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8th February 2015, 12:17 PM
JawaboN ke sawaaloN meN
SawaaloN ke jawaaboN meN MaiN khoyii rahtii hooN Jane ye kin kitaaboN meN ChaNdnii maNd hai kyoN RaNg bhii sare feeke haiN NahiiN aatii hai ab sun lo Khushboo bhii gulaboN meN NeeNd ne sath jo chhoDa Merii In soonii aNkhoN ka Chain dil bhii nhiiN pataa.. Hakikat meN na khwaboN meN Mujhe khud se milaa to de Koii meraa pataa to de Chahe kah de hooN achchii Ya gintii ho kharaaboN meN chhayii kaisii udasii hai Aur khamosh haiN nagmeN Madhu kaa dil ghiraa hai Jane kaise ajaboN meN... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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8th February 2015, 08:15 PM
Waaaah kya baaat hai Madhu ji
Behad khoobsurat peshkash......bohot dino baad kuch naye ehsaas padhe......achha laga aapko padhna...daad kubul kijiyega Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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8th February 2015, 08:55 PM
Wah madhu.ji aap ki nazm mein apne man se antermanthan
pera humne ...Aur is kashmakash mein khud se sawal jawab ka anootha sangam bahut achi tarah se. pesh kiya aapne. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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9th February 2015, 09:46 AM
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waahh wahhhh waahhhhhhhhhhhhh Madhu saahibaa... kyaa kahnebahot hi rawaan nazm hai aapkii.... bas padhne lage to padhte chale gaye...... likhti rahiyegaa...... bahot si daad Shaad.... |
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10th February 2015, 08:30 PM
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aage bhi yoon hi sath dete rahiyega... khush rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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11th February 2015, 09:32 PM
madhu ji, hamesha ki tarah ek behad khoobsurat peshkash huyii hai aapki jaanib se.
Daad qubool farmayein. Regards **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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12th February 2015, 09:02 AM
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Mujhe khud se milaa to de Koii meraa pataa to de Chahe kah de hooN achchii Ya gintii ho kharaaboN meN in lines se ek purana sher yaad aaya aarsa hua khud ko dekhe, ab to apni aankhe bejo.. waahh Madhu ji behad umdaah.. saral shabd or gehri baat.. aapki khasiyet hai.. apki rachnaao ki ek baat achi lagi apki rachnaao ko samjhne ke liye shabd visesh ka gyaan jaruri nahi.. m aapki sabhi rachnaye padhta hu lekin waqt ki kami ke karn unpe comments nahi de pata iske liye maafi.. lekin is rachna ne mujhe likhne ko majboor kar diya.. ek behti nadi si lagti hai aPKI her peshkash jisme beech m kayi mode aate hai.. yuhi likhte rahe.. duaaon ke sath.. mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm |
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26th February 2015, 10:31 AM
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yoon hee sath dete rahiye.... aate rahiye....  अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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26th February 2015, 10:41 AM
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NahiiN aatii hai ab sun lo Khushboo bhii gulaboN meN .....................................wah! Sarika |
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27th February 2015, 10:54 AM
waaaaaaaaaaah...
sawaal bhii.. aur jawaab bhi.. kia kehny... bohat bohat khoob. Madhu jee... likhti rahiye.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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2nd March 2015, 12:52 AM
bohat achi koshish hai likhti rahiye yunhi
apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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5th March 2015, 11:30 AM
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aate rahein.. khush rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th March 2015, 10:49 AM
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yoon hee sath dete rahein.. duaon ke sath.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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13th March 2015, 05:14 PM
Madhu jee
namaste Bahot hi khoob likhaa hay...dil se daad Khush rahiye.... apnaa khayaal rakhen Aapka Dhaval |
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13th March 2015, 10:43 PM
JawaboN ke sawaaloN meN
SawaaloN ke jawaaboN meN MaiN khoyii rahtii hooN Jane ye kin kitaaboN meN ChaNdnii maNd hai kyoN RaNg bhii sare feeke haiN NahiiN aatii hai ab sun lo Khushboo bhii gulaboN meN NeeNd ne sath jo chhoDa Merii In soonii aNkhoN ka Chain dil bhii nhiiN pataa.. Hakikat meN na khwaboN meN Mujhe khud se milaa to de Koii meraa pataa to de Chahe kah de hooN achchii Ya gintii ho kharaaboN meN chhayii kaisii udasii hai Aur khamosh haiN nagmeN Madhu kaa dil ghiraa hai Jane kaise ajaboN meN... Madhu ji bahut hi khoobsurat rahi aap ki yeh peskash. Rajinderseep |
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16th March 2015, 04:36 PM
madhu jee...bahut hee sundar kalaam laga mujhe aapka......aise hee mehfil ko roshan karti rahiye.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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26th March 2015, 02:56 PM
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Mujhe khud se milaa to de Koii meraa pataa to de Chahe kah de hooN achchii Ya gintii ho kharaaboN meN in lines se ek purana sher yaad aaya aarsa hua khud ko dekhe, ab to apni aankhe bejo.. waahh Madhu ji behad umdaah.. saral shabd or gehri baat.. aapki khasiyet hai.. apki rachnaao ki ek baat achi lagi apki rachnaao ko samjhne ke liye shabd visesh ka gyaan jaruri nahi.. m aapki sabhi rachnaye padhta hu lekin waqt ki kami ke karn unpe comments nahi de pata iske liye maafi.. lekin is rachna ne mujhe likhne ko majboor kar diya.. ek behti nadi si lagti hai aPKI her peshkash jisme beech m kayi mode aate hai.. yuhi likhte rahe.. duaaon ke sath.. bahut bahut shukriya tabaah jee..mujhe jankar bahut khushi huyi ki aap apna keemti vaqt nikal kar meri rachnao ko padhte hain..aur meri post par reply krne ke liye vaqt nikala aapne thank u so much.... Yoon hee sath dete rahein.. khush rahein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th April 2015, 10:41 AM
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Aati rahiye... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th April 2015, 04:00 PM
Yeh ek umdaa nazm meri nazar se bach nikli thi lekin itni umdaa thi ki jaati bhi kidhar...mukarrar Madhu ji
Behad khoob yunhi likhte rahiYe Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Mafi chahti hun..hassan sahab..aaj purani rachna dekhi to dekha yahaan ab bhi sabhi ka shukriya nahi kar payi main... Bahut shukriya apka... Vaqt nikaliye kabhi aaiye sdc pe... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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