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23rd June 2007, 03:50 AM
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sakhi sis

bahut hi khubsoorat rachna likhi hai. har ehsaas dil ko choo gaya. dard ko khub darsaya hai.

aapki rachna hamesha dil ke paas lagti hai. yunhi hi likhti rahna.

nira.
di bahut bahut shukriya apne pasand kiyaaaaaaaaa

yuhi sath dena hamesha

hugggs sakhi

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23rd June 2007, 03:56 AM
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wah wah .. man gaye .. yeh kavita sf kyu nahin hain phle yeh boliye ..

likhte likhte ruk gaya hu... socha to hain ki likh du. magar rehne do .. fir kabhi yeh 2 line udar rahi..kk

keep writing

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udhar hi rahengi ye lines

shukriya

sakhi

कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
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24th June 2007, 06:27 PM
badi der se nazar padi aapke is kalaam per.bahut khoob sakhi ji,dard-e-judaii bahut hi behtareen tareeke se bayaan kiya hai aapne.bahut khoob.likht rahen yunhin

yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
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aaj puri kar deta hu !!!!!!!!!!
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Smile aaj puri kar deta hu !!!!!!!!!! - 26th June 2007, 12:18 PM
aaj udhar khatam kar deta hu

hum wado ko mante hain kehne ko karte hain aur nibhane ko nibate hain

well meri lines hain ::--::--::

Woh baat hi kya jo juban se nikle na puri ho
woh rishta hi kya jo nibaya na ja sake
woh pyar hi kya jis main jasbat na ho
magar woh Kami hi kya jo kisi ko batayi na ja sake !!!!

enough ... hope u like that lines .. think anytime what i want to say to u !!!!

kehne walo ko kehne se farak nahin parta
ek baar muskura ke jaan to mangi hoti
hum na karte to kehne busdil tha Woh Mayur
magar us busdil ko apna keh ke kuch kaha to hota !!!

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;---------- Mayur------------;

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28th June 2007, 05:05 PM
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badi der se nazar padi aapke is kalaam per.bahut khoob sakhi ji,dard-e-judaii bahut hi behtareen tareeke se bayaan kiya hai aapne.bahut khoob.likht rahen yunhin

shukriya dear sara ji

late aayee hun isliye mafi chahungi
apkka sath mila acha laga yuhi sath dena dost

sakhi with love

कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
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8th November 2007, 02:46 AM
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aaj udhar khatam kar deta hu

hum wado ko mante hain kehne ko karte hain aur nibhane ko nibate hain

well meri lines hain ::--::--::

Woh baat hi kya jo juban se nikle na puri ho
woh rishta hi kya jo nibaya na ja sake
woh pyar hi kya jis main jasbat na ho
magar woh Kami hi kya jo kisi ko batayi na ja sake !!!!

enough ... hope u like that lines .. think anytime what i want to say to u !!!!

kehne walo ko kehne se farak nahin parta
ek baar muskura ke jaan to mangi hoti
hum na karte to kehne busdil tha Woh Mayur
magar us busdil ko apna keh ke kuch kaha to hota !!!

tc always

byeeee

sorry itna lare rply de rahi hun..
shukriya mujeh pada
sher ache hai bas itna kahungi
sakhi

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10th November 2007, 12:05 PM
Bahut umda Sakhi...keep it up...daad hazire khidmat hai...

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10th November 2007, 01:54 PM
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Bahut umda Sakhi...keep it up...daad hazire khidmat hai...
bhiya namste

kaise ho aap??
apko yahan dekha acha laga

shukriya jo apne pasand kiya mera likha.

sakhi

कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
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11th November 2007, 10:37 AM
dear sakhi''
aapne to bahut hi kub likha hai. our aap isi tareh se likhti rahe yahi hamari aakhri ichchha hai ki aap hamesha hi is tareh se likhti rahen........

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4th April 2008, 02:07 PM
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sakhi sis

bahut hi khubsoorat rachna likhi hai. har ehsaas dil ko choo gaya. dard ko khub darsaya hai.

aapki rachna hamesha dil ke paas lagti hai. yunhi hi likhti rahna.

nira.
maafi chahungi dd late hun..kya karu kam aati hun jara ....

shukriya apko meri rachnaye dil ke kareeb lagti hai bas ye dil ke kareeb ka rista banaye rakhna

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4th April 2008, 07:42 PM
sakhi ji apki ghazal ke bhao achhe hen. wording bhi achhi. baher men hoti to or bhi achha hota. dhire dhire sikh lijiega. ek word ka meaning samajh men nahin aya plz bata dijie.
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
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sakhi ji apki ghazal ke bhao achhe hen. wording bhi achhi. baher men hoti to or bhi achha hota. dhire dhire sikh lijiega. ek word ka meaning samajh men nahin aya plz bata dijie.
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
soo.n ka kia menaing hen?
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aaka yahan swagat hai...

me likhti hun but han kahk skate hai jayada technical na karke mein feelings ko jaise ka taisa utar deti hun.

yahan soo.n= taraf hai...meine ho skata hai type me misstakes ki ho roman hindi ke according.

aapka ana aur apni ray dena acha laga hamesha sath dete rahna.
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yahan soo.n= taraf hai...
oh ok. soo.n nahiin he bal ki SOO he shabd. sorry men samajh nahin saka tha
   
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9th July 2008, 01:20 PM
koi bat anhi ..sorry ki..ab samjh gaye naa aap

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