Padh ke bahut achha laga...
Yun hi likhte rahiye...
Reps +++ added...
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9th June 2009, 08:45 AM
Amit jii
kaise hain aap? koshish pesh karne ke liye tahe dil se shukriya ... aapko aapnii post per dekh kar bahutt aacha laga ...
aapsab ka saath hoga koshish karti rahugii behtaar likhne ki
yu hi saath dete rahye
aapki dost
mandy
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11th June 2009, 02:04 PM
mandeep bahut saare sawal uthe hai magar sabke ans mile jaruri ni hai..
acha hai
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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12th June 2009, 05:22 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mann_chand
Aadaab ...Doston
hamesha ki tarah kohish karti hu aacha likhne ki aur pesh karnii ki bhi..
aaj meien kuch technically zehaan mein rakh kar nhai likha... bas kuch ehsaas hain so rok na paayi post karti hue...
umeed karti hu aap aapni raaye zarror baatayega intezaar rahega
take care
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kuch sawal aapni kismat se kar baithe
kiyu tumse mohabaat kar baithe
khushi se aapni zindagi je rahi thi
kiyu tumse mulakaat kar baithe
kuch aur soochti toh zindagi sawar jaati
kiyu tumse dil ki baat kar baithe
kash samajh leta nadaan dil mera
kiyu khud se baghaawat kar baithe
ae khudaa dilki awaaaz ek bar sunleti
kiyu aapse sikayaat kar baithe
milte rahenge sabhi tarah ke logg
kiyu aapne bure halaat kar baithe
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bahut derd hai in ahsaas me........ sahi kaha hai jab kisi se mahbbat ho jaati hai or phir wah zindagi se kahin door chala jata hai to aisee hi kyaal zehan me utete hain....
dil se humari daad kabool kare.......
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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12th June 2009, 05:59 PM
Mann jee,
bahot achhi ghazal hai dard saaf nazar aarahi hai
kash samajh leta nadaan dil mera
kiyu khud se baghaawat kar baithe
yeh sher hume achha laga
apna khayal rakhiyega
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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14th June 2009, 12:09 AM
Mandeep ji .....agar ye nazm ke ehsaas-e-sawal hai...toh bahut ache hai....khuda na kare aapke jeevan mai ye sawal ho.....main kabhi nahi chahunga....aap humesha khush rahe....aise hi sundar rachnao se mehfil sazati rahe...bahut acha likha hai aapne....nazm ke sabhi sher ache lage padhkar......
vaise mandeep ji .....tamam zindgi ek sawal hi toh hai....iske samikaran hal karne mai umar nikal jaati hai....par kuch hal ho jaate hai....kuch reh bhi jaate hai.....magar zindgi yunhi chalti rehti hai....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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14th June 2009, 10:31 AM
kuch sawal aapni kismat se kar baithe
kiyu tumse mohabaat kar baithe
khushi se aapni zindagi je rahi thi
kiyu tumse mulakaat kar baithe
bohat khoob mandeep ji.......bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain.......yuhi likhti rahiye....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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14th June 2009, 11:38 AM
Hii Mandeep Jii!
Bahut achchi koshish Rahi hai........
aapne apni kismat se kiy hua sawal bhi ek dum sahi hai.........
Ahsaas achche lage aur bayan bhi achcha kiya hai.................
Likhati rahiye
khush rahiye.........
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14th June 2009, 11:44 AM
mandeep jee:
namaste!
aik behteriN koShiSh par dilii daad-o-mubaaraQbaad aapko! YuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee .. bazm ki raunaq afzA'ii karte rahiye!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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18th June 2009, 08:31 AM
sakhi jii
aapko yahandekh kar aacha laga ...
aapki baat b sehi hain...
saath dete rahye
take care
aapki
mandeep
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18th June 2009, 08:33 AM
shaan jii
bahut bahut shukriya !!!
yu hi saath dete rahyye
take care
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18th June 2009, 09:58 AM
Dear Mann
Tumne jo ehesaas hum sab se share kiye hai...bahot hee acche hai...
yunhi likha kijiye
khush rahiye
aap ki dost
Purvi
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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12th August 2009, 09:29 PM
Dearest Diya,
Aapko ghazal pasand aayi yeh jaan kar aacha laga ... bahut bhaut shukriya!!!
yu ki saath dete rahye...
take care
tumhari di
mandeep
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Mann jee,
bahot achhi ghazal hai dard saaf nazar aarahi hai
kash samajh leta nadaan dil mera
kiyu khud se baghaawat kar baithe
yeh sher hume achha laga
apna khayal rakhiyega
Diya
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17th August 2009, 01:06 PM
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Originally Posted by mann_chand
Aadaab ...Doston
hamesha ki tarah kohish karti hu aacha likhne ki aur pesh karnii ki bhi..
aaj meien kuch technically zehaan mein rakh kar nhai likha... bas kuch ehsaas hain so rok na paayi post karti hue...
umeed karti hu aap aapni raaye zarror baatayega intezaar rahega
take care
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kuch sawal aapni kismat se kar baithe
kiyu tumse mohabaat kar baithe
khushi se aapni zindagi je rahi thi
kiyu tumse mulakaat kar baithe
kuch aur soochti toh zindagi sawar jaati
kiyu tumse dil ki baat kar baithe
kash samajh leta nadaan dil mera
kiyu khud se baghaawat kar baithe
ae khudaa dilki awaaaz ek bar sunleti
kiyu aapse sikayaat kar baithe
milte rahenge sabhi tarah ke logg
kiyu aapne bure halaat kar baithe
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mannchand ji....aadaab..
meri nazar aj apki is ghazal par padhi...bahut accha laga.....
anjane me maine apka radeef ue kar liya hai....mujhe pata nahin tha.....
nahin to apki footprint mai apne post me jurur bayan karta...kyuki maine bhi ye radeef use kiya hai...
ab to jo hona tha ho gaya...kaan pakad kar sirf ye kah sakta hu" bekhudi me gunah kar baithe"...
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5th October 2009, 11:09 PM
Dear Zainy jii,
Kaise hain aap? jii bahut bahut shukriya ..umeed karti hu ese hi saath dete rahye ...
take care
aapki
mandeep
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5th October 2009, 11:13 PM
Hii Sameer ji..
Aadaab ...
JII aaj bahut dino baad aapko reply de paa rahi hu ..
aapko koshish pasaNd aayii yeh jaan kar aacha laga ..
yu hi saathdete rahye
take care
mandeep
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2nd December 2009, 02:09 AM
Dhaval ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya ...aapko dekh kar aaacha laga !!!
saath dete rahega ....
aap aapna kahyal rakhega
aapki
Mandeep
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29th December 2009, 03:38 AM
Purvi ji,
bahut bahut sukhriya ...
yu hi saath dete rahye
take care
aapki dost
mandeep
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