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tum kabhi majboor na ho - 3rd December 2009, 09:03 PM
Dear Friends,

SDC ke saabhie doston ko mera Aadaab. aaj ek aur koshish se saath hazir hu, umeed karti hu koshish ko hamesha ki tarah aapki raaye baataiye

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tum kabhi majboor na ho
mujhse kabhi door na ho

kar sake jo judaa humko
aisa kabhi dastoor na ho

dil na tode dil kisi ka
gum mein kabhi choor na ho

lamha lamha jeete hai tumse
tere bin kabhi saroor na ho

tumse hai khushiyaan humdum
aur judaii kabhi manzoor na ho

tumse hai roshan yeh jahan mera
tumbin "deep" mein kabhi noor na ho


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3rd December 2009, 10:51 PM
Mandeep Ji...aapke bahut pyaare aur maasoom se ehsaas....dil ko bheego gaye....bahut khubsurat likha hai....khayal aur bayaani lajawaab lagi mujhe.... har ashaar khub bane hai....aise hi likhte rahiye...

tamam ghazal taarif ke kaabil hai...maqtaa mujhe khaas pasand aaya...

itna khubsurat likhne ke liye tahe dil se daad hazir hai....kabul farmaaye....

khush rahiye...
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....



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4th December 2009, 12:27 AM

tum kabhi majboor na ho
mujhse kabhi door na ho

kar sake jo judaa humko
aisa kabhi dastoor na ho

dil na tode dil kisi ka
gum mein kabhi choor na ho

lamha lamha jeete hai tumse
tere bin kabhi saroor na ho

tumse hai khushiyaan humdum
aur judaii kabhi manzoor na ho

tumse hai roshan yeh jahan mera
tumbin "deep" mein kabhi noor na ho


deep ji .....
behad behad khoobsuart ... ahsaas khyaal aur byaan unka
kar sake jo judaa humko
aisa kabhi dastoor na ho

kya kahne

dil na tode dil kisi ka
gum mein kabhi choor na ho

dil na tode dil kisi ka
bahut pasand aayaa

likhti rahe
khush rahe
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Love 5th December 2009, 01:52 AM
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Dear Friends,

SDC ke saabhie doston ko mera Aadaab. aaj ek aur koshish se saath hazir hu, umeed karti hu koshish ko hamesha ki tarah aapki raaye baataiye

=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=

tum kabhi majboor na ho
mujhse kabhi door na ho

kar sake jo judaa humko
aisa kabhi dastoor na ho

dil na tode dil kisi ka
gum mein kabhi choor na ho

lamha lamha jeete hai tumse
tere bin kabhi saroor na ho

tumse hai khushiyaan humdum
aur judaii kabhi manzoor na ho

tumse hai roshan yeh jahan mera
tumbin "deep" mein kabhi noor na ho


=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=
Mandeep jii,
Kaisi haiN aap?
Bahut achha likha hai aapne...
Maqta bahut badhiya laga...
Aise hi likhti rahiye......
Khush rahiye......

Aapka dost,
Vikram

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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5th December 2009, 11:58 AM
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Dear Friends,

SDC ke saabhie doston ko mera Aadaab. aaj ek aur koshish se saath hazir hu, umeed karti hu koshish ko hamesha ki tarah aapki raaye baataiye

=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=

tum kabhi majboor na ho
mujhse kabhi door na ho

kar sake jo judaa humko
aisa kabhi dastoor na ho

dil na tode dil kisi ka
gum mein kabhi choor na ho

lamha lamha jeete hai tumse
tere bin kabhi saroor na ho

tumse hai khushiyaan humdum
aur judaii kabhi manzoor na ho

tumse hai roshan yeh jahan mera
tumbin "deep" mein kabhi noor na ho



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Bahut pyare ehsaah h mandeep di,
aapne unhe bakhoobi lafzo me dhala h....
   
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11th December 2009, 09:04 PM
Naresh ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya .. koshish ko sahrane ke liye bahut shukarguzar hu, yu hi saath dete raheye ..

Take care...

duaon ke saath

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11th December 2009, 09:19 PM
Dear mani di
kaise ho aap..?

snowman to bana rahe ho na

aapki yeh rachna hume bahut achhi lagi
bahut hi pyaara ehesaas hai
youn hi kahte rahiye mahfil ko Roshan karte rahiye
daad dil se

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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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11th December 2009, 09:34 PM
Mandeep jee Aadaab.........

Aapki yeh koshish bahut achchi hai, kam lafzon mein kuch kehna bahut mushkil hai per aapne achchi koshish ki hai .......kuch ek sher achche lage...

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12th December 2009, 02:19 AM
Mandeep jee Allah kare woh sab ho jo aapne chaha hain......achchi peshkash.

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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Dear Friends,

SDC ke saabhie doston ko mera Aadaab. aaj ek aur koshish se saath hazir hu, umeed karti hu koshish ko hamesha ki tarah aapki raaye baataiye

=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=~=

tum kabhi majboor na ho
mujhse kabhi door na ho

kar sake jo judaa humko
aisa kabhi dastoor na ho

dil na tode dil kisi ka
gum mein kabhi choor na ho

lamha lamha jeete hai tumse
tere bin kabhi saroor na ho

tumse hai khushiyaan humdum
aur judaii kabhi manzoor na ho

tumse hai roshan yeh jahan mera
tumbin "deep" mein kabhi noor na ho



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Hello mani G ,................ bahut hi khubsurat rachna likhi hai aapne ..... bahut hi khub

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13th December 2009, 09:51 AM
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bohat hi accha likha hai ,,, mujeh aapka likha ek ek lafz ba dil behad passand hai...

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29th December 2009, 03:34 AM
Vikas ji,

bahut bahut sukriya ..

yu hi saath dete raye

aapna khayal rakhye

aapki dost

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umse hai roshan yeh jahan mera
tumbin "deep" mein kabhi noor na ho


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tumse hai roshan ye jahaa.n mera
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Vikraam ji,

ssa ji,

mein theek hu....koshish pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa

yu hi saath dete rahyee

duaon ke saath

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