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aur "MaNN" ko tumse pyaar hua.... - 21st December 2009, 09:20 PM

Azeez Doston,

SDC sabhii dostoon to mera Aadaab !!!
aaj fir hazir hu ek aur koshish ke saath ummed kartii hu aap hamesha ki tarah aapnii raaye ke saath nivazeegeye........

take care ....




~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~
tumse dil-e-iqraar hua
ese mohabaat-e-izhaar hua

pal pal guzarta chala gaya
har kadam tumpe itibaar hua

ab duur reh Na paayegey
bahut kathiN iNtezaar hua

aye khuda dete uNka saath
aur lage dua'on ka asaar hua

kabhi patjhad,kabhi hue barsaat
aur fir mausum-e-bahaar hua

tumhari adaa'oN ka dil iN'aam hua
aur "MaNN" ko tumse pyaar hua

~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~




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21st December 2009, 09:47 PM

Mandeep jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

bazm meiN aapki taazaah koShiSh naZar nawaaz hu'ii.. bahot hi Khoob ehsaas! dil ko Chhu gayiiN aapki yeh koShiSh! mere dil se DheroN saari daad aur duaaeN!

yuuNhi bazm ki raunaQ baRhaate raheN,, liKhate raheN aise hi!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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21st December 2009, 10:23 PM

Mandeep Ji...Namaste ! aapne bahut khubsurat pyar bhare khayal pesh kiye hai....aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar dil ko chhu gaye....adaayegi bahut umada rahi....yuhi likhte rahiye.....dil se daad hazir hai.....kabul farmaaye....

apna khayal rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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22nd December 2009, 11:04 AM

Mandeep Jii,,

Aap ki tehreer aik song k theme per hai,
lekin abhi zehn mein nahi aa raha,,
shayed yeh song hai "dil ko tum se pyar hua, pehli baar hua..."

Khair..... aap ne boht hi acha likha hai,
Phad kar achaa laga,,,

Likhte rahiye,,

Regardz,,


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22nd December 2009, 01:28 PM

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Azeez Doston,

SDC sabhii dostoon to mera Aadaab !!!
aaj fir hazir hu ek aur koshish ke saath ummed kartii hu aap hamesha ki tarah aapnii raaye ke saath nivazeegeye........

take care ....




~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~
tumse dil-e-iqraar hua
ese mohabaat-e-izhaar hua

pal pal guzarta chala gaya
har kadam tumpe itibaar hua

ab duur reh Na paayegey
bahut kathiN iNtezaar hua

aye khuda dete uNka saath
aur lage dua'on ka asaar hua

kabhi patjhad,kabhi hue barsaat
aur fir mausum-e-bahaar hua

tumhari adaa'oN ka dil iN'aam hua
aur "MaNN" ko tumse pyaar hua

~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~*~~~

SSA..mandeep jii,
behad khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai jii aapne....
hme bahut pasand aayee....
aise hi likhte rahiye...
khush rahiye....
duaoN ke saath ijaazat..

aapka dost,
vikram....


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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22nd December 2009, 03:05 PM

Mandeep Jee Aadaab...........

Kafi achcha likha hai aapne, apke ahsaas khulker samne aarahe hai........
Likhati rhaiye,
Khush rhaiye,
Khuda Hafez,


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29th December 2009, 03:18 AM

Dhaval ji,

namastee..

main aachi hu... aap baatye aap kaise hain? koshish pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ....

yu hi saath dete rahye

take care

duaon ke saath

aapki dost

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11th January 2010, 08:07 AM

Naresh ji,

bahut bahut shukriya ... aapne hamesha saath diya hai aur yu hi saath dete rahyegaa....

duaon ke saath

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11th January 2010, 03:06 PM

Dear mani di,
nayasaal mubarak ho .
itni pyaari ghazal dard mein kyun Di..?
ghazal bahut achhi kahi hai aapne
ehesaas ka to kya kahna
saare aashar apnasa laga
daad kabul kijiye

khus rahiye
aapki sis
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Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai


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