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Ek gulab tha............ -
26th August 2005, 03:46 PM
Ek gulab tha
Bara odas tha Rang bhi us ka tha kuch ora ora sa Shabnam k ansoo rawan thay us k Dil tha us ka kuch bujha bujha sa Bahar ka tha mosam phir bhi na khila tha Dali say tha who apni kuch jhuka jhuka sa Main nay ju dekha usay Pass ja k pocha us say Kyon ha odas tu? Kyon kerta ha dil barbad tu? Kis ko kerta ha yad tu? Yeh sun ker who ronay laga Shabnam k ansoo say moon dhonay laga Or rotay rotay bas yeh kehnay laga Mera yar mugh ko chor gaya hai Mera pyar mugh say moon mor gaya hai Ab main kis k liyay khil jaoon Ab main kis k liyay khushboo mahkaoon Mujhe kon apnay dil say lagaie ga Mujh ko kon apni sansoon may basay ga Mera chaman ojar gaya hai Mera yar mujh say bichar gaya hai Bas ab to her lamhay us ki yad hai Bas baqarari hai, tarap hai faryad hai Mujh ko koe meray yar say mila dai Mujh ko koe mera pyar lota dai Woh ayey ga tu khil jaoon ga maiN Apni zindagi say mil jaoon ga maiN WRITER UNKNOWN smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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26th August 2005, 03:57 PM
hi khushi,
amazing piece of writing. i loved reading each word of it. thx for sharing it with us. take care n keep posting more oftenly here.god bless u with his finnest glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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26th August 2005, 04:42 PM
hi ..........too good ............
ek kali apne hin shaakhaao main ........... kooi aaya bade pyaar se nihaar gaya wo bhi machhal gayi ki ussko kooi choo gaya bade pyaar se chuke usse taarefeine kar gaya wo machlati rahi itraati rahi ki usse pyaar ho gaya kali khill ke gulaab hui ,wo bade pyaar se haatoho maine usse le gaya jab tak usmaine taazgi tthi, mohine si khushbu thi ,wousse sehlaata gaya fir ek kone maine rakh kar wo usse bhulta gayaa wo padi padi murjhaati gayi, apne shaakhoon ko yaad karti gayi kaantoon ke beech hin sahi wo khush toh raha karti thi khule aasmaan maine ,aapne hin shaakhoo main ,raani si toh rehti thi kaantoon ke pehredaari maine aazaadi se toh rehti thi chaar din ki jeevan thi uski, do dinn maine hin katam hui ..........  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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26th August 2005, 08:35 PM
bahut khoob khushi ji bas itna hi kahunga ki maza aa gaya,bahut ahchi lagi aapki ye rachna bas aise hi likhte rahiyega.
aapka LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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5th September 2005, 08:13 PM
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thanx a lot Ruhani smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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5th September 2005, 08:15 PM
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thanx chandsi aapne bhi bohot pyara likha hai smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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5th September 2005, 08:16 PM
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thanx lucky smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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hi Khushii -
5th September 2005, 08:39 PM
how r u, i hope u remember me. this is nitin.
u wrote very well. i also wrote something. i hope u had seen it. any way bye take care nitin (Living For Others) |
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H R U? KAPHI TIME BAAD TUMHEIN PADKE BAHUT KHUSHI HUI. ACHA LIKHTI HO ABHI BHI. BYE TAKECARE Love Is God. Love is worship. Love is Everything...... |
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6th September 2005, 06:07 PM
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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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6th September 2005, 08:25 PM
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smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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6th September 2005, 08:26 PM
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smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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6th September 2005, 08:26 PM
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heart touching with such simple sober beautiful words & pre feelings thanx for sharing this ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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6th September 2005, 08:28 PM
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6th September 2005, 08:37 PM
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smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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7th October 2005, 03:27 AM
how r u, i hope u remember me. this is nitin.
u wrote very well. i also wrote something. i hope u had seen it. any way bye take care nitin (Living For Others) ohhhhhhh god .........nitin ?aap nitin ho ?arre maine aapke original post pe bhi reply diya hai .........or sach wahan main bhi aapke liye kutch aisa hin likh ke aai thi ki aap jakar padhna INDIATIMES MAIN..............but mujhe toh laga ki empty_eye =kooi looi ladki hai ...........ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh sach kahoon maine aapka post wahan padha hai aap sach main achcha likhte ho ..........maine aapke liye notes bhi choda tha ...............aapka reply nahi aaya ...............aaj jab ruhaani ka post padha toh maine aapke saare post padhne gayi ki aisi kya hai aap main or mujh maine ki usko laga aap or main ek hin hian .....................tab iss post pe aapka naam padhi......................THIS IS THE SPIRIT NITIN JI..........aapne bina kisi ko hurt kiye apna baat keh gaye ...........sach hai kyaa laaye the kya le jaayegain .......... AAP MUJHE ACHCHE LAGE .............CHLO AAB SACH MAIN JAATI HOON .........aapko indiatimes main reply karoongi ...........c u .....bye @ . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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7th October 2005, 09:52 AM
ohhhhhhh god .........nitin ?aap nitin ho ?arre maine aapke original post pe bhi reply diya hai .........or sach wahan main bhi aapke liye kutch aisa hin likh ke aai thi ki aap jakar padhna INDIATIMES MAIN..............but mujhe toh laga ki empty_eye =kooi looi ladki hai ...........ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh sach kahoon maine aapka post wahan padha hai aap sach main achcha likhte ho ..........maine aapke liye notes bhi choda tha ...............aapka reply nahi aaya ...............aaj jab ruhaani ka post padha toh maine aapke saare post padhne gayi ki aisi kya hai aap main or mujh maine ki usko laga aap or main ek hin hian .....................tab iss post pe aapka naam padhi......................THIS IS THE SPIRIT NITIN JI..........aapne bina kisi ko hurt kiye apna baat keh gaye ...........sach hai kyaa laaye the kya le jaayegain .......... AAP MUJHE ACHCHE LAGE .............CHLO AAB SACH MAIN JAATI HOON .........aapko indiatimes main reply karoongi ...........c u .....bye
@ [/B][/QUOTE] hey chandsi, wht are u talking about, i m not able to understand u...? INDIATIMES kaha se bech mai aa gaya, maine INDIATIMES pe kya kiya hai, aapne INDIATIMES pe kise reply bheja hai, aap mujhe indiatimes pe kaise reply karoge, do u know my indiatimes ka ID. and wht is with ruhani, i m getting confused, totally confused. plz help me out. by, empty_eyes (Living For Others) |
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7th October 2005, 12:00 PM
khushi
that was 2 cool.. really liked it. lots of love zahra |
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7th October 2005, 01:46 PM
~Ek gulab tha~
Ek gulab tha Bara odas tha Rang bhi us ka tha kuch ora ora sa Shabnam k ansoo rawan thay us k Dil tha us ka kuch bujha bujha sa Bahar ka tha mosam phir bhi na khila tha Dali say tha who apni kuch jhuka jhuka sa Main nay ju dekha usay Pass ja k pocha us say Kyon ha odas to? Kyon kerta ha dil barbad to? Kis ko kerta ha yad to? Yeh sun ker who ronay laga Shabnam k ansoo say moon dhonay laga Or rotay rotay bas yeh kehnay laga Mera yar mugh ko chor gaya hai Mera pyar mugh say moon mor gaya hai Ab main kis k liyay khil jaoon Ab main kis k liyay khushboo mahkaoon Mujhe kon apnay dil say lagaie ga Mujh ko kon apni sansoon may basay ga Mera chaman ojar gaya hai Mera yar mujh say bichar gaya hai Bas ab to her lamhay us ki yad hai Bas baqarari hai, tarap hai faryad hai Mujh ko koe meray yar say mila dai Mujh ko koe mera pyar lota dai Woh ayey ga tu khil jaoon ga maiN Apni zindagi say mil jaoon ga maiN... posted on Monday, September 12, 2005 2:27 PM Comments # re: Ek gulab tha ek kali apne hin shaakhaao main ........... kooi aaya bade pyaar se nihaar gaya wo bhi machhal gayi ki ussko kooi choo gaya bade pyaar se chuke usse taarefeine kar gaya wo machlati rahi itraati rahi ki usse pyaar ho gaya kali khill ke gulaab hui ,wo bade pyaar se haatoho maine usse le gaya jab tak usmaine taazgi tthi, mohine si khushbu thi ,wousse sehlaata gaya fir ek kone maine rakh kar wo usse bhulta gayaa wo padi padi murjhaati gayi, apne shaakhoon ko yaad karti gayi kaantoon ke beech hin sahi wo khush toh raha karti thi khule aasmaan maine ,aapne hin shaakhoo main ,raani si toh rehti thi kaantoon ke pehredaari maine aazaadi se toh rehti thi chaar din ki jeevan thi uski, do dinn maine hin katam hui 10/1/2005 7:46 PM | chandsi from shayri.com # re: Ek gulab tha nitin ji aapne ye poem kahan se likhi hai ..............ye poem toh humaare shayri.com main kisi ne likhi hai haan shayd khushi ne likhi hai ...............kya ye aapka likha huaa hai ya aapne uska likha huaa yahan post kiyaa hai .............jo bhi .............achcha likha huaa .............chlo khush raho ..bye tc 10/2/2005 12:16 AM | chandsi from shayri.com posted by nitin_sharma_mail @ Monday, September 12, 2005 2:27 PM | Comments (2) . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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7th October 2005, 01:51 PM
. Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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7th October 2005, 03:34 PM
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First of all chandsi, i m not nitin SHARMA, and second thing is that i didnt wrote that poem...! i dont know why r u talking all that, y r u including indiatimes between us, i think u r in a big mis understanding...! plz just see that who posted this poem here on shayri.com n khushi is my old friend, i know her before joining this site. n plz dont create any type of mis understanding between all of us. plz, i hope u understand me. if u have any problem plz do private message to me. by, empty_eyes (Living For Others) |
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7th October 2005, 03:54 PM
FIR TOH MUJH SE GALTI HO GAYI .................JAB MAINE DEKHA KI RUHAANI KO AISA LAGA HAI KI AAP KA ID MERA ID HAI ..........TOH MAINE AAPKE SAARE POST PADHE OR ...........TAB AAPKA NAAM MILAA OR FIR YAAD AAYA KI AAPKO KAHI OR BHI MAIN PADH CHUKI HOON ..................OR BINAA AAPSE BAAT KIYE YAHAN YE SAB LIKH GAYI ...........................HO SAKTA HAI NITIN SHARMA KOOI OR HO ..........
SACH HAI HO SAKTA MERI WAZAH SE AAP SABKI DOSTI TUT RAHI HO ...........DARAAR PAD RAHI HO ..................BUT MAINE AISA TOH KUTCH BHI NAHI LIKHA KI AAP SAB KO BURAA LAGE .......................................AAPNE PUCHAA KI MERE OR RUHAANI KE BEECH KYA PROBLEM HAI TOH AAPKO MAINE WO POST KA LINK DIYAA .............. MUJHE KISI SE BHI KOOI DUSHMANI YA GEHRI DOSTI NAHI HAI ..........................JISKE LIYE MAIN YE SAB KAROO ............................................... MAINE APNE DHANG SE KUTCH ACHCHA KARNA CHAAHA THA ............................OR MAINE GALAT SAABIT HO GAYI HOON ............................OR AAB YE MUSHKIL HAI MERE LIYE KHUD KO SAABIT KARNA KI MAIN SAHI HOON YA NAHI ...................... SO AAP PLZ BURAA MAT MAANIYE .....................MUJH SE FIR RK GALTI HUI .........AAPKO NITIN SHARMA SAMJH KAR ..............SO KHUSHI NE APNE POST MAIN .........UNKNOWN WRITER LIKHA HUAA HAI .............USS BACHCHI NE KOOI GALATI TOH NAHI KI HAI USSNE KEVAL SHARE KIYAA HAI USS KHOOBSURAT POST KO ................. BUT AAP ITNA TOH MAANTE HO NA KI AAPKA ID MERA NAHI HAI .......................I MEAN .........EMPTY_EYE ..............ITS NOT ME .....................YAA AAP BHI MUKAR JAANE WAALE HO KI NAHI ...............ITS CHANDSI ID ONLY ....................OR RUHAANI JO YAHI LAGA HAI KI AAPKA ID MERA HAI ....................... MAIN BAAR BAAR KEH CHUKI HOON KI ..................MERI WAZAH KYA THI 3 ID BAANE KI ...............OR ISS BAAT SE MUJHE GUILT NAHI KI MERI 3 ID THI .........COZ MAINE KISI KO DUKH TOH NAHI DIYAA KISI BHI ID SE ...................................BUT HAAN SABKO BURAA LAGA ISSE JAROOR GUILT FEEL KARTI HOON .. NITIN JI AAP BURA MAT MAANIYE ..................AAPKO BHI BURA LAGA HO TOH ...........................SORRY ! @ . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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7th October 2005, 04:40 PM
hi madam chandsi ji,
how are u? well excuse me plz, can u just explain me one simple thing. what r u up too. hell its just hell when any of us talk against u. may be its me, aman ji, or any other member. can u just tell me whats ur problem. sorry to say madam becoz of u just u many members are having inconvienece while writing. aapka jab dil karta hai u without reading anyone start giving ur replies. u even dont bother to wat the other wrote. just give us a break please forgot sake now. we had really been in patience by even ignoring u here on site but then its hell the way u reply n create new ids. plz forgot sake stop troubling everyone. parul took a step u were on her nerves. aman ji took a step against u , u started messing up wiith him, n today if i did the same thing wat u r doing here even u know . i need not give any decription. becooz of a member like u , we are loosing trust in new members, wondering may be its u. its just hell. i m very rude with my words today, n i will see to it wat action is been taken against me , i m ready to face but ya atlast my patience is lost. wat do u think of urself?wat are u trying to prove?u just are messing with everyone here. plz stop all this nonse3nce. its just hell. i think the way u r going becoz of u we wud be lacking with many new writings of wonderful writers here becoz no one is feeling comfortable n one reason is u. mark my words one reason is uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. i know i m getting really rude today but then i dont regret. there is a limit to everything. was quiet since yesterday wat u were doing with me n empty eyes but now water level has crossed my limits. n plzzzzzzzzzz its a request to moderators to ban me again. i just dont want to be here wen u all just have to sit quietly. may be today i cant sit quiet any more. thx so much chandsi for provoking me at last to out burst, n still if u have anything to say u are most welcome to reply back but for sure me not gonna keep mum any more. mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….
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7th October 2005, 04:56 PM
I dont know y u ppl fighting each other.,... please we are here to write shayri & shere out thoughts with other.... its not a big deal if any person have two or more id .. but its really bad if u r trying to abuse the envoirment of the site... & now this time Chandsi i m fully agreed with jasleen... Chandsi please stop this here only... why u making excuse on other's comment... are u really a culprit ... if not so y dont u leave it on other ... wht is wrong & wht is not... every person have a diffrent point of view for every thing....aapki behas maiN har post jahnnum ban rahi hai .. please stop it here ... really CHANDSI... ur this attitude show's u r a syco.... please friends stop this hell arguements here only ... pleaaaaase
Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th October 2005, 08:53 PM
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smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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7th October 2005, 08:58 PM
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ITS OK!!! IT JUST SEEMS THAT U R CONFUSED....AND THATS WHY MESSED UP ALL THE THINGS.... LET ME MAKE IT CLEAR OK... THIS POEM IS JUST SHARED ONE....NOT MY OWN CREATION TAKE CARE BYE smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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13th October 2005, 01:15 PM
kaaal ho tusi.....
thanx for ur great shyring..... raj |
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