Magar ek aur "hum" jesa kahaa se laoge? -
26th May 2007, 12:57 PM
Chale jaoge beshak meri jindagi se,
Magar is dil se kis tarah jaoge,
Aayegi meri yaad aansu bahaoge,
Chahoge mujhse milna par mil nahi paoge,
Puchega koi mere bare mein galti meri bataoge,
Honge tumhari mehfil me sabhi,
Magar hume nahi paoge,
Mehfil me rehkar bhi tanha ho jaoge,
Sochoge mere bare mein to fir pachtaoge,
Meri nazar me humesha bewafa kehlaoge,
Mana ki bana loge ek aur dost,
Magar ek aur "HUM" jesa kahaa se laoge??
Chale jaoge beshak meri jindagi se,
Magar is dil se kis tarah jaoge,
Aayegi meri yaad aansu bahaoge,
Chahoge mujhse milna par mil nahi paoge,
Puchega koi mere bare mein galti meri bataoge,
Honge tumhari mehfil me sabhi,
Magar hume nahi paoge,
Mehfil me rehkar bhi tanha ho jaoge,
Sochoge mere bare mein to fir pachtaoge,
Meri nazar me humesha bewafa kehlaoge,
Mana ki bana loge ek aur dost,
Magar ek aur "HUM" jesa kahaa se laoge??
nice creation......!
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29th May 2007, 10:58 AM
good very good keep it up yarrrr,,,,,keep writing ,,,,,
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