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25th June 2009, 05:09 PM
Likha to bhaut kuch tha dil ke kagaz per Kwahish
Kai zakham mile dil ko sari tehreere mit si gayi hai
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25th June 2009, 11:26 PM
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Likha to bhaut kuch tha dil ke kagaz per Kwahish
Kai zakham mile dil ko sari tehreere mit si gayi hai
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haath mera dekh kar, ye mashwara usne diya....
'kuch lakeeron ko mitana ab zaruri ho gaya'....
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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26th June 2009, 02:25 PM
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haath mera dekh kar, ye mashwara usne diya....
'kuch lakeeron ko mitana ab zaruri ho gaya'....
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Very Nice thought........
Yehi samajh liya unhone apne haaton ki lakeeron se
Ab Dil mein koyi jagah nahi anjane ki tasveer ke liye
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26th June 2009, 11:07 PM
yeh ishQ kho kar bhi unn beganO ko, diL se duaa deta haiN,
jisne di thi kabhi is dil ko khushi,unki ek yaad se rulaa deta haiN.
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Originally Posted by kwahish
Very Nice thought........
Yehi samajh liya unhone apne haaton ki lakeeron se
Ab Dil mein koyi jagah nahi anjane ki tasveer ke liye
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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27th June 2009, 04:04 PM
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yeh ishQ kho kar bhi unn beganO ko, diL se duaa deta haiN,
jisne di thi kabhi is dil ko khushi,unki ek yaad se rulaa deta haiN.
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Hamara haal bhi to kuch kuch aisa hai
Muskurata chehra bhi rote hua jaisa hai
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27th June 2009, 04:28 PM
aaise naa roKo mere iss bahate dard ko,
k yeh to saza haiN kisi se diL lagane kii...
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Originally Posted by kwahish
Hamara haal bhi to kuch kuch aisa hai
Muskurata chehra bhi rote hua jaisa hai
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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27th June 2009, 05:15 PM
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aaise naa roKo mere iss bahate dard ko,
k yeh to saza haiN kisi se diL lagane kii...
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Yehi hota hai aksar pyar mein ke dard milta hi hai
Mukammal mohobbat bhi ho toh dil dukhata hi hai
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27th June 2009, 05:21 PM
aaisa naa likh mehfiL meiN dard-e-mohabbat,
k kahi unka naam charcha-e-aam naa ho jayee..
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Originally Posted by kwahish
Yehi hota hai aksar pyar mein ke dard milta hi hai
Mukammal mohobbat bhi ho toh dil dukhata hi hai
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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27th June 2009, 05:31 PM
Yeh baat aur hai woh baat aur thi
Chand toh wohi hai per raat aur thi
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27th June 2009, 08:16 PM
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Yeh baat aur hai woh baat aur thi
Chand toh wohi hai per raat aur thi
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"Thahra hua chaand bhi tha raat bhi gumgeen thi,
dosto ! mere dard se wakif aasmaan ki har shai thi"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th June 2009, 10:53 AM
Tu Ne Dhaye Hain Sitam, Tou Yahi Samjhenge Ham
Aapni Qissmat Hi Kuchh Aisi Thi Ke Dil Tout Gaaya...nm
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28th June 2009, 02:09 PM
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Tu Ne Dhaye Hain Sitam, Tou Yahi Samjhenge Ham
Aapni Qissmat Hi Kuchh Aisi Thi Ke Dil Tout Gaaya...nm
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Yahan ajnabiyon ki bheed kuch jyada ho rahi hai
Mere apne bhi ab unme hi shumar nazar aate hai
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28th June 2009, 02:30 PM
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Yahan ajnabiyon ki bheed kuch jyada ho rahi hai
Mere apne bhi ab unme hi shumar nazar aate hai
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"es dil mein mohabat ka diya jala hai jab se,
tab se har taraf SANAM hi nazar aate haiN"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th June 2009, 02:39 PM
" NazrooN meiN kashish aur labooN meiN hashi haiN
yeh unke milane andaaz haiN yaa meri dilkashii haiN "
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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28th June 2009, 02:43 PM
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"es dil mein mohabat ka diya jala hai jab se,
tab se har taraf SANAM hi nazar aate haiN"
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Haal hai kahaN sahiN "Jaan" teri furkhat mein
Dekh le aaj ho gaya hai aashiq ad-mara tera
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28th June 2009, 03:14 PM
" Jarra-Jarra kar raha haiN aab yeh pukar khuda se
aab na karana kuch QurbaN ishQ meiN bandooN se.. "
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Originally Posted by kwahish
Haal hai kahaN sahiN "Jaan" teri furkhat mein
Dekh le aaj ho gaya hai aashiq ad-mara tera
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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28th June 2009, 03:24 PM
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" Jarra-Jarra kar raha haiN aab yeh pukar khuda se
aab na karana kuch QurbaN ishQ meiN bandooN se.. "
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Omi Bhai yeh Bait Bazi ke kuch rules hai use flow karo....Iska rule aisa hai sher ka last word se hume sher shuru karna hai... Jaise mere sher ka last word tha tera te...ra
aapko wahan ra se sher shuru karna hai ok...
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30th June 2009, 11:50 AM
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Haal hai kahaN sahiN "Jaan" teri furkhat mein
Dekh le aaj ho gaya hai aashiq ad-mara tera
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"raakh bhi hawaon mein uda karti thi kabhi...
lekin ab kisi ke paas jalane ko dil nahin hai...."
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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30th June 2009, 05:41 PM
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"raakh bhi hawaon mein uda karti thi kabhi...
lekin ab kisi ke paas jalane ko dil nahin hai...."
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Yeh dil kayi baar jala hai jazbat e ishq ki aag mein
Fakhat rakh ka dher bacha hai ab yeh dil nahi lagta
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2nd July 2009, 10:06 PM
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Yeh dil kayi baar jala hai jazbat e ishq ki aag mein
Fakhat rakh ka dher bacha hai ab yeh dil nahi lagta
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"Tere saath hai mujhe jannat ke jaisa,
ek pal ka saath lage muje umr jaisa"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd July 2009, 10:20 PM
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"Tere saath hai mujhe jannat ke jaisa,
ek pal ka saath lage muje umr jaisa"
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samne to tha ek behad khoobsurat sa khawab mere
Magar afsos ke woh khawab hi raha haqeekhat nahi
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2nd July 2009, 10:27 PM
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samne to tha ek behad khoobsurat sa khawab mere
Magar afsos ke woh khawab hi raha haqeekhat nahi
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"hai Tabiyat aaj kuch udhas aur gumgeen si,
dil behlane ko kyun na dard ko cheda jaye"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd July 2009, 10:34 PM
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"hai Tabiyat aaj kuch udhas aur gumgeen si,
dil behlane ko kyun na dard ko cheda jaye"
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Yeh baat bhi khoob lagi mere hum-dard kii
Marham bhi deta hai to zakhamon ko ched ker
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3rd July 2009, 09:30 PM
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Yeh baat bhi khoob lagi mere hum-dard kii
Marham bhi deta hai to zakhamon ko ched ker
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"raat ko main kabhi tanha nahi hoti,
dard mehakte haiN mere raat bhar"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th July 2009, 08:03 PM
RishtoN ki ahmiyat batate haiN faasle,per thoda thoda sa tadpate bhi hain faasle,
diloN meiN na rahe doori dua karna,chahe yuN sada rakho milon ke ye fasle.....
(NM)
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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5th July 2009, 09:17 PM
Na jane kyon hamse koi khafa rehta hai,bina koi vajah hamse dur rehta hai..
Koi jaa ke unko bata de jara, Unki muskan se hamari aankho mein noor rehta hai
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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6th July 2009, 03:16 PM
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RishtoN ki ahmiyat batate haiN faasle,per thoda thoda sa tadpate bhi hain faasle,
diloN meiN na rahe doori dua karna,chahe yuN sada rakho milon ke ye fasle.....
(NM)
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Lekin tum apne dil mein meri mohobbat ko jagaye rakhana
Hum lakh door sahi dil mein yaadon ke diye jalaye rakhana
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6th July 2009, 07:20 PM
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Lekin tum apne dil mein meri mohobbat ko jagaye rakhana
Hum lakh door sahi dil mein yaadon ke diye jalaye rakhana
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na yaad aati uski na tanha hote hum
na fariyad karte woh na sehna pedta gum
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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7th July 2009, 02:52 PM
Mome ke rishte hai.n garmi se pighal jaayenge
Dhuup ke sheher me.in "Aazer'' ye tamaashaa na karo
Kafeel Aazer
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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8th July 2009, 03:21 PM
Raat ke waqt mere saamne aaya na karo
mom ka dil hai mera shamma jalaya na karo
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Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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8th July 2009, 03:40 PM
raat yun dil mein teri khoi hui yaad aaii...
jaise viraane mein chupke se bahaar aa jaye..
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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8th July 2009, 03:50 PM
Yaad rakho to dil ke khareeb haiN hum
Bhool jaayo to faasle bohat haiN...NM
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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8th July 2009, 10:14 PM
"Nahi hai kuch bhi mere zehan mein siwa tere....
Main teri yaad bhula doon to yaad kya rakhun??"
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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9th July 2009, 02:03 PM
nigahon se apni hame ek baar dekhiye to sahi
har gum bhul jayenge app jara awaj dijiye to sahi
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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9th July 2009, 02:24 PM
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nigahon se apni hame ek baar dekhiye to sahi
har gum bhul jayenge app jara awaj dijiye to sahi
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"hoon ab pashemaaN gunaah-e-mohabat karne ke baad,
dosto ne bahut samjaya tha gunaah karne se phele"
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th July 2009, 02:53 PM
Le gaya koi mujhe yaadon ke us safar mein
jahan se mera wajood mera na laga mujhe
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16th July 2009, 07:18 PM
wo qatal bhi kar dein to charcha nahi hota
hum aah bhi bhar le to baatein ban jaati hain
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19th July 2009, 02:36 PM
Yehi to ek farkh hai tum mein aur mujhe mein sanam
Haqeekhat se door may nahi khabon se juda tum nahi
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25th July 2009, 12:22 AM
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Yehi to ek farkh hai tum mein aur mujhe mein sanam
Haqeekhat se door may nahi khabon se juda tum nahi
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"Har waqt ka hasna tujhe barbaad na kar de...
Tanhaii ke lamhon mein kabhi ro bhi liya kar..."
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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25th July 2009, 01:13 PM
Ranjish hi sahi, dil hi dukhanay ke liye aa
aa phir se mujhe chhod ke jaanay ke liye aa
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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