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Ruth kar tumse, kaise jee paugii mein... - 8th July 2006, 06:21 AM

hi friends....
main kuch samye ke liye online naa aapayee.... aur i think i must have missed many post to be read ..... aur na hi kuch post kar paye thi.... aaj kuch post karne ki koshish mein hu aur umeed karti hu ... aapko yeh koshish .... pasand aayegii.... aap sab ki raye ka intezaar rahega

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Ruth kar tumse, kaise jee paugii mein
Dhuur rehkar bhi tumse, kaise bhul paugii mein
Jin ankhoon mein they tum sapnay bankar unhi ankhoon mein sailab, kaise laugiii mein
Guzar gaya hai waqt phir bhi tum aaoge, kaise dil ko samjaogii mein
Thak se gaye hai log mujhe dekhkar, kaise kahu unko tere pyaar ki deewanii hu mein.

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9th July 2006, 01:03 PM

Ruth kar tumse, kaise jee paugii mein,
Dhuur rehkar bhi tumse, kaise bhul paugii mein..

Jin ankhoon mein they tum sapnay bankar,
unhi ankhoon mein sailab, kaise laugiii mein..

Mandeep jee,

hello!

khoobsuurat sher hai.. Pyaar ke saath dard kee bhee jhalak mehsoos ho rahi hai..

YuuN hee likhte rahiye.. daad haazir hai..

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12th July 2006, 01:41 AM

Anjana Rahi ji,

thanx ... yeh jaan kaar khushi hue ....aaapko meri koshissh pasand aaayii ... aap yu hi saath dete rahe


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12th July 2006, 06:22 AM

mandeep ji aapne bhaut achha likha hai aur pulkit ki didi hai to meri bhi khas rishta apne aap judh gaya aapse

pahli baar padha hai aapko achha laga padhna ki aise rishte bahala kaha toote hai unke bina jina kaha mumkin hai

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hi - 15th July 2006, 06:51 PM

bahut short and sweet share hai aap ka ,aap ko pahlibar padha achha laga aise hi likhti rahe yahi ummid karta hu.
dil se daad kabool kare
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Ruth kar tumse, kaise jee paugii mein
Dhuur rehkar bhi tumse, kaise bhul paugii mein
Jin ankhoon mein they tum sapnay bankar unhi ankhoon mein sailab, kaise laugiii mein
Guzar gaya hai waqt phir bhi tum aaoge, kaise dil ko samjaogii mein
Thak se gaye hai log mujhe dekhkar, kaise kahu unko tere pyaar ki deewanii hu mein.

kya baat hai....

Dear Mandy,

Kaisi ho? hope acche se hongi....

bahut hi sweet likha hai tumne... obviously apne chand ke liye likha hoga... chalo accha hai....aise hi likhti raha karo... apna khayal rakho acche se...


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Re: Ruth kar tumse, kaise jee paugii mein... - 18th July 2006, 03:17 PM

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hi friends....
main kuch samye ke liye online naa aapayee.... aur i think i must have missed many post to be read ..... aur na hi kuch post kar paye thi.... aaj kuch post karne ki koshish mein hu aur umeed karti hu ... aapko yeh koshish .... pasand aayegii.... aap sab ki raye ka intezaar rahega

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Ruth kar tumse, kaise jee paugii mein
Dhuur rehkar bhi tumse, kaise bhul paugii mein
Jin ankhoon mein they tum sapnay bankar unhi ankhoon mein sailab, kaise laugiii mein
Guzar gaya hai waqt phir bhi tum aaoge, kaise dil ko samjaogii mein
Thak se gaye hai log mujhe dekhkar, kaise kahu unko tere pyaar ki deewanii hu mein.

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hello mann ji

appki shayri maine paddi hai bahut badiya laggi. usmai se kuch ka jawaab dene ki gustakhi kar rahi hu:

rutogey to managey, royogey to hasaeygey,
chatey hai hum tumey, to phir andehrey mai,
tumey kaise akele chod jaeygey"


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20th February 2010, 02:35 AM

Shardha ji,

aaj kaffi lamhey samey baad aapnii post dekhi aur reply karna bhul gayiii ... sorry for that...

jii bilkul sehi kaha aapney .. rishtey bane ho yeh tute ho .. zindagii mein khass jagah bana lete hainn.....

jii haan Pulkit ko credit jaata hai jis ke thru Im very much close to this site

take care of urself....

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Manish ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya .... yu hi saath dete rahye....

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daad kabool hain

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hi friends....
main kuch samye ke liye online naa aapayee.... aur i think i must have missed many post to be read ..... aur na hi kuch post kar paye thi.... aaj kuch post karne ki koshish mein hu aur umeed karti hu ... aapko yeh koshish .... pasand aayegii.... aap sab ki raye ka intezaar rahega

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Ruth kar tumse, kaise jee paugii mein
Dhuur rehkar bhi tumse, kaise bhul paugii mein
Jin ankhoon mein they tum sapnay bankar unhi ankhoon mein sailab, kaise laugiii mein
Guzar gaya hai waqt phir bhi tum aaoge, kaise dil ko samjaogii mein
Thak se gaye hai log mujhe dekhkar, kaise kahu unko tere pyaar ki deewanii hu mein.

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