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life ek baar milti hai aur pyar bhi........ -
21st February 2005, 01:30 PM
Hi
Very good written, and the pic of ash is really do a wonder with ur wordings. Pyar kahan kissi ka poora hota hai Pyar ka to pehla aksher hi adhura hota hai! I would like to ask u : Tahna kyon ho, ye kaisi tanhai tumne appni ye jindagi maut kyon banai? Jia |
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Re: life ek baar milti hai aur pyar bhi........ -
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aapke sawaal ka jawab aapke pehle sher me hi hai kitna pyar karte hai unse kaash unhe bhi ye khabar ho jaye magar aisa na ho ki vo hosh me tab aaye jab ham gehri neend me so jaye.......... I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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21st February 2005, 03:40 PM
cooooooooooool dard ji
bahoot pasand aaya. paplu. it becomes more and more universal. |
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21st February 2005, 03:42 PM
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keeeeeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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wah wah |
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wah wah -
4th April 2005, 07:24 PM
Pata nahi kaha kab
ho gai bhool humse, ek begane ki khatir, kitne apne chhod chale hum. bahot hi khub likha hai specilly thie lines r 2 good. |
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4th April 2005, 10:22 PM
thanks a lot meeta ji for the complimants
keeeeeeeeeeeeep reading and plz shower u r support to me I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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4th April 2005, 10:44 PM
Jubin,
bhaiya....aapne bohat aachha likha hai...i just luv it!! Quote:
keep it up!~ luv, tulsika!~ 
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4th April 2005, 10:47 PM
tulsi ji
thans for the compliments ishq section me aur bhi posts hai jinke 100 reply ho chuke hai zaroor padhiyega thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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1st May 2005, 11:42 PM
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this is simply gr8 sonal |
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1st May 2005, 11:50 PM
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thanks for liking it I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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11th May 2005, 09:40 AM
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 mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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11th May 2005, 09:23 PM
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thanks jas...........  I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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kya baat kah daali hai apne.meri daad kubul karein sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th May 2005, 09:53 PM
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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