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ja raha hu tere birha main yeh jaha chod kar, ab bhi gar bulla legi tu to mai thahar jaounga....... -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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30th August 2006, 11:22 AM
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ja raha hu tere birha main yeh jaha chod kar, ab bhi gar bulla legi tu to mai thahar jaounga....... -sunita virender sunita ji bhut pyari gazal apne anjaam tak pounchai...ab main ek nai gazal shuru kar raha hoon appka saath chhahta hoon.. 1st share kitna pakka kitna pyara hai teri chhahat ka rang, aaftaab se bhee sunehra hai teri chhahat ka rang..... ,veer, ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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30th August 2006, 01:42 PM
Pichali ghazal pe aap sabko mubarakbaad dene aayi hoon...kuchh maamuli se changes kiye thhe...dekh lijieygaa...
1st sher itna toota hu ki chuney se bikhar jaunga, agar aur dua dogey jeene ki to mar jaunga.... --sunita 2nd sher pad chuki hai aadat ab mujhe gham sehne ki gham ki dunia ko chodhkar main kidhar jaunga --'dilip' 3rd sher tanhaiyon se yuun ho gai mohabbat humko, apna saya bhee dekhunga to darr jaounga...... --'veer' 5th sher zindagi se berukhi, mohhabat ki nishani teri teri mohhabat mein naam amar kar jaounga.... --dilip 6th sher haath pakda hai to na chodhna beech raah mein chuuta jo tera haath tau main bikhar jaounga --sunita virender 7th sher ho gaya hoon pather raah teri takte takte hathon se tuu apne jo choo le to sanwar jaounga.... --dilip 8th sher yeh zindagi hai kya bus ik nafas kee baat hai mile jo tujhe khushi, main pal mein guzar jaounga --paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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30th August 2006, 01:48 PM
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kitna pakka kitna pyara hai teri chhahat ka rang, aaftaab se bhee nyaara hai teri chhahat ka rang..... --veer please continue radeef = teri chahat ka rang kaafiya = pyara, nyaara, kinara, yaaraa gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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aapne yahan aakar jo hame izzat bakhshi hai uske liye shukriya .... or aapne mere sher ko is gazal main shamil karke jo izzat afjai hai uske liye main shukurguzar hoon. aapne jo thoda bahut correction in shers main kiya hai. isse un shers main jaan aa gayi hai......... shukriya isi prakar aap hamara margdarshan karti rahe.n didi agar aap thoda sa waqt or nikal kar isse pahle wali gazal jo aapne shuru ki thi use bhi yaha apne sudharo ke sath rakh sake.n to bahut kuch seekhne ko milega... dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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30th August 2006, 01:57 PM
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kitna pakka kitna pyara hai teri chhahat ka rang, aaftaab se bhee nyaara hai teri chhahat ka rang..... --veer please continue radeef = teri chahat ka rang kaafiya = pyara, nyaara, kinara, yaaraa ------------ parastaar paras ji appka bhut bhut shukria jo appne mere share main tabdeeli karke usko or khub surat bana diya.......lakin maine sunehra is liye kaha thaa ta ki is main kafia ......ra ......ho jaye ta ki sab ko aasani ho jaye.....jiyada lafaz mil jate sabko likhnr ko....bakki jaise appko acha lage.......raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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30th August 2006, 03:08 PM
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kitna pakka kitna pyara hai teri chhahat ka rang, aaftaab se bhee nyaara hai teri chhahat ka rang..... --veer 2nd sher dil me chaya sukoon sa, jisdin se paya pyar tera mila hai jindgi ko kinara jab chada chahat ka rang. dilip raj sahab bahut kathin hai ye gazal.... fir bhi koshish ki hai.. agar redif kafiya thik ho isme/........ Kya ye thik hai? dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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jab bhi kahi kisi mahfil mai tera koi jikar chaley, mujhe pyara sa ahsaas karra jata hai teri chahat ka rang... -sunita virender dosto maine share likh to diya hai par lag raha hai kahi kuch galat hai, agar kuch galat lagey to app thik kar saktey hain. plsss.....! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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30th August 2006, 08:32 PM
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jab bhi kisi mahfil mai tera koi zikar chaley, mujhe lage sabse pyara hai teri chahat ka rang... -sunita virender 4th share ek berang c tasveer se hua samna aksar, jab bhee dil se uttara hai teri chhahat ka rang...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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rangey bahar dekhi hai humney kai daffa, sabse alag aur nayara hai teri chahat ka rang..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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31st August 2006, 10:39 AM
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rangey bahar dekhi hai humney kai daffa, sabse alag aur nayara hai teri chahat ka rang..... -sunita virender 6th share jab kabhi gam-e-daura ne sataya hai humme, dubte ko tinke ka sahara hai teri chhahat ka rang..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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31st August 2006, 11:17 AM
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tanhaiyo ka shikar tha main tujse milne se pahle, dil main mohhabt ka ishara hai teri chahat ka rang.. dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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31st August 2006, 11:56 AM
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rangey bahar dekhi hai humney kai daffa, sabse alag aur nayara hai teri chahat ka rang..... -sunita virender 6th share jab kabhi gam-e-daura ne sataya hai humme, dubte ko tinke ka sahara hai teri chhahat ka rang..... 'veer' 7th sher tanhaiyo ka shikar tha main tujse milne se pahle, dil main mohhabt ka ishara hai teri chahat ka rang.. dilip 8th sher tujhko ye gham raha tujhe chaahat nahi mili is gham ne aur nikhaara hai teri chaahat ka rang |
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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31st August 2006, 12:21 PM
dosto last gazal bhut umda bani hai.....sabhi ne dil se koshish ki thee ki acha likha jaye.......ab ek naya agzaag......
1st share waqt ko mat dekho iski koi umar nahi hoti, kab mil jaye khuda usko bhee khabar nahi hoti...... 'veer' dosto is gazal main kaffiya hai......umar.....khabar......be-khabar....dagar......sehar......nazar.......shazza r.....or radeef hai ....nahi hoti......ab app apni apni koshisk shuru karain.......raj... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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waqt ko mat dekho iski koi umar nahi hoti, kab mil jaye khuda usko bhee khabar nahi hoti...... 'veer' 2nd sher jindgi mili hai to gujar le hanste gaate e dil kabhi mout ke aane ki koi khabar nahi hoti..... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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yu to har kisi ke haal ki usko khabar hoti hai, bas ek hum hi hai jispar uski nazar nahi hoti.... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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31st August 2006, 03:45 PM
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yu to har kisi ke haal ki usko khabar hoti hai, bas ek hum hi hai jispar uski nazar nahi hoti.... -sunita virender wah kaya baat hai really touchy... 4th share andhera to ab bhee bikhra hai mere har su, taaron ke dubne se hee to sehar nahi hoti.... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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yu to har kisi ke haal ki usko khabar hoti hai, bas ek hum hi hai jispar uski nazar nahi hoti.... -sunita virender wah kaya baat hai really touchy... 4th share andhera to ab bhee bikhra hai mere har su, taaron ke dubne se hee to sehar nahi hoti.... 'veer' 5th sher taraashaa jaata hai rakhaa jataa hai numayish ko kaun kehta hai ke heere ki kadar nahi hoti |
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taraashaa jaata hai rakhaa jataa hai numayish ko kaun kehta hai ke heere ki kadar nahi hoti.... 'gafil' 6th share baar baar wo aate rehte hai meri kabar pe yaro main kaise maan lu unko meri fikar nahi..... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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har pahchaan wale se woh haal puchey hai mera, kaise maan lu ki usko meri koi khabar nahi hoti..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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1st September 2006, 12:32 PM
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baar baar wo aate rehte hai meri kabar pe yaro main kaise maan lu unko meri fikar nahi..... 'veer' dosto is share main mujhy thori galafehmi ho gai mujhe isko theek kar raha hoon..... 6th share baar baar wo aate rehte hai meri kabar pe main kaise maan lu unko meri fikar nahi hoti........ 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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har pahchaan wale se woh haal puchey hai mera, kaise maan lu ki usko meri koi khabar nahi hoti..... -sunita virender 8th share is qadar gar na bhatkta teri talaash mein, mere qadmon se anjan koi dagar nahi hoti...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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waqt ko mat dekho iski koi umar nahi hoti,
kab mil jaye khuda usko bhee khabar nahi hoti...... 'veer' jindgi mili hai to gujar le hanste gaate e dil kabhi mout ke aane ki koi khabar nahi hoti..... dilip yu to har kisi ke haal ki usko khabar hoti hai, bas ek hum hi hai jispar uski nazar nahi hoti.... sunita ji andhera to ab bhee bikhra hai mere har su, taaron ke dubne se hee to sehar nahi hoti.... 'veer' taraashaa jaata hai rakhaa jataa hai numayish ko kaun kehta hai ke heere ki kadar nahi hoti.... 'gafil' baar baar wo aate rehte hai meri kabar pe yaro main kaise maan lu unko meri fikar nahi..... 'veer' har pahchaan wale se woh haal puchey hai mera, kaise maan lu ki usko meri koi khabar nahi hoti..... sunita virender is qadar gar na bhatkta teri talaash mein, mere qadmon se anjan koi dagar nahi hoti...... 'veer' chaliye ye gazal bhi apne anjam tak pahuch gayi hai..... main to is gazal ke baare main apni rai de nahi sakta ki kaisi bahi hai.. kyoun ki main gazal ke mamle main unknown hoon ... aap hi bataiye kaisi bani hai..... chaliye nayi gazal koun shuru kar raha hai " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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1st September 2006, 02:03 PM
dosto kush ehsaas utth rahe hai seene main jo kagaz par aane ke liye machal rahe hai......so arz karta hoon.....
1st share kiyon na chaand ko zamee pe uttara jaye, uska chhehra tere shaparsh se nikhara jaye...... ,veer' dosto is gazal main kaffiya hai......uttara....pukara,....hamara.....nikhara.. ...sahara....dulara......kinara.....tumhara......o r..... jaye.... is main radeef hai.....to shuru ho jao or koshish karna ek behtreen gazal bane....share ki legnth ka poora poora dhyaan rahe.......raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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kiyon na chaand ko zamee pe uttara jaye, uska chhehra tere shaparsh se nikhara jaye...... ,veer' wah raj sahab kya aagaj kiya hai aapne is nayi gazal ka 2nd sher main tod doonga aaj us chand ka bhi garoor chalo aaj us chand ko bhi aaine me utara jaye... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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pa liya hai tujko to tamana nahi ab kisi aur ki, tu mera hai, ab chahey choot har sahara jaye..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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pa liya hai tujko to tamana nahi ab kisi aur ki, tu mera hai, ab chahey choot har sahara jaye..... -sunita virender bhut acha likha hai sunita ji.....keep it up..... 4th share insaano ke sehar main koi nahi sunta hamari, aao pathron ke sehar main kisi ko pukara jaye...... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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insaano ke sehar main koi nahi sunta hamari, aao pathron ke sehar main kisi ko pukara jaye...... "veer" 5th sher dil chura ke mera jo hanste ho tum ai kaash kabhi siine se tumahaara jaye |
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Janaab Dilip ji Muaff kijiyega shayri ke tech aspects se zyaada waqif nahin hun abhi . phir koshish karta hun pls bataaiyega agar thiik hai ya aap hii thiik karke post kar diijiiyega apna samajh kar....
4th share insaano ke sehar main koi nahi sunta hamari, aao pathron ke sehar main kisi ko pukara jaye...... "veer" 5th sher dil chura ke mera jo hans diyaa karte ho tum ai kaash ke kisii roz ye siine se tumhaara jaye |
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eh dost es tarah na karo sabse tum be-rukhi, aisa na ho ki kahi choot har sahara jaye....... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Originally posted by ghaafil Janaab Dilip ji Muaff kijiyega shayri ke tech aspects se zyaada waqif nahin hun abhi . phir koshish karta hun pls bataaiyega agar thiik hai ya aap hii thiik karke post kar diijiiyega apna samajh kar.... 4th share insaano ke sehar main koi nahi sunta hamari, aao pathron ke sehar main kisi ko pukara jaye...... "veer" 5th sher dil chura ke mera jo hans diyaa karte ho tum ai kaash ke kisii roz ye siine se tumhaara jaye -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 6th share eh dost es tarah na karo sabse tum be-rukhi, aisa na ho ki kahi choot har sahara jaye....... -sunita virender ------------ Sunita Virender Singh 7th sher ish tarha na yun chaha karo tum mujhe, kahi chahat par tumhari nazar na lag jaye..... dhaval |
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pathron ko ro-ro kar apna dard sunatey ho, kabhi ek baar humko bhi dil se pukara jaye..... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd September 2006, 07:20 PM
dilip ji,sunita ji..pooja ji.....dhaval ji.....gafil ji.....main app sabko mubarak bad dena chhahta hoon....jo app is silsile ko thame huie ho.....appse guzarish hai ki app apne or dosto ko bhee yaha par invite zaroor karain.....aao hum ek naya aagaaz karte hai......
1st share mehndi ne azaab dono taraf aag lagai huie hai, udhar haatho pe to idhar dil main lagai huie hai..... 'veer' dosto is gazal main kaffiya hai....aai.....lagai.....mehkai.....sunai.....dikh ai.....sehnai....batai....or is main radeef hai....huie hai.....ab app isko poori karo....raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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3rd September 2006, 07:44 AM
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unke hatho main Laga hain mere lahoo ka rang , duniya ki nazar main unne mehandi rachai huie hai dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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hi -
4th September 2006, 12:11 PM
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mehndi ne azaab dono taraf aag lagai huie hai, udhar haatho pe to idhar dil main lagai huie hai..... 'veer' 2nd share unke hatho main Laga hain mere lahoo ka rang , duniya ki nazar main unne mehandi rachai huie hai dilip 3rd share rishton ko kaya khub nibhaya hai humne taumar, dekho hamari mayat main zindagi bhe aiye huie hai.... 'veer' ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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6th September 2006, 11:03 AM
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unke chahrey par dekho aaj bhi mere pyar ki parchaei, meri mohabat marne ke baad bhi rang laye hue hai... -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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her ek juwa.N per hai dastan-e- mohbbat meri jabki aaj jindgi meri mujhse hee parai huie hai.... dilip " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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