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Love Nasha - 17th December 2003, 03:48 PM
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Haan, zaroor aise hi hogi. Nice one. Thanks. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.

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27th January 2005, 07:27 PM
Dear Rohin,
Its cool, bahut hi acha hai.

Aankhon ke nashe me doob jaiye


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28th January 2005, 12:23 AM
I cant believe this...

This is the first ever sher written by me it was written about 7 yrs ago and this was i think my first post ever at shayri.com...

I never knew this existed here as that time i was new to shayri.com and didnt know how to post till i saw it.

Thanks Nidhi.

Pata nahi tumhe yeh kaise mil gaya.

thanks for replying to it.

I will cherish Shimul and ur Reply to it

Hi Shimul,

I never knew you replied to this post. ... I think i unsuscribed to it long time bacck....

Oh it feels so great to see your reply here

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Re: Nasha - 28th January 2005, 12:25 AM
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Tere ankhon mein jo nasha hai
Woh nasha sharab mein kahan
tere oton mein jo kashish hai
woh kashish inteezar mein kahan

There is a spelling mistake in the sher

instead of oton it will be hoton

Tere ankhon mein jo nasha hai
Woh nasha sharab mein kahan
tere hoton mein jo kashish hai
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28th January 2005, 03:28 PM
Rohin bhai ka chal raha hai.....
Bahut koob aur aage likiye sahaab

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28th January 2005, 03:54 PM
Arre shadow bhai kya kahoon,

this was my first post at shayri.com

Tab kisse ne isse padha nahi to mujhe laga kissi ko pasand nahi aaya.

To ab aap ki guzarish par ek sher

Teri Ankhon ke gehraiyon mein hain khoye hue
Yun Palkhe jo jhukai tumne aahe bharne lage
Dil ki dhadkan bhi ab humse kehne lage
"Rohin" mere dpst tu to gaya ab kaam se


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28th January 2005, 04:24 PM
Teri Ankhon ke gehraiyon mein hain khoye hue
Yun Palkhe jo jhukai tumne aahe bharne lage
Dil ki dhadkan bhi ab humse kehne lage
"Rohin" mere dpst tu to gaya ab kaam se

Jab tumne bola ye baat us se
To kya joote kaane lage
Ab chup bait na saka
to shayari likne lage
Kaha sach hum tumse
to gali dene lage

Kyon bhai ka bolte ho......

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29th January 2005, 04:48 AM
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Originally posted by shadow
Teri Ankhon ke gehraiyon mein hain khoye hue
Yun Palkhe jo jhukai tumne aahe bharne lage
Dil ki dhadkan bhi ab humse kehne lage
"Rohin" mere dpst tu to gaya ab kaam se

Jab tumne bola ye baat us se
To kya joote kaane lage
Ab chup bait na saka
to shayari likne lage
Kaha sach hum tumse
to gali dene lage

Kyon bhai ka bolte ho......
Kya baat hai Shadow ustaad,

Lagta hai sangat ka asar ho raha hai...
Ya hoton sharab ka nasha hai
Jo sar chadd h kar bol raha hai
Arre uth ja dost mere dekh suraj nikal gaya hai...LOL

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Nice to know :)** - 29th January 2005, 05:33 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by Rohin
I cant believe this...

This is the first ever sher written by me it was written about 7 yrs ago and this was i think my first post ever at shayri.com...

I never knew this existed here as that time i was new to shayri.com and didnt know how to post till i saw it.

Thanks Nidhi.

Pata nahi tumhe yeh kaise mil gaya.

thanks for replying to it.

I will cherish Shimul and ur Reply to it

Hi Shimul,

I never knew you replied to this post. ... I think i unsuscribed to it long time bacck....

Oh it feels so great to see your reply here

Thanks to both off u
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29th January 2005, 10:44 AM
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Kya baat hai Shadow ustaad,

Lagta hai sangat ka asar ho raha hai...
Ya hoton sharab ka nasha hai
Jo sar chadd h kar bol raha hai
Arre uth ja dost mere dekh suraj nikal gaya hai...LOL

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Shabab na mila to sharab ke nashe me to hoon yunhi,
Sharab chade sar, hum dua karte hain
tum chado bulandi ye zindagi,
Chadne ke adat to waise tumhe bi hai ye dost mere,
tu chod nahi pate bandaron ke sath,
chad ke bole Rohin, Dost mere sangat ka asar to hai hi.

Hai ki nahi?

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29th January 2005, 12:51 PM
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Shabab na mila to sharab ke nashe me to hoon yunhi,
Sharab chade sar, hum dua karte hain
tum chado bulandi ye zindagi,
Chadne ke adat to waise tumhe bi hai ye dost mere,
tu chod nahi pate bandaron ke sath,
chad ke bole Rohin, Dost mere sangat ka asar to hai hi.

Hai ki nahi?

Hi Shadow,

Sharab ka nasha bhi koi nasha hai
Karna hai to kissi ki Ankhon ka kar
Karna hai to Kissi ki Mohaabat ka kar
Karna hai to Zindagi ka kar

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Hi Shadow,

Sharab ka nasha bhi koi nasha hai
Karna hai to kissi ki Ankhon ka kar
Karna hai to Kissi ki Mohaabat ka kar
Karna hai to Zindagi ka kar

Thanks
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Karna hai to Zindagi ka kar
Rohin dost,
Aanken aur Mohabbat se doka hua,
Kabi jaan nahi paaye yeh kya hua
Ab to sharab ek sahara hai
Zindagi to guzar rahi hai bematlab
Zindagi ka nasha karna to lo ek jam
Rangeen dikega maut bi,
Jiska abi intezar hain....

nJoy till it ends....

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31st January 2005, 07:46 AM
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"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life:
It Goes On..."

Phirse soch lijiye Alisha ji
It goes on ---- Till when

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31st January 2005, 12:08 PM
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Rohin dost,
Aanken aur Mohabbat se doka hua,
Kabi jaan nahi paaye yeh kya hua
Ab to sharab ek sahara hai
Zindagi to guzar rahi hai bematlab
Zindagi ka nasha karna to lo ek jam
Rangeen dikega maut bi,
Jiska abi intezar hain....

nJoy till it ends....
Sahara sharab ka kya baat hai
Ladkhadate kadam kya baat hai
Rangeen Duniya kya baat hai
Maut ka inteezar Kya baat hai
Lagta hai Nasha abhi chadha hai
NAshe se uth dost mere
Zindagi khud ek nasha hai

Kadam maut ki taraf badte badte behak gaye maikhane ki aur
Socha tha maut ho jaayegi aansan, Magar kaun kambakht janta tha...Ki Sirf yaad wohi aayegi pee ke sharab

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31st January 2005, 12:41 PM
Quote:
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Sahara sharab ka kya baat hai
Ladkhadate kadam kya baat hai
Rangeen Duniya kya baat hai
Maut ka inteezar Kya baat hai
Lagta hai Nasha abhi chadha hai
NAshe se uth dost mere
Zindagi khud ek nasha hai

Kadam maut ki taraf badte badte behak gaye maikhane ki aur
Socha tha maut ho jaayegi aansan, Magar kaun kambakht janta tha...Ki Sirf yaad wohi aayegi pee ke sharab

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Bandhu,
Nasha woh hai jo kud ko bulade
Zindagi yaadon ki baarat hai,
Nasha ye zindagi bulane ki baat hai,
Isi liye kehte hain dost piyo vodka ya rum
Sake ya beer, Buljao kud ko....
(Except for agle din ka hangover, baki sab teek hai!!!!)

Ek baat to teek kaha, peeke bi usiki yaad aye
Isi liye sahaab hum kabi rukte nahi peete jate hain yunhi....
Bhai mere Zindagi nasha nahi hai, maut hai Nasha
Jab na kuch yaad aye, na koyi tadpaye
Bas lambi neend mein hum kud ko bhool jaye

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hi - 31st January 2005, 04:50 PM
Tere ankhon mein jo nasha hai
Woh nasha sharab mein kahan
tere oton mein jo kashish hai
woh kashish inteezar mein kahan



well .... acha likha hai rohin.................wo kahte hai na

kaun kahta hai ,usne may nahi pi,
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31st January 2005, 06:37 PM
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Phirse soch lijiye Alisha ji
It goes on ---- Till when
Shadowji...yeh discussion mere sig par nahin...balki Rohin ki shayri pe hai. So agar hum uski shayri discuss karein to behtar hoga.

friendnidhi:

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Nidha ji, pehli baar to yeh ki wo icon aapke liye nahin tha. Aur main yehi baat aapse bhi keh sakti thi ki...agar aapko mere icon pasand nahin aaya...to usse ignore kar deti.

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Kiya maza ki untaklifo - 31st January 2005, 10:49 PM
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Hi mukesh ji,

aap yahan aaye mujhe acha laga.

Bhai dost aapne shayri to bahut achi ki magar aapka ishara mein samjha nahi.

Zara nadaan hoon. Samjhaiyega zaroor

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Oh sorry it was not discussion just an joke, and Rohin ke saath ka discussion tho abi chal raha hain.
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Shadowji...yeh discussion mere sig par nahin...balki Rohin ki shayri pe hai. So agar hum uski shayri discuss karein to behtar hoga.

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Nidha ji, pehli baar to yeh ki wo icon aapke liye nahin tha. Aur main yehi baat aapse bhi keh sakti thi ki...agar aapko mere icon pasand nahin aaya...to usse ignore kar deti.

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Re: hi - 1st February 2005, 06:10 AM
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Tere ankhon mein jo nasha hai
Woh nasha sharab mein kahan
tere oton mein jo kashish hai
woh kashish inteezar mein kahan



well .... acha likha hai rohin.................wo kahte hai na

kaun kahta hai ,usne may nahi pi,
kaun juthi kasam uthata hai,
mayakade se jo bach nikalta hai,
teri ankho mein dub jata hai
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Thanks mere yaar.

I loved your quote too.
do keep coming and share your thoughts as well.

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Re: Re: Nasha - 13th February 2005, 06:24 PM
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Tere ankhon mein jo nasha hai
Woh nasha sharab mein kahan
tere hoton mein jo kashish hai
woh kashish inteezar mein kahan

rohin ji.....

aaj is forum mein aaya aur aapka likha pada.....

bahut aache dost......


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13th February 2005, 08:15 PM
Hi Aman bhai,

Yeh mera pehla post that jo meine shayri.com pe kiya tha...
Ek dost ki wajah se yeh aaj sablogon ke samne aaya hai...

Shukriya aapka jo yeh aapko pasand aaya

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wow rohin its really very cool
buhut hi acha likha hai

tere hoyon mein jo kashish hai
wo kashish tere intezar mein kaha..
wow fantastic

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wow rohin its really very cool
buhut hi acha likha hai

tere hoyon mein jo kashish hai
wo kashish tere intezar mein kaha..
wow fantastic

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Thoda sa correction ek line mein tha

hoyon* = hoton

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I am glad u liked the lines... As u must have read its my forst post at shayri.com more than 1 yr back so it feels nice that it has coem this far and peopl are reading and replyign to it.

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rohin sahab
maaf kigiyega
yaha par der se aaya
bahut khoob likha hai


ek sher main bhi arz karna chahunga
lakhon haseen hai is duniya me
tum jaisa kisi zamane me nahi
yu to kitne hi jaam peete hai roz hi
par tumhari aankhon ka nasha kisi paimane me nahi..

kaisa laga zaroor bataiyega

main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

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Hi Jubin,

Arre dost der ho bhi gayi hai to koi baat nahi

Humari mehfil mein aapka humesha swaga hai..

Mil kar bethenge teen yaar
Aap mein aur yeh tanhayee

Aap ka likha hua bahut lajawab tha

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hi - 26th March 2005, 11:11 AM
Tere ankhon mein jo nasha hai
Woh nasha sharab mein kahan
tere oton mein jo kashish hai
woh kashish inteezar mein kahan


aankhn me hai nasha kyu ki tukhe dekh rahi hai
kashish intzaar me nahi, tujhme hai, jo teri aur mujhe khich rahi hai lolz

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Re: hi - 26th March 2005, 12:21 PM
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Tere ankhon mein jo nasha hai
Woh nasha sharab mein kahan
tere oton mein jo kashish hai
woh kashish inteezar mein kahan


aankhn me hai nasha kyu ki tukhe dekh rahi hai
kashish intzaar me nahi, tujhme hai, jo teri aur mujhe khich rahi hai lolz

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hi priya,

Thanks for adding ur wonderful thoughts

Nice ones

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