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22nd September 2008, 04:36 PM
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jo mujhe bewafa kehkar chala gaya...
mujhe wafa-a-yaar kehne wala
wo dil bhi us ka tha...
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Chand lavz hum ukere kaaghaz pe,
K ik farmaish farmai unhone !!
Likh diya naam hi unka humne,
Jo maangi pyaar ki paimaish unhone !!
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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22nd September 2008, 04:41 PM
Ab kaise ho meri Ujala, Roshni i mean....DIYA
aur aap natkhat shitaaN VICKY....kaise ho janab????
yeh sher meri naye gazal se hain jo maine 2-3 din phele Ishq thread par post ki hai
"Teri surat ko aanko.n mein basa rakha hai,
Pariyo.n ke desh mein ghar bana rakha hai,
Aakar mere pyar ki intihaa to, tu dekh zara,
Teri raho.n mein palkoN ko bicha rakha hai"
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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ab bahut thik hun... 50%, kal thodi problem hui thi... -
22nd September 2008, 04:41 PM
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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
Chand lavz hum ukere kaaghaz pe,
K ik farmaish farmai unhone !!
Likh diya naam hi unka humne,
Jo maangi pyaar ki paimaish unhone !!
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mere dil ki diwaar par jab wo apna naam likh rahe the..
kuch aansu unki aankhon mein mujhe dikh rahe the...
shayad wo kisi ki bewafaai k maare warna..
tabhi mere seene lag kar kisi or ka naam le rahe the
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22nd September 2008, 04:44 PM
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Ab kaise ho meri Ujala, Roshni i mean....DIYA
aur aap natkhat shitaaN VICKY....kaise ho janab????
yeh sher meri naye gazal se hain jo maine 2-3 din phele Ishq thread par post ki hai
"Teri surat ko aanko.n mein basa rakha hai,
Pariyo.n ke desh mein ghar bana rakha hai,
Aakar mere pyar ki intihaa to, tu dekh zara,
Teri raho.n mein palkoN ko bicha rakha hai"
-sunita virender
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Di main thik hun ...aap ko bahot miss ki ..aapke thread bhi dekhi ..bahot achha laga .....
Andaz bahakne lagte hain hoton pe shararat hoti hai
Ankhon se pata chal jata hai jis dil mein mohabbat hoti hai
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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22nd September 2008, 04:46 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
Ab kaise ho meri Ujala, Roshni i mean....DIYA
aur aap natkhat shitaaN VICKY....kaise ho janab????
yeh sher meri naye gazal se hain jo maine 2-3 din phele Ishq thread par post ki hai
"Teri surat ko aanko.n mein basa rakha hai,
Pariyo.n ke desh mein ghar bana rakha hai,
Aakar mere pyar ki intihaa to, tu dekh zara,
Teri raho.n mein palkoN ko bicha rakha hai"
-sunita virender
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thik hun sunita ji... bus dua hai aapki...
gajal ki lines to bahut acchi hain... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne...
tere liye jo maine najarein jhukai ....
duniya ne mujhe bewafa ka iljaam de dala..
kya hua jo wo mera na ho saka...
is duniya ne uske saath mera naam le dala...
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22nd September 2008, 04:52 PM
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thik hun sunita ji... bus dua hai aapki...
gajal ki lines to bahut acchi hain... bahut pyaara likha hai aapne...
tere liye jo maine najarein jhukai ....
duniya ne mujhe bewafa ka iljaam de dala..
kya hua jo wo mera na ho saka...
is duniya ne uske saath mera naam le dala...
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"apni dhadkan ko tere seene mein chuppa doon,
zindgi ko alvida kah doon, jo tu apna bana le,
haatho.n ki lakeero.n mein tera naam likhwa loon,
agar tu mujhe apne seene se ek baar laga le"
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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22nd September 2008, 04:55 PM
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"apni dhadkan ko tere seene mein chuppa doon,
zindgi ko alvida kah doon, jo tu apna bana le,
haatho.n ki lakeero.n mein tera naam likhwa loon,
agar tu mujhe apne seene se ek baar laga le"
-sunita virender
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Di yeh vicky ke bache Mahfil ishq ke alwa aur koi thread dekhta hi nehin kabhi....pvt msg v sayad check nehin karta hoga ....
Kuch nahin chahiye oh jaan mujhe tujhse
Guzre ye zindagi tere hi zulfon saye se
Bas ik hai dua ke saanson ka silsila jo khatm ho
Aakhri saans jo nikle meri tere bahon me ho
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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22nd September 2008, 04:56 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
"apni dhadkan ko tere seene mein chuppa doon,
zindgi ko alvida kah doon, jo tu apna bana le,
haatho.n ki lakeero.n mein tera naam likhwa loon,
agar tu mujhe apne seene se ek baar laga le"
-sunita virender
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seeney se lipat kar mere kya paoge....
main tanha hun tum bhi tanha ho jaoge....
mere katil ko bhi tum par yakin nahi...
mujhse fir bewafaai karke kahaan jaoge...
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22nd September 2008, 04:59 PM
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Originally Posted by stillalive
seeney se lipat kar mere kya paoge....
main tanha hun tum bhi tanha ho jaoge....
mere katil ko bhi tum par yakin nahi...
mujhse fir bewafaai karke kahaan jaoge...
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IN keliye hum pyaar mein diwaane bane,
Woh bhi hame deewana jaan ke anjaan bane.
Yeh baat thee hum do dilon ke beech mein,
Is baat ke na jaane kitne afsaane bane.
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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22nd September 2008, 05:06 PM
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IN keliye hum pyaar mein diwaane bane,
Woh bhi hame deewana jaan ke anjaan bane.
Yeh baat thee hum do dilon ke beech mein,
Is baat ke na jaane kitne afsaane bane.
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sorry diya ji and sunita ji.... maine wo msgs abhi padhe... par ye jaankar bahut acha laga ki aap mujhe yaad karte ho.. or khayaal rakhte ho... aapko main bataunga pm ki mujhe kya hua hai par thode dino baad... tab tak k liye bye and take care....
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22nd September 2008, 05:22 PM
Jab hont mein ungli hoti hai
To samjho pyaar hua tujhse
Har shokh adaaon ke zariye
Sab kuchh izhaar hua mujhse
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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23rd September 2008, 01:13 PM
pichale do -Teen din se ye gazal mere kanon main goong rahi hai
usii ko likh deta hoon.........
Kar na sake hum.. Pyaar ka souda, qee_mat hee kuch.. esii thii
jeetii baazii haa_r gaye hum...2... kismat hii kuch esii thii........NM
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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23rd September 2008, 04:13 PM
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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
Jab hont mein ungli hoti hai
To samjho pyaar hua tujhse
Har shokh adaaon ke zariye
Sab kuchh izhaar hua mujhse
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tere bin jiney ka iraada to na tha....
par aisa koi jindgi se waada to na tha.... nm
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23rd September 2008, 04:16 PM
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tere bin jiney ka iraada to na tha....
par aisa koi jindgi se waada to na tha.... nm
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Vicky kaise ho ...kabhi dusre forum v dekha karo.....
kuchh to baat hai aapke baat main
jo hum chaha kar inkar na kar paye
kuchh to eheshash hai tere yaad main
hum khamosh hoke bhi ikrar kar diye
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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23rd September 2008, 04:20 PM
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Vicky kaise ho ...kabhi dusre forum v dekha karo.....
kuchh to baat hai aapke baat main
jo hum chaha kar inkar na kar paye
kuchh to eheshash hai tere yaad main
hum khamosh hoke bhi ikrar kar diye
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ok iska matlab ki is forum mein meri jagah nahi hai... bye..
teri mehfil se jaane mein mujhe aitraaj nahi...
par suna hai ki tum naraaj hokar roti bahut ho.... vicky..
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23rd September 2008, 04:23 PM
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ok iska matlab ki is forum mein meri jagah nahi hai... bye..
teri mehfil se jaane mein mujhe aitraaj nahi...
par suna hai ki tum naraaj hokar roti bahut ho.... vicky..
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ha ha ha... iska matlab yeh ki yaar dusra thread bhi dekha karo wahan bhi reply diya karo samjhe...........
Aankhon ne kiya zakhmi dhoka hua chaalo se
Hum dil ko lagaake beithe dil todne vaalo se
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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23rd September 2008, 04:26 PM
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ha ha aiska matlab yeh ki yaar dusra thread bhi dekha karo wahan bhi reply diya karo samjhe...........
Aankhon ne kiya zakhmi dhoka hua chaalo se
Hum dil ko lagaake beithe dil todne vaalo se
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chalo ab kabhi is forum mein nahi aaunga... ok diya ji nice meeting...
jo kabhi hamaari pyaar ki kasam na khaate the...
aaj unhe hum dil todne waale najar aate hain...
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23rd September 2008, 04:30 PM
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chalo ab kabhi is forum mein nahi aaunga... ok diya ji nice meeting...
jo kabhi hamaari pyaar ki kasam na khaate the...
aaj unhe hum dil todne waale najar aate hain...
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iska matlab pitai khane ko tayar ho gaye ho Good Di ko aane do achhe se do/char padegi to sab samjh jaoge ...........
Jo kabhi kehte the, umr bhar tumko na bhulayenge,
aaj vohi kehte hain, sari batein bhula do hum na ayenge
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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23rd September 2008, 04:34 PM
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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
iska matlab pitai khane ko tayar ho gaye ho Good Di ko aane do achhe se do/char padegi to sab samjh jaoge ...........
Jo kabhi kehte the, umr bhar tumko na bhulayenge,
aaj vohi kehte hain, sari batein bhula do hum na ayenge
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or kya kahun yaar... thoda mood thik karna chahta hun to koi na koi kharaab kar deta hai...
no more shayri.... bye..
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23rd September 2008, 04:37 PM
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or kya kahun yaar... thoda mood thik karna chahta hun to koi na koi kharaab kar deta hai...
no more shayri.... bye..
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lekin main aise kya bol di jo mood kharab ho gaya... Sunita Di dekho Vicky kya bol raha hai ..............sry ab kuchh nehin boloongi
jisko yaad karke tadapta tha
aaj vo kisi aur ke paas hai
unse do pal kya dur ho gaye
jo aaj uske dil me kisi aur ka ehshash hai
nm
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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23rd September 2008, 05:15 PM
dil e barbad se nikla nahi ab tak koi
ik lute ghar ko diya karta hai dastak koi
aas jo tuut gayi fir se bandhata kyo hai
yahi duniya hai to esi ye duniya kyo hai.
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ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai.
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24th September 2008, 09:16 AM
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or kya kahun yaar... thoda mood thik karna chahta hun to koi na koi kharaab kar deta hai...
no more shayri.... bye..
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Vicky......main to soch rahi thi ki tumhari pitai tumhare theek hone ke baad karuN par ab DIYA kah rahi hai ki nahi diiii eski jaroorat abhi hai...to bolo kaya irada hai aise naraz nahi hote...samjey
"har kushi ho wahaN tu yahaN bhi rahe,
zindgi ho wahaN tu yahaN bhi rahe"
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th September 2008, 09:22 AM
khamosh hai aaj woh nagme yu
jo ashk bankar kabhi aankho se nikale the
aap khamoshi ki kya baat karte ho.....
woh ek samundar hai pyaar ka dosto
jisme hum jalkar kabhi nikle the....
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24th September 2008, 10:07 AM
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khamosh hai aaj woh nagme yu
jo ashk bankar kabhi aankho se nikale the
aap khamoshi ki kya baat karte ho.....
woh ek samundar hai pyaar ka dosto
jisme hum jalkar kabhi nikle the....
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waah kya baat hai...
taare jameen par sjaane ki jid hai...
humein unhe apna banaane ki jid hai...
lakhon ke dil jala daale jisne...
ab humein uska dil jalaane ki jid hai...
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24th September 2008, 10:11 AM
sunita maine aapko or diya ko ek pm kiya hai wo padhlo... ok....
wo ab bhi mujhe yaad aaye to kya karun....
wo har pal mujhe sataaye to kya karun...
wo jab chaahe ek khaab toad jaate hain mera....
ye dil fir bhi unko hi chaahe to kya karun....
vicky
agar mujhe pitna hai to pit lo... main kuch nahi kahunga...ok sunita ji...
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24th September 2008, 10:16 AM
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waah kya baat hai...
taare jameen par sjaane ki jid hai...
humein unhe apna banaane ki jid hai...
lakhon ke dil jala daale jisne...
ab humein uska dil jalaane ki jid hai...
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Vickyyyyyy.....last post mein maine jo msg diya hai tumhe pada hai kaya tumne, aur mera pm bhi pada hai ya nahi...agar nahi to jaldi se pado aur jawaab do.....ab kaise tabiyat hai
yeh sher meri ek gazal se hai:
"Woh har baat par be-rukhi si karey hai,
Phir bhi mujhe apna diwana sa lagey hai,
Janey kaya hai uski udhas aknho mai ‘Sunita’
muh chupa ke bhi jaye to be-waffa na lagey hai"
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th September 2008, 10:24 AM
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Vickyyyyyy.....last post mein maine jo msg diya hai tumhe pada hai kaya tumne, aur mera pm bhi pada hai ya nahi...agar nahi to jaldi se pado aur jawaab do.....ab kaise tabiyat hai
yeh sher meri ek gazal se hai:
"Woh har baat par be-rukhi si karey hai,
Phir bhi mujhe apna diwana sa lagey hai,
Janey kaya hai uski udhas aknho mai ‘Sunita’
muh chupa ke bhi jaye to be-waffa na lagey hai"
-sunita virender
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padh k reply kar diya hai... aapko... aap humesha khush raho sunita ji.... aapki gajal ki lines bahut aachi hoti hain... har baar ki tarah ye bhi bahut hi pyaari hain,,, or mere matlab ki hain....
kabhi meri aankhon mein jhaank kar dekhna...
is mein tumhe ek samandar najar aayega...
gar gaur se dekhoge kabhi inhe...
to tumhe inme apna ghar najar aayega....
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24th September 2008, 11:31 AM
ek shikayat apke nam apse hi karte hai
jo dard diya hai is dil ko to dawa kiyu nahi karte hai,
ek shikayat apke nam apse hi karte hai
jo wada kiya hai is dil se to khat kiyu nahi likhte hai
ek shikayat....
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24th September 2008, 12:12 PM
sadiya biti unse bichde, dard ka alam aj bhi hai,
dil ka rona kisne dekha, shabnam shabnam aj bhi hai
kon tha jane kaise duba koi sakeen sahil par
ati jati in moujo me mout ka matam aj bhi hai, (NM)
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24th September 2008, 05:12 PM
tere ehsaas ko bhi jab ehsaas hoga...
ye rishta tab sabke liye khaas hoga....
majburiyaan na hongi tab darmiyaan hamare..
jab is jahaan ko bhool tu mere paas hoga..
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24th September 2008, 05:22 PM
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tere ehsaas ko bhi jab ehsaas hoga...
ye rishta tab sabke liye khaas hoga....
majburiyaan na hongi tab darmiyaan hamare..
jab is jahaan ko bhool tu mere paas hoga..
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Tum ko main naraz kiya na kal ...isiliye tum chale gaye ...
ab tumhare sayari ka ehi Reply hai ..........
Us husn-e-aaftaab k jab hum deewaan.e ho gaye.....
Hume roobaru-e-haqiqat karane k kitne bahaan.e ho gaye.....
Shayad buz.zm me talaash rahe hai wo ek naye pyar ko....
Khudaya unki nazar me hum jo puraan.e ho gaye.......
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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25th September 2008, 05:52 AM
Roti Huyi Akhon Se Sawaal Mat Poocha Karo...
Jawaab Mein Sirf Aasoon Hi Milenge.. (NM)
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25th September 2008, 09:36 AM
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Tum ko main naraz kiya na kal ...isiliye tum chale gaye ...
ab tumhare sayari ka ehi Reply hai ..........
Us husn-e-aaftaab k jab hum deewaan.e ho gaye.....
Hume roobaru-e-haqiqat karane k kitne bahaan.e ho gaye.....
Shayad buz.zm me talaash rahe hai wo ek naye pyar ko....
Khudaya unki nazar me hum jo puraan.e ho gaye.......
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kya hai diya.... yaar wo to bus waise thoda bura laga kyunki padhne mein thodi misunderstanding ho gayi thi.. par main aapse naaraj nahi tha.... ye meri taraf se aapke liye...
aap hamesha haste rahe itna hi bahut hai..
mere dost baste rahein bus itna hi bahut hai...
har koi har wakt sath nahi reh sakta "diya ji"
bus wo mera haal puchte rahe itna hi bahut hai...
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25th September 2008, 10:43 AM
HI
SUNITA JI
KYA KHUBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB LIKHA H PADNE K BAD M SIRF SOCHANE PAR HI MAJBOUR HO GAYA
AAP ASE HI LIKHTE RAHO YHI DUWA H MERE RUB S
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25th September 2008, 04:44 PM
USKO JAB APNE SE DOOR JAATE DEKHA...
MERE SATH USKE CHEHRE SE BHI NOOR JAATE DEKHA...
LAMHA LAMHA JO APNE HUSAN PAR GUMAAN KARTA THA....
EK PAL MEIN USKA WO GUROOR JAATE DEKHA...
ISHK KARKE JO MUJHPAR EHSAAN JATATA RAHA..
AKHRI WAKT USKI AANKHON SE WO SUROOR JAATE DEKHA....
JO APNE SAATH MUJHKO BHI RULATA RAHA TAMAAM UMAR....
NAJREIN JHUKA KAR AAJ WO HUJOOR JAATE DEKHA....
TUJHE JO JAKHAM SAARI UMAR RULATA RAHA "VICKY"
AAHISTA AAHISTA JAANE KYUN WO NASOOR JAATE DEKHA....
VICKY
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25th September 2008, 04:50 PM
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Originally Posted by stillalive
USKO JAB APNE SE DOOR JAATE DEKHA...
MERE SATH USKE CHEHRE SE BHI NOOR JAATE DEKHA...
LAMHA LAMHA JO APNE HUSAN PAR GUMAAN KARTA THA....
EK PAL MEIN USKA WO GUROOR JAATE DEKHA...
ISHK KARKE JO MUJHPAR EHSAAN JATATA RAHA..
AKHRI WAKT USKI AANKHON SE WO SUROOR JAATE DEKHA....
JO APNE SAATH MUJHKO BHI RULATA RAHA TAMAAM UMAR....
NAJREIN JHUKA KAR AAJ WO HUJOOR JAATE DEKHA....
TUJHE JO JAKHAM SAARI UMAR RULATA RAHA "VICKY"
AAHISTA AAHISTA JAANE KYUN WO NASOOR JAATE DEKHA....
VICKY
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hmmm..........vicky etni acchi shayri aur laajwaab ahsaas .....bahut khoob likha hai tumne....par vicky tum esko agar New Thread bana kar post karo to behtar hai....es shayri poora credit tabhi mileyga
"Jisko hum har baat par shitaan hi samjate rahe,
uski baato.n mein humne aaj dard ka saagar dekha"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th September 2008, 05:03 PM
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hmmm..........vicky etni acchi shayri aur laajwaab ahsaas .....bahut khoob likha hai tumne....par vicky tum esko agar New Thread bana kar post karo to behtar hai....es shayri poora credit tabhi mileyga
"Jisko hum har baat par shitaan hi samjate rahe,
uski baato.n mein humne aaj dard ka saagar dekha"
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OK.. SUNITA JI..MAINE DAAL DI SHAYRI A DARD MEIN...
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25th September 2008, 07:35 PM
Naa dil seh hote hai naa dimagh seh hota hai
yeh dil to sirf itefaaq seh hote hai
pyar karke bhi pyar naa mile
yet itfaaaq sirf humare sath hi hote hai
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Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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26th September 2008, 09:08 AM
mitti ka jism lekar paani k ghar mein hun...
manjil hai maut meri main har pal safar mein hun..
hona hai katal mujhe ye malum hai mujhe...
par ye nahi malum main kis kis ki najar mein hun...nm
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Hello Vicky kaise ho tum.... -
26th September 2008, 01:22 PM
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Originally Posted by stillalive
mitti ka jism lekar paani k ghar mein hun...
manjil hai maut meri main har pal safar mein hun..
hona hai katal mujhe ye malum hai mujhe...
par ye nahi malum main kis kis ki najar mein hun...nm
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4 u Vicky
Har koi saath nehin nibhata zindegi ke safar main
saya bhi saath chor deta hai andhere ki aagosh main
jab bhi koi gham ho dilse hume tum yaad kar lena
humare intezaar main chahat ki Diya jalaye rakhna
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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