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आवाज - 29th September 2010, 11:21 PM


ये आवाज कैसी है
जो दिल पर दस्तक देती है
क्यो भला फिर सुनूँ मैं कुछ ?
जब कोई आहट होती है.
तुम्हारी सांसो की आवाज
या है एक वो अहसास,
भर देता है जब जीवन
फिर अब है क्यो ये क्रंदन?
दूर कभी होती है जब
आवाज कही सन्नाटे में
ऐसे दूर हुई है वो
क्या लौटेगी ????
फिर कभी इस गली
न जाने कब कैसे होगा?
उन कदमो का इस दर तक आके
फिर यूही अचानक कभी
आकर दस्तक देना
और ये पूछना......
क्या मैं आ सकती हूँ ????
इस दालान से गुजर के
तेरे दिल तक जा सकती हूँ ..


कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे

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29th September 2010, 11:28 PM

क्या लौटेगी ????
फिर कभी इस गली
न जाने कब कैसे होगा
उन कदमो का इस दर तक आके
फिर यूही अचानक कभी
आकर दस्तक देना
और ये पूछना......
क्या मैं आ सकती हूँ ????
इस दालान से गुजर के
तेरे दिल तक जा सकती हूँ ..


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29th September 2010, 11:34 PM

shukiya naresh ji sarahne ke liye...

aap aaye achcha laga


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saKhi jee:

Kem Chho??

baDe dino.n baad aapko paRhne kaa mauqaa milaa KhuShi hu'ii.. aapki rachanaa ki saadagee mujhe bahot pasand aayii.n.. Khoob liKhaa hay.. dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

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dear dhaval..maze me chho...

tum cam chho ???

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ये आवाज कैसी है
जो दिल पर दस्तक देती है
क्यो भला फिर सुनूँ मैं कुछ ?
जब कोई आहट होती है.
तुम्हारी सांसो की आवाज
या है एक वो अहसास,
भर देता है जब जीवन
फिर अब है क्यो ये क्रंदन?
दूर कभी होती है जब
आवाज कही सन्नाटे में
ऐसे दूर हुई है वो
क्या लौटेगी ????
फिर कभी इस गली
न जाने कब कैसे होगा?
उन कदमो का इस दर तक आके
फिर यूही अचानक कभी
आकर दस्तक देना
और ये पूछना......
क्या मैं आ सकती हूँ ????
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ये आवाज कैसी है
जो दिल पर दस्तक देती है
क्यो भला फिर सुनूँ मैं कुछ ?
जब कोई आहट होती है.
तुम्हारी सांसो की आवाज
या है एक वो अहसास,
भर देता है जब जीवन
फिर अब है क्यो ये क्रंदन?
दूर कभी होती है जब
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क्या लौटेगी ????
फिर कभी इस गली
न जाने कब कैसे होगा?
उन कदमो का इस दर तक आके
फिर यूही अचानक कभी
आकर दस्तक देना
और ये पूछना......
क्या मैं आ सकती हूँ ????
इस दालान से गुजर के
तेरे दिल तक जा सकती हूँ ..


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Sakhi ji, namaste!

Pahalee baar aapkii post par reply kar raha hooN.. bahut achchha likhtee haiN aap. ehsaas bahut achchhe lage.

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Sakhi ji, namaste!

Pahalee baar aapkii post par reply kar raha hooN.. bahut achchha likhtee haiN aap. ehsaas bahut achchhe lage.

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ये आवाज कैसी है
जो दिल पर दस्तक देती है
क्यो भला फिर सुनूँ मैं कुछ ?
जब कोई आहट होती है.
तुम्हारी सांसो की आवाज
या है एक वो अहसास,
भर देता है जब जीवन
फिर अब है क्यो ये क्रंदन?
दूर कभी होती है जब
आवाज कही सन्नाटे में
ऐसे दूर हुई है वो
क्या लौटेगी ????
फिर कभी इस गली
न जाने कब कैसे होगा?
उन कदमो का इस दर तक आके
फिर यूही अचानक कभी
आकर दस्तक देना
और ये पूछना......
क्या मैं आ सकती हूँ ????
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ये आवाज कैसी है
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क्यो भला फिर सुनूँ मैं कुछ ?
जब कोई आहट होती है.
तुम्हारी सांसो की आवाज
या है एक वो अहसास,
भर देता है जब जीवन
फिर अब है क्यो ये क्रंदन?
दूर कभी होती है जब
आवाज कही सन्नाटे में
ऐसे दूर हुई है वो
क्या लौटेगी ????
फिर कभी इस गली
न जाने कब कैसे होगा?
उन कदमो का इस दर तक आके
फिर यूही अचानक कभी
आकर दस्तक देना
और ये पूछना......
क्या मैं आ सकती हूँ ????
इस दालान से गुजर के
तेरे दिल तक जा सकती हूँ ..


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क्यो भला फिर सुनूँ मैं कुछ ?
जब कोई आहट होती है.
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क्या लौटेगी ????
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फिर यूही अचानक कभी
आकर दस्तक देना
और ये पूछना......
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aadaab
bahoooooooooooooooooooooooot khoooooooooooob
daalaan se guzar kar dil ke raaste ka tazkerah karke aap ne na jaane kitnee bhoioli bisaree yaadon ko taazah kar diyaa
bahot hi khoobsooratee se aap ne kalaam ke daaman me rangeenee bhar dee hai
mobaarak ho
mukhlis
masood hassaas
masood ji
mafi ki talabgara hu jo itna late ayi

shukriya apne pasand ki meri batein...


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ये आवाज कैसी है
जो दिल पर दस्तक देती है
क्यो भला फिर सुनूँ मैं कुछ ?
जब कोई आहट होती है.
तुम्हारी सांसो की आवाज
या है एक वो अहसास,
भर देता है जब जीवन
फिर अब है क्यो ये क्रंदन?
दूर कभी होती है जब
आवाज कही सन्नाटे में
ऐसे दूर हुई है वो
क्या लौटेगी ????
फिर कभी इस गली
न जाने कब कैसे होगा?
उन कदमो का इस दर तक आके
फिर यूही अचानक कभी
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और ये पूछना......
क्या मैं आ सकती हूँ ????
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तेरे दिल तक जा सकती हूँ ..
ehsaasoN ko bakhubi byaaN kiya hai aapke qalaam ne....meri taraf se daad haazir hai sakhi ji...qubuul kijiyega....


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वाह सखी बहुत खूब ...इसी तरह आते रहिएगा
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