Summer Moon

[Yasmine]

Summer Moon
Silver queen rules the lone sky
No stars to be seen, no birds to fly
Though the sky is clear, her rays sheer
Weave a gauze far and near

A dexterous painter is she
Each grey wall and ghostly tree
Is draped in pearly white
How it all make so dreamy a night!

A whiff fondles with the tress sans care
Serene and proud smiles the Empress fair
As I sprawl and gaze on its divine orb
Pours softly her nimbus, pearlesque blobs

Our spirits uplifted by Nature divine
A warm bosom, a venerated shrine
We cling to, we bow our heads
When disquiet, distress drive us mad

[zainy]

Welcome to shayri.com Yasmine saheba

Very beautiful poem!

Really enjoyed each and every line of it...

Hope to read more from your side.

keep writing keep coming

[Ahmad Hyderabadi]

Originally Posted by Yasmine

Summer Moon
Silver queen rules the lone sky
No stars to be seen, no birds to fly
Though the sky is clear, her rays sheer
Weave a gauze far and near

A dexterous painter is she
Each grey wall and ghostly tree
Is draped in pearly white
How it all make so dreamy a night!

A whiff fondles with the tress sans care
Serene and proud smiles the Empress fair
As I sprawled and gaze on its divine orb
Pours softly her nimbus, pearlesque blobs

Our spirits uplifted by Nature divine
A warm bosom, a venerated shrine
We cling to, we bow our heads
When disquiet, distress drive us mad

Aadaab Mohtrma Yasmine saheba,
KhushAamDeed! Welcome to SDC, what a nice way to introduce yourself and make a graceful entry.... whats more beautiful to bring than a bouquet of flowers to the Mehfil! A beautiful composition indeed!! The first two stanzas do indeed take the liste er ln a journey into the silvery night!! Wishing all the very best for the journey ahead..... Welcome!!

[Yasmine]

Originally Posted by Ahmad Hyderabadi

Aadaab Mohtrma Yasmine saheba,
KhushAamDeed! Welcome to SDC, what a nice way to introduce yourself and make a graceful entry.... whats more beautiful to bring than a bouquet of flowers to the Mehfil! A beautiful composition indeed!! The first two stanzas do indeed take the liste er ln a journey into the silvery night!! Wishing all the very best for the journey ahead..... Welcome!!

I thank you kindly Ahmad Sahib for nice and welcoming words. I've been writing poetry on a few forums for the last three years. I'm a little novice on this forum but trying to learn the rules.
Hope you'd guide, if I do any mistake.
Thanks
Yasmin

[Yasmine]

Originally Posted by zainy

Welcome to shayri.com Yasmine saheba

Very beautiful poem!

Really enjoyed each and every line of it...

Hope to read more from your side.

keep writing keep coming

Salam dear Zainy Sahiba
I thank you for your nice and encouraging words. There's a typo in stanza3, line 3. It should have been 'sprawl' instead of 'sprawled'. How can I correct it on my page?
Thanks
Yasmin

[Hassan]

Our spirits uplifted by Nature divine
A warm bosom, a venerated shrine
We cling to, we bow our heads
When disquiet, distress drive us mad

Yasmine Saheba,

Thanks for sharing your beautiful creation with us.

Keep visiting, keep sharing,

Regards,

[zainy]

Originally Posted by Yasmine

Salam dear Zainy Sahiba
I thank you for your nice and encouraging words. There's a typo in stanza3, line 3. It should have been 'sprawl' instead of 'sprawled'. How can I correct it on my page?
Thanks
Yasmin

Sorry for replying late yasmin ji..

I did the correction. ...

actually you can edit your posts only till a certain time period. ..After that you will have to request the mods of that section for editing. ..

[Hamdam]

Yasmine ,,,

you have depicted the whiteness of moon spread all along .

You are a gifted poet in English literature and its treasure to have you here ,
do keep coming and please don't forget to add more poems from your collection her in this section ..

Awaiting your next poem eagerly ..

Regds
Sanjay Sehgal