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Jan Jan bheega.... Tan man Bheega - 6th January 2015, 01:01 AM

Jan Jan bheega.... Tan man Bheega
Aaj kahi barsaat hui hai....

Man me ab kyu... bechaini hai..
Aaj kahi kuch baat hui hai...

Mere naina... jalthal jalthal..
Naina. unke.Harzai..

Sapne dekhe.. Aankhein Unke..
Aaj kahi Fir raat hui hai.....

Dekhe darpan... Un me apney..
Hamne keval ye chaha..

Darpan tute.. Sathi chootey...
Aaj kahi Fir ghaat hui hai...



Naresh dadhichi sir k misre " Jan Jan bheega... Tan man Bheega... Aaj kahi barsaat hui hai"... Ko ek kavita me samahit karne ki ek choti si koshish
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6th January 2015, 11:14 AM

Bahut achchi kavita huyi hai..ashwini ji...
mubarakbaad..



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re - 6th January 2015, 02:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Madhu 14 View Post
Bahut achchi kavita huyi hai..ashwini ji...
mubarakbaad..
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji khush rahiye


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