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Shanti ki kya hai paribhasha... -
5th January 2016, 01:50 PM
naye saal me apni purani diary lekar baithi to bahut yadein taza ho gayi...salon pahle jab sdc par nahi thi jo dil me aaya dairy me likh leti thi...unhi me se ye ek kavita fir se padhi socha aap sab se share karoon......
main soch rahi thi.....
Shanti ki kya hai paribhasha
Kisi aisi jagah jaun jahaan ho shanti ki asha...
Main shor bhari bheed se door bahut door chali ja rahi thi
Par kuch awaazein fir bhi kahiin se aa rahi thi.
Palat kar dekha rasta sunsan tha,
Vo ped patte phool sab kuch anjaan tha.
Maine socha bas shanti yahiin hai
Par aisa laga mera man aur kahiin hai.
Man ko vapas lane ki koshish ki
Shunya me dhyaan lagane ki koshish ki.
Meri har koshish nakaam ho rahi thi
Vahi shor vahi awazein ab bhi aa rahi thi.
Achanak ek dheemi si awaaz mere kano se takrai..
Laga ki ye awaaz mere andar se thi aai
Are ye kya shanti to mere andar hee thi
Mere man ke shor se dabi ja rahi thi..
Ab to shanti ki talaash ke bajay
Kuch aur hee prshan mere zehan me aaye..
Ye kaisa shor jo mere andar hai..
Ye kya tufaan hai ?ye kya samandar hai?
madhu..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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5th January 2016, 03:16 PM
bahut khoob,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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5th January 2016, 08:10 PM
waahhhhh bahut khoob khayaal they aapke us waqt bhii madhu ji.....
behad gahre ehsaas uar sache , seedhe dil ki gahraaiyon se nikle hue..... shaanti ki paribhasha jo aapne bataai hai is kavita me wo tareef ke kaabil hai...
daad qubool kijiyegaa.... likhti rahiye
Shaad...
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14th January 2016, 05:40 PM
Nice thought..............................
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14th January 2016, 07:08 PM
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bahut khoob,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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dhanywaad rajinder ji...jo aapko ye koshish pasand aayi...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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15th January 2016, 09:49 AM
sahi baat kahi madhu....bahut acche lgi tumhari soch
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th January 2016, 11:35 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
waahhhhh bahut khoob khayaal they aapke us waqt bhii madhu ji.....
behad gahre ehsaas uar sache , seedhe dil ki gahraaiyon se nikle hue..... shaanti ki paribhasha jo aapne bataai hai is kavita me wo tareef ke kaabil hai...
daad qubool kijiyegaa.... likhti rahiye
Shaad...
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ji shaad ji......us vaqt zyada sochte nahi the bas jo dil me aaya use likh liya karte the......
achcha laga aapko pasand aaye khayaal..
shukriya..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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31st January 2016, 11:20 PM
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Nice thought..............................
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Thanks sarika...................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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6th February 2016, 02:49 PM
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sahi baat kahi madhu....bahut acche lgi tumhari soch
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bahut shukriya di............
regards
madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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