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1st July 2010, 02:51 AM
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har sahar, har gal, har ghar pe tera nishaaN dikha,
bas tu hi dikhi hume, humne jab, jahaaN dekha....
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Har taraf har jagaa beshumaar aadmi
Phir bhi tanhaiyoN ka shikaar aadmi
.....................Not Mine
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1st July 2010, 03:13 AM
maikhane se, sharaab se, saaqi se jaam se,,
apni to subah shuru hoti hai shaam se...
NT MINE
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1st July 2010, 03:41 AM
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maikhane se, sharaab se, saaqi se jaam se,,
apni to subah shuru hoti hai shaam se...
NT MINE
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Saath rahkar bhi naa pahchaan saka tu mujhko
Door se dekh ke ab haath milaata kya hai
.............. Not Mine.....
In orignal post saath ke jagaah paas hai mere aise change se koi fark nahi pada I think per mera kaam tal gaya sochne ka.....
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1st July 2010, 03:58 AM
hum kaun the,kya haiN aur kya honge kabhi,
aao aaj mil vichaareN ye samasyaaeN sabhi....
NOT MINE
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2nd July 2010, 05:56 PM
lagta hai maine galat jagah chod diya chaliya ise maiN hi door kiye deta huN.....
bhaa gayi vo matwari ladki mujhko pehli nazar me,
dhoond rahe haiN usko is shahar kabhi us shahar me....
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2nd July 2010, 09:11 PM
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lagta hai maine galat jagah chod diya chaliya ise maiN hi door kiye deta huN.....
bhaa gayi vo matwari ladki mujhko pehli nazar me,
dhoond rahe haiN usko is shahar kabhi us shahar me....
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MaiN nigahoN se dekhuN to door talak nahi dekhta
Magar mere mann ki ankhoN ki koi seema nahi hai
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10th July 2010, 12:58 AM
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
Last edited by heart_killer; 10th July 2010 at 01:01 AM..
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10th July 2010, 11:13 PM
Oye tum Zinda ho,.................... KahaaN ho Bhai yaar kabhi idhar bhi aaya karo....... achcha Seema aapki padosi ka naam hia bahut pyaara hai mere bhi mohallle ki rahne wali hai ......... bus naam ki pyaari hai..
Na huN maiN tere kareeb aur naa hi aana chahuN
Tuu mujhe qaid na karle is khayaal se dil darta hai............
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10th July 2010, 11:25 PM
kabhi hume bhi kaid karlo apni nigaho me
yun na chod mujhe akeli in tanha rahon me
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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11th July 2010, 12:34 AM
Mr Gazzal jee( komal praveen sahab) aap pahle is thread ke rules follow kijiye... iske rules as a antakshree type hai aapko apna sher agle wale ke sher ke last word se start karna hai so aage se khayaal rakhiye.......
MaiN koi haara hua badshaah nahi huN
Bus tere aage jhukne ko jee chahta hai
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11th July 2010, 09:28 AM
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Mr Gazzal jee( komal praveen sahab) aap pahle is thread ke rules follow kijiye... iske rules as a antakshree type hai aapko apna sher agle wale ke sher ke last word se start karna hai so aage se khayaal rakhiye.......
MaiN koi haara hua badshaah nahi huN
Bus tere aage jhukne ko jee chahta hai
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ohhkkee kwahish ji...n 4 ur kind infrmation aapko btadu k m not komal parveen sahib m gazal sharma[a girl] so dont call me komal or ny thing else again..........
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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11th July 2010, 10:28 PM
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12th July 2010, 01:09 PM
hahahhahahaaha... are dhakkan Ghazal bolenge nahi..Likhenge bhi bol hahahha
" Intehaaa ho gai ishQ me intezaar ki Aur woh kambakht !
Sarii raat paikhane meiN hii baithe reh gaye ..... " ( Due to bad-stomach)
wah wah wah wah
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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12th July 2010, 08:12 PM
" Intehaaa ho gai ishQ me intezaar ki Aur woh kambakht !
Sarii raat paikhane meiN hii baithe reh gaye ..... " ( Due to bad-stomach)
wah wah wah wah
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gaye hum yhan bhi gaye hum vhan bhi
tum hume khin na mile dhund dala sara jhan bhi..........
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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12th July 2010, 09:54 PM
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12th July 2010, 10:10 PM
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And madam jee Im Sameer Ahemad Khan Not a female Im male.... aur aapko hindi meiN samjhaya to samjh meiN nahi aaya aur dusri launguages mujhe nahi aati....... ab is thread ka rules firse aapko samjhata huN....
YahaaN aapko last word se shayri shuru karni hai jaise antakshree hote hai... per aapne last shabd se sher kah diya wel aap kareeb kareeb aa gayi yeh to thik hai.... ab sahiN kahengi yehi ummid hai......
Besabab humara rishta bana diya aapne
Suraj ko chaand se youN juda diya aapne[/QUOTE]
ohh shukriya khan sahab apne mujhe game samjhayi,...
na hum keh sake na vo keh sake
isi vjha se hum ek dusre k na reh sake......
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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12th July 2010, 11:42 PM
ohh shukriya khan sahab apne mujhe game samjhayi,...
na hum keh sake na vo keh sake
isi vjha se hum ek dusre k na reh sake......
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Hmmm Madam jee don't call me Khansab or sameer meri ID jo hai usi naam se kahiye..... bus itna khayaal rakhiye ke maiN koi lady nahi huN....
Kuch is tarha se humara hisaab tha
Woh Qamar thi to maiN aftaab tha
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13th July 2010, 08:56 AM
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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14th July 2010, 12:22 AM
Be IntehaaN na sahiN mujh per kuch itebaar rakhna
Haqkhikhi na sahiN meri yaadoN ka koi sansaar rakhna
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14th July 2010, 10:04 AM
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Be IntehaaN na sahiN mujh per kuch itebaar rakhna
Haqkhikhi na sahiN meri yaadoN ka koi sansaar rakhna
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nanhi si pari raat khwab me aayi
pyar se sari jaadu ki baate usne sikhayi
jb uthi to sab raaz bhul gyi
vo pari naajane khawabo se khan door gyi...
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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15th July 2010, 12:21 PM
Yuh kabhi to mile meri palke teri palko se,
ek ek aansu teri palko ka main chura lunga !!
bhula duinga tujhe tera gam se rishta,
iss tarah apne hoto ki hasi tere hoto pe saza dunga !!
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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15th July 2010, 01:03 PM
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Yuh kabhi to mile meri palke teri palko se,
ek ek aansu teri palko ka main chura lunga !!
bhula duinga tujhe tera gam se rishta,
iss tarah apne hoto ki hasi tere hoto pe saza dunga !!
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very nice!
gar humse khata ho jaye to maaf kr dena
ruthna mat meri khata ka insaaf kr dena
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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16th July 2010, 03:13 PM
Not bad jii !!
Naa Kar paayenge insaaf hum dil ki tarazoo se
ki kabhi ki thi mohabbat tumse badi aarzoo se !!
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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16th July 2010, 04:13 PM
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Not bad jii !!
Naa Kar paayenge insaaf hum dil ki tarazoo se
ki kabhi ki thi mohabbat tumse badi aarzoo se !!
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silsile chahat ke yun hi chalte rahen ge
zindgi k har mod me kisi roop me zrur milte rhenge.........
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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16th July 2010, 04:15 PM
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silsile chahat ke yun hi chalte rahen ge
zindgi k har mod me kisi roop me zrur milte rhenge.........
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gale lagaa ke jo sunate the dil kii aaho.n ko
taras rahaa huu.N unhii.n kii hasiin baaho.n ko
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th July 2010, 04:21 PM
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gale lagaa ke jo sunate the dil kii aaho.n ko
taras rahaa huu.N unhii.n kii hasiin baaho.n ko
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Kaun yaad rakhata hai kisi ko bichhad jane ke baad
Jala diya Jata hai laash samjh ke mar jane ke baad...!!
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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16th July 2010, 04:24 PM
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Kaun yaad rakhata hai kisi ko bichhad jane ke baad
Jala diya Jata hai laash samjh ke mar jane ke baad...!!
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dab-dabaa aayii wo a.Nkhe.n jo meraa naam aayaa
ishq naakaaam sahii phit bhii bahot kaam aayaa
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th July 2010, 04:35 PM
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dab-dabaa aayii wo a.Nkhe.n jo meraa naam aayaa
ishq naakaaam sahii phit bhii bahot kaam aayaa
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maut par bhi hai yaqeeN Aur
Unn par bhi aitabaar hai,
dekhte haiN pahle kaun aata hai
dono ka intzaar hai !!!
-NM
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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16th July 2010, 06:41 PM
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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16th July 2010, 09:21 PM
............................ Gazzal jee zara dekh ker reply kare ke aap kahan reply kar rahi hai........ yeh baitbazi hai aapko rules samjh meiN aa gaye naa....
Yeh log hi meri mohobbat ke dushman huye haiN
Jinhe maiN puNjta tha kaltalak insaniyat ki khatir
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16th July 2010, 09:58 PM
oh ho galti se ye yhan post ho geya............
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16th July 2010, 11:16 PM
Waise.... kafi galtiya karti hai aap... LOL.... dun be so excited while posting do read den post carefully
Raste the alag, Par manzileen thi wohi,
mile hum jis mod pe apni manzil thi wohi !!
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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16th July 2010, 11:21 PM
Its ok koi gal nahi jee ....... per aage se dhayan vich rakhiyenga ke etthe pist karna nu kaise karna hai...... Sanu ek sher yaad aa gaya sii
Mahez aik ittefak ki baat thi
Ajab woh akhri mulakhat thi
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16th July 2010, 11:27 PM
Thokar kha koi sapna tootata hai aaise
toot kar koi sheeha bhikhara ho jaise.....!!
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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16th July 2010, 11:50 PM
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Thokar kha koi sapna tootata hai aaise
toot kar koi sheeha bhikhara ho jaise.....!!
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Sochta huN maiN guzre hua kal ko jab bhi
Simat aati hai umar kuch pal bhar meiN
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17th July 2010, 12:05 PM
If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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22nd July 2010, 03:27 AM
Roz roz tujko maiN yaad karte karte
Thak gaya huN faryaad karte karte
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26th July 2010, 05:08 PM
teri aaNkhon me maiN apni ek tasveer bana dooN,
chand pal ruk saath mere,tujhe aashiqui sikha dooN...
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27th July 2010, 01:24 AM
Deewaangii ki hadhoN se guzarne laga huN
Log kah rahe hai maiN pyaar karne laga huN
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27th July 2010, 01:45 AM
har gali,har ghar,har me tera nishaan dekha,
tu hi dikhi hume,humne jab jahaaN dekha....!!
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