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Prince of angels
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Aap Ki Aankhein -
29th March 2007, 07:16 PM
kuch shayro k kuch ash aar aapki khidmat mein, hajir karta hun, ummid hai aapse ki aapko achchi lagegi.kuch jyaada hi urdu words ka istemaal kiya hai..!!
Raat ham to piye hue the magar, aap ki aankhein bhi sarabi thi,
Phir hamare kharab hone main kahiye kya kharabi thi,
Usko aana hai aur be nakab aayega,
jab tamanna pe meri shabab aayega,
malik-e-maykada reend ho jayega,
maykade mein naya inkilaab aayega.!!
AFTAB
EK UMMID
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29th March 2007, 07:26 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by taqdeer.786
kuch shayro k kuch ash aar aapki khidmat mein, hajir karta hun, ummid hai aapse ki aapko achchi lagegi.kuch jyaada hi urdu words ka istemaal kiya hai..!!
Raat ham to piye hue the magar, aap ki aankhein bhi sarabi thi,
Phir hamare kharab hone main kahiye kya kharabi thi,
Usko aana hai aur be nakab aayega,
jab tamanna pe meri shabab aayega,
malik-e-maykada reend ho jayega,
maykade mein naya inkilaab aayega.!!
AFTAB
EK UMMID
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accha likha hai dost
keep it up
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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2nd April 2007, 02:56 AM
kya baat hai janab, itne haseen baat, lagta hai jaam laga kar bhai sahab ne jhe ehsaas likha hai
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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3rd April 2007, 05:12 PM
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kya baat hai janab, itne haseen baat, lagta hai jaam laga kar bhai sahab ne jhe ehsaas likha hai
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THANK YOU MUSAFIR EK PAL.
AAPKO PASAND AAYA WOHI HAMARE LIYE
KHUSI KI BAAT HAIN
AAP KA KHAYAL RAKHNA
EK UMMID AFTAB
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18th April 2007, 03:58 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by taqdeer.786
kuch shayro k kuch ash aar aapki khidmat mein, hajir karta hun, ummid hai aapse ki aapko achchi lagegi.kuch jyaada hi urdu words ka istemaal kiya hai..!!
Raat ham to piye hue the magar, aap ki aankhein bhi sarabi thi,
Phir hamare kharab hone main kahiye kya kharabi thi,
Usko aana hai aur be nakab aayega,
jab tamanna pe meri shabab aayega,
malik-e-maykada reend ho jayega,
maykade mein naya inkilaab aayega.!!
AFTAB
EK UMMID
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nice......!
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th May 2007, 08:01 PM
Thx
Sunita Ji
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1st July 2007, 01:27 PM
thx my dear friends
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7th July 2007, 12:46 PM
Kya baat hai yaar......
Behad khubsurat......
Hum Wafa Karke Bhi
Tanha Reh Gaye.....
Sahil...
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15th September 2007, 02:43 PM
thank you
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aap savarenge to ham bahot hi achha likhne ki koshis karenge
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