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Mai be-wajah badnaam hai... -
12th January 2011, 07:49 AM
Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
Bekaar hai yaad dilana ,k shaye ye haraam hai,
Sab kuch bhool jaate hain ,jab koi leta unka naam hai!
Hum to yehi kahenge, Mai be-wajah badnaam hai,
Dard-e-dil se humko to , pahunchaati ye araam hai!
Tabaah kerti hai sharaab, ghalat is per ilzaam hai,
Madadgaar ka badnaam hona to, qudrat ka nizaam hai!
Hum ghamkhaaron ka mai ko, Tah-e-dil se salaam hai,
Bina iske to khudaa jaane, kya humara anjaam hai!
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12th January 2011, 01:46 PM
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Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
Bekaar hai yaad dilana ,k shaye ye haraam hai,
Sab kuch bhool jaate hain ,jab koi leta unka naam hai!
Hum to yehi kahenge, Mai be-wajah badnaam hai,
Dard-e-dil se humko to , pahunchaati ye araam hai!
Tabaah kerti hai sharaab, ghalat is per ilzaam hai,
Madadgaar ka badnaam hona to, qudrat ka nizaam hai!
Hum ghamkhaaron ka mai ko, Tah-e-dil se salaam hai,
Bina iske to khudaa jaane, kya humara anjaam hai!
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bahot khoob janaab bahot khoob.... chand sheron pe dil aa gaya.. Kisi sher ne yakeenan sacchai bayaan ki hai.. Kuch ne majboori to kuch ne bas khumaare-ishq.
Tabaah kerti hai sharaab, ghalat is per ilzaam hai,
Madadgaar ka badnaam hona to, qudrat ka nizaam hai!,
Is sher pe meri khaas daad pesh kar raha hoon.. Kubool karen.. aur yoonhi likhte rahen.. bazm ko apne alfaazon se nawaazte rahen, aur hame padhne ke mauke dete rahen.. khush rahiye.
shaad...
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18th January 2011, 01:52 AM
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bahot khoob janaab bahot khoob.... chand sheron pe dil aa gaya.. Kisi sher ne yakeenan sacchai bayaan ki hai.. Kuch ne majboori to kuch ne bas khumaare-ishq.
Tabaah kerti hai sharaab, ghalat is per ilzaam hai,
Madadgaar ka badnaam hona to, qudrat ka nizaam hai!,
Is sher pe meri khaas daad pesh kar raha hoon.. Kubool karen.. aur yoonhi likhte rahen.. bazm ko apne alfaazon se nawaazte rahen, aur hame padhne ke mauke dete rahen.. khush rahiye.
shaad...
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Adaab Janaab Shaad Sahab!
Beinteha maskhoor hoon aapki daad ki inyata ka aur saath he taalib hoon aapki maazrat ka dair se izhar -e-shukr kerne per! Aap jaise shayr ki daad kisi tamghay se kam nahin is nacheez k liye!
Khush Rahein, Shadaab Rahein!
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11th April 2011, 10:19 AM
Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
GOOD ONE ..............................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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11th April 2011, 05:54 PM
Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
Tabaah kerti hai sharaab, ghalat is per ilzaam hai,
Madadgaar ka badnaam hona to, qudrat ka nizaam hai!
Bahut asardaar lage hume yeh sher ... EnigmA Ji !
Acchi peshkash rahi ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai .... !
aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen .. aage bhi .. khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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14th April 2011, 06:26 PM
Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
bahoot hi khoob likha hain aapne
yunhi likhte rahiye
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Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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Thank You All! -
20th April 2011, 04:05 AM
Mohtarma Zainy Sahiba, Janaab Naresh Mehra Sahab Aur Janaab Nihaar Sahab! Mai aap sab ka tah-e-dil se mashkoor hoon! Ek baar phir se zarranawazi ka shukriya! Kush Rahein! Abaad Rahein!
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20th April 2011, 06:32 AM
Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
Beautiful lines hain.
har shaam unkay honay ka ehsaas hai
saaqi ko de diya kyun tumnay ilzaam hai
saroor mohabat ka pyala pyar ka
pitay tum, kyun husn par ilzaam hai...
bahanay pinay kay dhoondhta insaan hai...
ek haath tasveer unki ek haath jam hai
a
aisay hi kuch khayal aaye toh likh diye...ekshama kijiyega gar pasand na aaye.
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Beautiful! -
22nd April 2011, 03:14 AM
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Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
Beautiful lines hain.
har shaam unkay honay ka ehsaas hai
saaqi ko de diya kyun tumnay ilzaam hai
saroor mohabat ka pyala pyar ka
pitay tum, kyun husn par ilzaam hai...
bahanay pinay kay dhoondhta insaan hai...
ek haath tasveer unki ek haath jam hai
a
aisay hi kuch khayal aaye toh likh diye...ekshama kijiyega gar pasand na aaye.
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Adaab Mohtarma Ankita Sahiba! Welcome and Hats off for your more than apt and beautiful thoughts! Every line packs a punch, Zabardast! And Many Thanks for your appreciation! Wish You Peace!
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22nd April 2011, 03:40 AM
Engima sahab,
Namaste. Lines pasand karnay ka shukriya. waisay app likhtay bahut khoob hain.
ae ashiq jara sambhal ja
husn ka yahan aana jaana hai
har ilzaam par punch dekho maar jaana hai... just joking.
A
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23rd April 2011, 03:13 AM
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Engima sahab,
Namaste. Lines pasand karnay ka shukriya. waisay app likhtay bahut khoob hain.
ae ashiq jara sambhal ja
husn ka yahan aana jaana hai
har ilzaam par punch dekho maar jaana hai... just joking.
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Adaab Ankita Sahiba! Thanks once again! Touché!
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27th April 2011, 08:46 AM
you are welcome Mr. Enigma.
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3rd May 2011, 05:59 PM
bari muddadon baad yahan se guzarna hua janab apka kallam nihyaat tareef-e-qabil hai is nacheez ki daad kabool farmaiye bahut khoob likha hai apne.. haar sher main dard bayan kia hai janab likhte rahega....
ek anjaan sa shakhs.....
Chal parin hain kashtiyaan samandar dur hai kinaara.....
in majon se puch lena kia haal hai hamaara....
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6th May 2011, 04:52 AM
kahtay hain gum bhula deti hai sharab
phir kyun kahtay hain karti hai kharab...
dard say de deti hai jo chutkara
hogi kahan aisi phir mahapara...
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Mr. Enigma ji chaltay phirtay phir aayi thi socha kuch comments hi de daloon.
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Shukriya Janaab! -
6th May 2011, 10:59 AM
Adaab Janaab Salman Sahab!
Khushaamdeed is nacheez ki bazm mein! Janaab aapki daad sar aankhon per! khoobsoorat shair likha hai aapne! Boht umdah! Bohat Shukriya! Khush Rahein! Abaad Rahein!
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Thanks Again! -
6th May 2011, 11:00 AM
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kahtay hain gum bhula deti hai sharab
phir kyun kahtay hain karti hai kharab...
dard say de deti hai jo chutkara
hogi kahan aisi phir mahapara...
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Mr. Enigma ji chaltay phirtay phir aayi thi socha kuch comments hi de daloon.
Regards,
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Adaab Mohtarma Ankita Sahiba! Pehle to aap husn ki himayat ker rahi theen aur aaj Mai ki himayat? leejiye hum bhi apne he ashaar ki zid likh dete hain..
Sharaab haqeeqatan janaab ,shar aur aab ka milan hai,
Do khatre he kaafi hain ujaadne basaa chaman hai!
Do pal k liye to bujha deti ye dil ki jalan hai,
Magar zingdi k har pehlu se mita deti ye aman hai!
Ek aur shair arz hai....
Nazron k ek dhoke ko kehte Saraab hain,
Zahan ko jo dhoka de wo shaiye ye sharaab hai!
Anyways many thanks for your Beaut ashaar as well as for dropping by! Always Welcome!
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8th May 2011, 04:47 AM
Namaste Enigma ji,
thanks for the reply to my quote. aap nay sawal kiya ki pehlay husn ki himayat aur phir sharab ki toh aap ko yaad dila doon...
husn aur sharaab ka rishta purana hai
ek botal mein bandh ek jism suhana hai
ishq ka nasha jab chadhta ashiqana hai
husn aur sharaab par ilzaam toh aana hai...
A
husn aur sharab dono ko ek hi mana gaya agar mein galat hoon toh rectify kar dijiye meri confusion ko.
Regards,
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Hmmmmmmm... -
12th May 2011, 04:18 AM
Adaab Mohtrma Ankita Sahiba,
Well You are right, from one perspective both are one and the same. But,.. for some(including mine).... its different. In many a case both have proven to be leading to deadly results. I believe its a case of
"Manzil ki kise perwaah jab, safar hi itna suhana hai,
Buraai kya do ghont peene mein, maut ne to sabhi ko aana hai!"
As you may, see its the "Nasha", "khumaar" of 'Mai' in the above shair ,
The feeling of "forgetting everything(especially pain and all the ugliness, bitterness that exists)" after consuming Alchohol. But Mohtrma, Ishq ka nasha depending on your Naseeb may result in a pleasant ending and in any case most of the times the Khumaar and Nasha of Ishq is in the pursuit of Husn, Beauty and I believe its The better of the two Nasha's.
So Mohtarma, the above are my reasons or perspectives on why one may say Husn aur Mai not being the same. But again... its my view. And everyone is entitled to hold their own view. And one last thing... hats off for your hazir jawaab Ashaar above. Keep it up and thanks for dropping by.
Khush Rahein!
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26th May 2011, 08:42 AM
Hello Enigma ji,
Sorry thodi dair say reply de rahi hoon. busy thi.
toh aap ki nazar mein dono alag alag hai but with the same ending. controversy hai yahan.
maut hai jab antim manzil
ishq ho ya ho botal ka nasha
mar toh tunay jaana hai
kya hai phir teri khata...
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27th May 2011, 03:43 PM
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Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
Bekaar hai yaad dilana ,k shaye ye haraam hai,
Sab kuch bhool jaate hain ,jab koi leta unka naam hai!
Hum to yehi kahenge, Mai be-wajah badnaam hai,
Dard-e-dil se humko to , pahunchaati ye araam hai!
Tabaah kerti hai sharaab, ghalat is per ilzaam hai,
Madadgaar ka badnaam hona to, qudrat ka nizaam hai!
Hum ghamkhaaron ka mai ko, Tah-e-dil se salaam hai,
Bina iske to khudaa jaane, kya humara anjaam hai!
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ultimate seriiously ultimate
my all congrates to u one of the best i read today
all my congrates to u
keep writing
take care nd be happy
rahi
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Controversy??? -
6th June 2011, 04:54 AM
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Hello Enigma ji,
Sorry thodi dair say reply de rahi hoon. busy thi.
toh aap ki nazar mein dono alag alag hai but with the same ending. controversy hai yahan.
maut hai jab antim manzil
ishq ho ya ho botal ka nasha
mar toh tunay jaana hai
kya hai phir teri khata...
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Adaab Mohtrma Ankita Sahiba!
Apologies for the late reply! Yes both are different in 'My' humble opinion. But that is mine not anyone else's so there shouldn't be 'Any' controversy as my opinion shouldn't matter to anyone else. And No, the ending is different but the experience of the journey is same I meant there.
Khush Rahein!
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12th June 2011, 03:20 PM
thx for the explanation Engima ji,
Aap ki nalayak you know who.
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18th December 2011, 03:18 PM
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Kuch is terha guzarti ab, humaari har shaam hai,
Ek haath tasveer unki to, aik haath jaam hai!
Bekaar hai yaad dilana ,k shaye ye haraam hai,
Sab kuch bhool jaate hain ,jab koi leta unka naam hai!
Hum to yehi kahenge, Mai be-wajah badnaam hai,
Dard-e-dil se humko to , pahunchaati ye araam hai!
Tabaah kerti hai sharaab, ghalat is per ilzaam hai,
Madadgaar ka badnaam hona to, qudrat ka nizaam hai!
Hum ghamkhaaron ka mai ko, Tah-e-dil se salaam hai,
Bina iske to khudaa jaane, kya humara anjaam hai!
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Namaste, EnigMa Ji...! Kaise heiN aap...?
Kya khoob likhaa hai aapne...! Har sher tareef-e-kaabil hai, tah-e-dil se daad qabool kareiN...!
Sharaab-e-mehfil sajaate rahiyega...!
Apna khayaal rakhna, ok...?
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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