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11th January 2010, 10:08 PM
Sdc ke sabhii dostoN ko mera Aadaab!!!
ek aur chotii koshish ke saath aapkii nazaar kar rahii hu .. ummed karti hu aap ese aapna keemti waqt dengey aapkii raaye ka intezaar hai... ==================================== baN gaye ho dil ke mehmaN dheere dheere dil meiN saje kaye armaaN dheere dheere khamosh ho jaata hai pal tere biN jaise dil hua wairaaN dheere dheere aapko dekhte deewaNee hotey gaye ab aap kare koi farmaaN dheere dheere vishwas,pyaar aur umrbhar ka saath ho dua kabool kare bhagwaaN dheere dheere "Mann" Ne chuNNa haiN humsafar tumhe baNe suNe dil ki pehchaaN dheere dheere ==================================== ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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11th January 2010, 10:31 PM
Mandeep jee:
SSA aik beHteriN koShiSh rahiiN aapki aur se! umdaah Khayaal ! yeh Sher mujhe bahot hi pasaNd aayaa,,,! Quote:
YuuNhi liKhate raheN... DheroN saarii daad! KhuSh raheN...apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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11th January 2010, 10:48 PM
Mandeep Ji...Namaste ! Bahut saral aur seedhe saadhe shabdon mai achi tarha khayal ko bayaan kiya hai aapne........ yeh do sher dil ke jyada kareeb rahe..... khamosh ho jaata hai pal tere biN jaise dil hua wairaaN dheere dheere vishwas,pyaar aur umrbhar ka saath ho dua kabool kare bhagwaaN dheere dheere yuhi likhte rahiye....dil se daad hazir hai.... apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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12th January 2010, 02:29 PM
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Manii Di , aapki Ghazal bahut bahut achhi lagi saare ashar dil mein utar gaye itni pyaari ghazal keliye daad kabul kijiye apne ehesaas se ru-ba-ru karate rahiye aapki Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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12th January 2010, 02:37 PM
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apki ghazal behad pasand aayi.......... daad hazir hai........... regards |
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12th January 2010, 03:36 PM
Mandeep Jii,,
Boht khoob likha hai aap ne, Tamam ashaar daad k qaabil haiN, Daad haazir hai...qabool kijiye.....  Younhi likhtey rahiye,, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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12th January 2010, 03:44 PM
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kaisi haiN aap..? baN gaye ho dil ke mehmaN dheere dheere dil meiN saje kaye armaaN dheere dheere yeh sheyr behad pasand aaya.... aise hi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye... duaoN ke saath ijaazat.... aapka dost, vikram... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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12th January 2010, 04:14 PM
Mandeep Jee Aadaab!
Kaisi hai aap? bahut hi khubsura gazal kahi hia aapne, ahsaas kafi umda rahe aur sabhi sher achche la yeh sher to behad khoob laga.... Dil se daad kabool kijiye vishwas,pyaar aur umrbhar ka saath ho dua kabool kare bhagwaaN dheere dheere likhati rhaiye, khush rhaiye Khuda Hafez............... 
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12th January 2010, 07:46 PM
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waah bhut khooob mand_chand jii bhut hi khoobsurat ghazal, likhti rahiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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13th January 2010, 07:25 PM
Dhaval ji,
tahe dil se shukriya ..... aapko yahan dekh kar aacha lagaa ... yu hi saath dete rahye..... aapna khayal rakhiye duaon ke saath aapki mandeep Quote:
~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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13th January 2010, 07:31 PM
Naresh ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya ... aapne hamesha saath diya hain aur umeed hai ese hi dete raheyy ....aur koshish karugii aur behtaar pesh kar saaku.. duaon ke saath mandeep Quote:
~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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18th January 2010, 07:28 AM
DeaR Dia,
Koshish pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya sweetie... lekin mein unko esa kuch nahi kahugii kiyu I wud love to be patii vartha patnii ...hehehe yu hi saath detii rahoo with lots of love tumharii manii di Quote:
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18th January 2010, 01:26 PM
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mujhe sabhi sher pasand aaye.. eise hi likhti rahiye.. |
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19th January 2010, 08:35 PM
Zidd jii,
bahut bahut shukriyaaa ji yu hi saath dete rahye khush rahye duaon ke saath mandeep Quote:
~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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19th January 2010, 08:37 PM
Hassan ji,
Bahut bahut shukriyaa, daad kabool hain yu hi saath dete rahyee duaon ke saath mandeep Quote:
~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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19th January 2010, 08:40 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob daad dil se hazir hai is sundar rachna ke liye kubul farmaayen aise hi likhti rahen aapka dost ishk Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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19th January 2010, 08:47 PM
oye meri manno
dil ki baat lafzo.n mein bayaaN ki...bahut khoob..... "woh ban jaye teri jaan dheere dheere, tu ban jaye uski pahchaan dheere dheere" mera ashirwaad har pal tere saath hai.....tu hamesha yu hi pyar bhare geet gungunati rahe....ameeN huggs diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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