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दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया. - 17th September 2011, 03:29 AM

जो न सोचा था वो पल आया है
प्यार में सब ही तो गंवाया है
तेरे होने का भरम टूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
मैंने समझा की तुम साथ में हो
एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

कितने अरमान से रखा था तुझे
अपने सीने में छिपा कर मैंने
प्यार मेरा तो बस झूट -मूठ गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

जो भांप लेते हो तुम भाव मेरे
फिर न समझी क्यों मेरी धड़कन
न वर्त्तमान है , संग भूत गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया


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जो न सोचा था वो पल आया है
प्यार में सब ही तो गंवाया है
तेरे होने का भरम टूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
मैंने समझा की तुम साथ में हो
एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

कितने अरमान से रखा था तुझे
अपने सीने में छिपा कर मैंने
प्यार मेरा तो बस झूट -मूठ गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

जो भांप लेते हो तुम भाव मेरे
फिर न समझी क्यों मेरी धड़कन
न वर्त्तमान है , संग भूत गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया
Bahut Sundar ... Sakhi Ji !

तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
मैंने समझा की तुम साथ में हो
एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.


Nice Lines ... Very Touching .... Dil se Daad ............ !




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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जो न सोचा था वो पल आया है
प्यार में सब ही तो गंवाया है
तेरे होने का भरम टूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
मैंने समझा की तुम साथ में हो
एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

कितने अरमान से रखा था तुझे
अपने सीने में छिपा कर मैंने
प्यार मेरा तो बस झूट -मूठ गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

जो भांप लेते हो तुम भाव मेरे
फिर न समझी क्यों मेरी धड़कन
न वर्त्तमान है , संग भूत गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया
waah saki bahut achy..

shuru ke misre to ek dam behr mai haiN... overall bahut achy flow maiN hai nazm ............

bahut nayaa sa laga .......... very very nice really
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जो न सोचा था वो पल आया है
प्यार में सब ही तो गंवाया है
तेरे होने का भरम टूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
मैंने समझा की तुम साथ में हो
एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

कितने अरमान से रखा था तुझे
अपने सीने में छिपा कर मैंने
प्यार मेरा तो बस झूट -मूठ गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

जो भांप लेते हो तुम भाव मेरे
फिर न समझी क्यों मेरी धड़कन
न वर्त्तमान है , संग भूत गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया
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तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
मैंने समझा की तुम साथ में हो
एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

कितने अरमान से रखा था तुझे
अपने सीने में छिपा कर मैंने
प्यार मेरा तो बस झूट -मूठ गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.



Bohat khoob.....

Bohat zyada apne se lage aapke vichaar, aapki is kavita me.........

yuhi likhti rahiye sakhi ji.....





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Bahut Sundar ... Sakhi Ji !

तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
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एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
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Nice Lines ... Very Touching .... Dil se Daad ............ !
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apne saraha aur yahan waqt dia acha laga...

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waah saki bahut achy..

shuru ke misre to ek dam behr mai haiN... overall bahut achy flow maiN hai nazm ............

bahut nayaa sa laga .......... very very nice really
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Nice work. Thanks for sharing.....................
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You define simple expressions sakhi always.. With solid impression..

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जो न सोचा था वो पल आया है
प्यार में सब ही तो गंवाया है
तेरे होने का भरम टूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

तुम साथ न थे, मगर फिर भी
मैंने समझा की तुम साथ में हो
एक तेरा आसरा था छूट गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

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प्यार मेरा तो बस झूट -मूठ गया
दिल तेरे साथ था पर रूठ गया.

जो भांप लेते हो तुम भाव मेरे
फिर न समझी क्यों मेरी धड़कन
न वर्त्तमान है , संग भूत गया
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sakhi ji
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bahut hee khoob .... bahut sundar kavita ..... dil se daad
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apne saraha acha laga


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Bohat khoob.....

Bohat zyada apne se lage aapke vichaar, aapki is kavita me.........

yuhi likhti rahiye sakhi ji.....

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apne saraha acha laga


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12th October 2011, 12:33 AM

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Originally Posted by pallavi_here View Post
You define simple expressions sakhi always.. With solid impression..

Loved it..

Take care
hi pallo
h r u??

thnx for ur words dear

bye tc


कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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