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17th April 2015, 12:04 PM

aap sochieN .. tab tak ky liye aik sher :-


deedar-e-yaar meiN pashemaani kesi!
pyaar hai so hai, jag hansaayi kesi?


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bhai ye zaruuri nahi ke ghaza ke har sher me is lafz ka aana laazmii ho...


bas haan ek aad sher me bhi raha aur sher me us lafz ka wazan rahaa to mere khyaaal se kaafii hogaa..... aur haan bhai.... sher kahne ki to beroktok ijaazat hai.... jitte chahe sher share kijiye, magar har alahada sher me is lafz ka shaamil honaa bhi zaruuri hai....

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aap sochieN .. tab tak ky liye aik sher :-


deedar-e-yaar meiN pashemaani kesi!
pyaar hai so hai, jag hansaayi kesi?


kyaa baat hai bhai waaahhhhhhhh..............

aaghaaz ka ye aalam hai to anjaam kyaa hogaa... bahot si daad aur mubaarakbaad..

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Kabhi socha nahi tha ki aisi pur asar ghazlon se rubaruu hogi yeh mehfil. Aapko mast ki daad ke saath saath salaam bhi karta hooN.

Bahut khoob ehsaason ko aapne ghazal ka roop diya ki aaina bhi sharmaa jaaye.

Yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYeGaa
Bahut bahut shukriya mast jee.......



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Chaliye bhai yahi sahii....................

hamaari taraf se is baar ka nayaa word hai.....

deedaar.


Waaah..shaad jee.....bbeautiful word...
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aap sochieN .. tab tak ky liye aik sher :-


deedar-e-yaar meiN pashemaani kesi!
pyaar hai so hai, jag hansaayi kesi?

Bahut khoob hassan jii..
pyaar hai so hai jag hansai kesi......waaah..



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Deedaar - 26th April 2015, 11:05 AM

Shaad bhai aapke diye lafz ko lekar koshish ki hai, batayieGaa kaisi lagi...


isi hasrat se niklaa hoon tera deedaar ho jaaye
zaati taur agar na ho sare bazaar ho jaaye

sarakti ret ki tarah yeh din bhi beet jaayeGaa
khudaya is qadr kisi ka na koi bimaar ho jaaye

husn dete hue maalik nasehat yeh bhi di hoti
kisi ka qatl na unse bina hathiyaar ho jaaye

'mast' se dil-e-nadaan ko parastish* maar na daale
humhe na ruu-numaa'ii** ka kahin eitbaar ho jaaye

parastish = adoration
ruu-numaa'ii = showing the face


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ज़्याती तौर अगर न हो सरे बाजार हो जाए

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Shaad bhai aapke diye lafz ko lekar koshish ki hai, batayieGaa kaisi lagi...


isi hasrat se niklaa hoon tera deedaar ho jaaye
zaati taur agar na ho sare bazaar ho jaaye

sarakti ret ki tarah yeh din bhi beet jaayeGaa
khudaya is qadr kisi ka na koi bimaar ho jaaye

husn dete hue maalik nasehat yeh bhi di hoti
kisi ka qatl na unse bina hathiyaar ho jaaye

'mast' se dil-e-nadaan ko parastish* maar na daale
humhe na ruu-numaa'ii** ka kahin eitbaar ho jaaye

parastish = adoration
ruu-numaa'ii = showing the face


इसी हसरत से निकला हूँ तेरा दीदार हो जाए
ज़्याती तौर अगर न हो सरे बाजार हो जाए

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Waaah waah mast jii...kya khoob kalaam kaha hai deedar lafz par....holiday ke baad ka josh dikh raha hai....
Likhte rahein..
khush rahein...



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Pesh hai..Lafz deedar par ek koshish..aap sabki nazar...


Kaam aisa bhi aaj kar jayein.
Jaan lutayein kisi pe mar jayein.

Tere deedar ko bahut tarse
Yoon na ho had se ham guzar jayein.

Mushkilon se ye hausla aaya
Ab na hoga ye ki dar jayein

Faasle tum sabhi mita bhi do
Thaam lo hamko na bikhar jayein.

Tu kiran khilti dhoop ki jaise
Kaliyaan sab phool ban nikhar jayein.

Rah e duniya me fir mile na mile
Tum pukaro ki ham thahar jayein.

Meri manzil hai ek teri mahfil
baad iske 'madhu' kidhar jayein.



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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27th April 2015, 08:05 AM

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Waaah waah mast jii...kya khoob kalaam kaha hai deedar lafz par....holiday ke baad ka josh dikh raha hai....
Likhte rahein..
khush rahein...
Hahahaha...Madhu ji woh shayar hi kya jiska josh-e-junoon thanda padh jaaye...



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Pesh hai..Lafz deedar par ek koshish..aap sabki nazar...


Kaam aisa bhi aaj kar jayein.
Jaan lutayein kisi pe mar jayein.

Tere deedar ko bahut tarse
Yoon na ho had se ham guzar jayein.

Mushkilon se ye hausla aaya
Ab na hoga ye ki dar jayein

Faasle tum sabhi mita bhi do
Thaam lo hamko na bikhar jayein.

Tu kiran khilti dhoop ki jaise
Kaliyaan sab phool ban nikhar jayein.

Rah e duniya me fir mile na mile
Tum pukaro ki ham thahar jayein.

Meri manzil hai ek teri mahfil
baad iske 'madhu' kidhar jayein.
WAH WAH !!!

Pur asar Madhu ji aapka andaaz-e-bayaan kya kahen mazaa aa gaya kitni baareki aur saadgi se aapne deedaar lafz ka istemaal kiya hai is ghazal mein. Mazaa aa gaya.

Behad khoob.



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Bahut khoob hassan jii..
pyaar hai so hai jag hansai kesi......waaah..
bohat shukriyaa doston ..................


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Shaad bhai aapke diye lafz ko lekar koshish ki hai, batayieGaa kaisi lagi...


isi hasrat se niklaa hoon tera deedaar ho jaaye
zaati taur agar na ho sare bazaar ho jaaye

sarakti ret ki tarah yeh din bhi beet jaayeGaa
khudaya is qadr kisi ka na koi bimaar ho jaaye

husn dete hue maalik nasehat yeh bhi di hoti
kisi ka qatl na unse bina hathiyaar ho jaaye

'mast' se dil-e-nadaan ko parastish* maar na daale
humhe na ruu-numaa'ii** ka kahin eitbaar ho jaaye

parastish = adoration
ruu-numaa'ii = showing the face


इसी हसरत से निकला हूँ तेरा दीदार हो जाए
ज़्याती तौर अगर न हो सरे बाजार हो जाए

सरकती रेत की तरह यह दिन भी बीत जाएगा
खुदाया इस क़द्र किसी का न कोई बीमार हो जाए

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husn dete hue maalik nasehat yeh bhi di hoti
kisi ka qatl na unse bina hathiyaar ho jaaye

'mast' se dil-e-nadaan ko parastish* maar na daale
humhe na ruu-numaa'ii** ka kahin eitbaar ho jaaye


waaaah waaah .. waaaah ...

Mast bhai .. kia kehny ..

bohat umdah likha hy .....

daad qabool kejiye!


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Pesh hai..Lafz deedar par ek koshish..aap sabki nazar...


Kaam aisa bhi aaj kar jayein.
Jaan lutayein kisi pe mar jayein.

Tere deedar ko bahut tarse
Yoon na ho had se ham guzar jayein.

Mushkilon se ye hausla aaya
Ab na hoga ye ki dar jayein

Faasle tum sabhi mita bhi do
Thaam lo hamko na bikhar jayein.

Tu kiran khilti dhoop ki jaise
Kaliyaan sab phool ban nikhar jayein.

Rah e duniya me fir mile na mile
Tum pukaro ki ham thahar jayein.

Meri manzil hai ek teri mahfil
baad iske 'madhu' kidhar jayein.
Tere deedar ko bahut tarse
Yoon na ho had se ham guzar jayein.

Faasle tum sabhi mita bhi do
Thaam lo hamko na bikhar jayein.


waaaaaaaaaaaaahh! kia baat hy Madhu jee..

bohat hii accha likha hy ...

daad qabool kejiye!


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husn dete hue maalik nasehat yeh bhi di hoti
kisi ka qatl na unse bina hathiyaar ho jaaye

'mast' se dil-e-nadaan ko parastish* maar na daale
humhe na ruu-numaa'ii** ka kahin eitbaar ho jaaye


waaaah waaah .. waaaah ...

Mast bhai .. kia kehny ..

bohat umdah likha hy .....

daad qabool kejiye!
Hassan bhai daad ka behad shukriyaa. Aapki ghazal ka intezaar hai humhe.



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bachpan jawaani budhaapa
ae nokar, pension pakar, nikal!


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WAH WAH !!!

Pur asar Madhu ji aapka andaaz-e-bayaan kya kahen mazaa aa gaya kitni baareki aur saadgi se aapne deedaar lafz ka istemaal kiya hai is ghazal mein. Mazaa aa gaya.

Behad khoob.
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Tere deedar ko bahut tarse
Yoon na ho had se ham guzar jayein.

Faasle tum sabhi mita bhi do
Thaam lo hamko na bikhar jayein.


waaaaaaaaaaaaahh! kia baat hy Madhu jee..

bohat hii accha likha hy ...

daad qabool kejiye!

Shukriya janaab......sath dete rahein....



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chaleN bhai aik koshish pesh-e-nazar hai ..


" Bachpan - Jawaani - Budhaapa"


ho jaye ik taaza ghazal!
naya phool, hawa rukh badal

maa ka lams, baaap ka laad!
jhoomne laga jese hur ik pal!

shab-e-hijr zara jaldi dhal!
tulu-e-sehar phir "deedar-e-kanwal"

shab-e-khwaab ki khumaari....!
ab uth aur daftar chal!

bachpan jawaani budhaapa
ae nokar, pension pakar, nikal!

Bahut khoob hassan jii....deedar lafz ka bahut khoob istemaal..aur .zindgi ki hakikat bahut hii khoobsoorti se bayaan ki aapne.....dheron daad....



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chaleN bhai aik koshish pesh-e-nazar hai ..


" Bachpan - Jawaani - Budhaapa"


ho jaye ik taaza ghazal!
naya phool, hawa rukh badal

maa ka lams, baaap ka laad!
jhoomne laga jese hur ik pal!

shab-e-hijr zara jaldi dhal!
tulu-e-sehar phir "deedar-e-kanwal"

shab-e-khwaab ki khumaari....!
ab uth aur daftar chal!

bachpan jawaani budhaapa
ae nokar, pension pakar, nikal!
Hassan MiyaaN, kamaal karte ho janaab. Ise kehte hai bulandi ko chuu lena. Aapki is ghazal ne alfaazon ko thamne ke liye keh diya hai. Behad khoob mere bhai...yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYee



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khaak lafzoN ki pasandeedgi ky liye manoon-o-mashkoor hooN dostoN!..

milty rahiye ..


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Love Tere Husn Ko Kitni GhazloN, NazmoN meiN ChupaooN?? - 28th April 2015, 10:32 AM

aik koshish:-


tu alfaaz ki chaadar ohdh ke, haroof ki soorat nikle!
phir bhi ahbaab-o-aghyar tujhe pehchaantay haiN...


ahbaab-o-aghyar = dost aur dushman

ebaarat-e-ishQ meiN, gar tera zikr na cheedooN to...
haazreen-e-mehfil buraa maantay haiN.....

haalan ke! haal-e-dil kisi per uryaa'n nahi kiya!
shehar walay mujhe dewaana hi gardaantay haiN...


uryaa'n = zaahir
gardaantay = samjhtay

issay mohabbat ki inteha kahooN, ya pagal-pan!!
deedar-e-yaar k baad hum mithaayi baant'tay haiN..

tere husn ko kitni ghazloN, nazmoN meiN chupaooN??
meri jaan! log, mera mouzu-e-sukhn jaantay haiN...

mouzu-e-sukhn = mouzu-e-ghazal


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haalan ke! haal-e-dil kisi per uryaa'n nahi kiya!
shehar walay mujhe dewaana hi gardaantay haiN...

uryaa'n = zaahir
gardaantay = samjhtay

issay mohabbat ki inteha kahooN, ya pagal-pan!!
deedar-e-yaar k baad hum mithaayi baant'tay haiN..

Waaaaaaaah....kya khoob likha hai hassan jii..sabhi ashaar dil chhoo gaye.....
behatreen kalaam ke liye dher sari daad aur mubarak baad.



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haalan ke! haal-e-dil kisi per uryaa'n nahi kiya!
shehar walay mujhe dewaana hi gardaantay haiN...

uryaa'n = zaahir
gardaantay = samjhtay

issay mohabbat ki inteha kahooN, ya pagal-pan!!
deedar-e-yaar k baad hum mithaayi baant'tay haiN..

Waaaaaaaah....kya khoob likha hai hassan jii..sabhi ashaar dil chhoo gaye.....
behatreen kalaam ke liye dher sari daad aur mubarak baad.

bohat shukriyaa Madhu jee ....

salamat rahen..
dua-go,


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issay mohabbat ki inteha kahooN, ya pagal-pan!!
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Wah bhai - Behad umdaa yeh ek sher to jaan le gaya. Pur asar.



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Wah bhai - Behad umdaa yeh ek sher to jaan le gaya. Pur asar.
inayat hy bhai kii....

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Kaisa hai pyar ki hum duniya Jahan bhool baithe ,
Unke deedar ke sadke hum khudko bhool baithe

Hue beemar e Ishq mein rusvaee kabool baithe,
Dil ki dharkano pe likhna unka naam bhool baithe

Kwahishon ka daur kuch itna nagawar guzra,
Unki chahat mein bhejna salaam bhool baithe.

Ab bebasi ki had hai ber gayi is kadar tak,
hum apne kuuche mein lautna hi bhool baithe

Yaar mil jaye kabhi tau usko ye paigam dena ,
apna banane ki chahat mein apno ko bhool baithe.



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Kaisa hai pyar ki hum duniya Jahan bhool baithe ,
Unke deedar ke sadke hum khudko bhool baithe

Hue beemar e Ishq mein rusvaee kabool baithe,
Dil ki dharkano pe likhna unka naam bhool baithe

Kwahishon ka daur kuch itna nagawar guzra,
Unki chahat mein bhejna salaam bhool baithe.

Ab bebasi ki had hai ber gayi is kadar tak,
hum apne kuuche mein lautna hi bhool baithe

Yaar mil jaye kabhi tau usko ye paigam dena ,
apna banane ki chahat mein apno ko bhool baithe.
Sanjay Bhai khushamadeed aapka is mehfil mein swaagat hai tahe dil se aur khoob ghazal huyi aapne deedar lafz ko lekar khoob ehsaas pesh kiye hai. Technically kahun to qafiyaa 1st aur aakhiri do sher mein baaki sheron se thoda alag hai jabki radif 'bhool baithe' aapne baraabar nibhaaya haiN. Aap qafiye ki marammat karein is ghazal mein to muqammal ho jaaye.

Yunhi mehfil mein shirkat karte raheiN aur likhte raheiN.



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Kaisa hai pyar ki hum duniya Jahan bhool baithe ,
Unke deedar ke sadke hum khudko bhool baithe

Hue beemar e Ishq mein rusvaee kabool baithe,
Dil ki dharkano pe likhna unka naam bhool baithe

Kwahishon ka daur kuch itna nagawar guzra,
Unki chahat mein bhejna salaam bhool baithe.

Ab bebasi ki had hai ber gayi is kadar tak,
hum apne kuuche mein lautna hi bhool baithe

Yaar mil jaye kabhi tau usko ye paigam dena ,
apna banane ki chahat mein apno ko bhool baithe.
waaaaah saahab waaaaaaaah.................


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Unke deedar ke sadke hum khudko bhool baithe

Hue beemar e Ishq mein rusvaee kabool baithe,
Dil ki dharkano pe likhna unka naam bhool baithe

Kwahishon ka daur kuch itna nagawar guzra,
Unki chahat mein bhejna salaam bhool baithe.

Ab bebasi ki had hai ber gayi is kadar tak,
hum apne kuuche mein lautna hi bhool baithe

Yaar mil jaye kabhi tau usko ye paigam dena ,
apna banane ki chahat mein apno ko bhool baithe.

Bahut khoob sanjay jiiii................



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wah wah wah! kya mehfil saji hai!!

majaa aa gaya sabhi ek se badkar ek. ek adna si koshish main bhi kar ke dekhti hun.

Jaa rahi hai jaan ab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

tu hi allah tu hi rab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

Tuu ek nashaa hai pyaar ka
Deedaar De Deedaar De

Tere bina ruki hai shab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

hain dhadkane badi hui
Deedaar De Deedaar De

palkein bichaaye baithe sab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

hai ik khumaari chah ki
Deedaar De Deedaar De

masti ka ho bas ye sabab
Deedaar De Deedaar De


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wah wah wah! kya mehfil saji hai!!

majaa aa gaya sabhi ek se badkar ek. ek adna si koshish main bhi kar ke dekhti hun.

Jaa rahi hai jaan ab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

tu hi allah tu hi rab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

Tuu ek nashaa hai pyaar ka
Deedaar De Deedaar De

Tere bina ruki hai shab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

hain dhadkane badi hui
Deedaar De Deedaar De

palkein bichaaye baithe sab
Deedaar De Deedaar De

hai ik khumaari chah ki
Deedaar De Deedaar De

masti ka ho bas ye sabab
Deedaar De Deedaar De
Wah Wah, Sarika bahut bahut khushamadeed is bazm mein aap aayi. Aur kya dhaamekdhaar entry huyi hai. Chaliye deedaar lafz par to kya khoob mehfil jami hai.

Chaliye ab aapse guzaarish hai ki aap ebaarat-e-ashqiya ko agla alfaaz de jisse ki mehfil aage badhe



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Chaliye ab aapse guzaarish hai ki aap ebaarat-e-ashqiya ko agla alfaaz de jisse ki mehfil aage badhe
Shukriya Mast ji

chaliye iss baar ka shabd hai


Zindagi

ummeed hai iss shabd se mere sabhi doston ke mann mein bohut saare vichaar aayenge aur humein bohut he khoobsoorat Kalaam padne ko milenge.



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Aao kuch aisa kareiN ki her samay suhana ho jaye,
Her pel jeewan jeene ka bahana ho jaye.

Urte rahein parinde door asmano meiN,
Bhanvera bhi phooloN ka deewana ho jaye.

Roz subah teri chahat meiN khule ankh meri,
Ye dil tere pyar ka hurdum deewana ho jaye.

Dooriyan bahut haiN zindagi ke safar meiN,
Tere paas ane se ghum mujse anjana ho jaye.

Aa doob jayein ek duje ki bahoN mein sanam,
Apne hothon pe roz ek naya tarana ho jaye.



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Urte rahein parinde door asmano meiN,
Bhanvera bhi phooloN ka deewana ho jaye.

Roz subah teri chahat meiN khule ankh meri,
Ye dil tere pyar ka hurdum deewana ho jaye.

Dooriyan bahut haiN zindagi ke safar meiN,
Tere paas ane se ghum mujse anjana ho jaye.

Aa doob jayein ek duje ki bahoN mein sanam,
Apne hothon pe roz ek naya tarana ho jaye.
Wah wah wah wah .... Sanjay ji

Bohut khoob!


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nice word Sarika jee.................................


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Urte rahein parinde door asmano meiN,
Bhanvera bhi phooloN ka deewana ho jaye.

Roz subah teri chahat meiN khule ankh meri,
Ye dil tere pyar ka hurdum deewana ho jaye.

Dooriyan bahut haiN zindagi ke safar meiN,
Tere paas ane se ghum mujse anjana ho jaye.

Aa doob jayein ek duje ki bahoN mein sanam,
Apne hothon pe roz ek naya tarana ho jaye.
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ... kia kehny Sanjay jee..

bohat khoob...


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Ashq AankhoN Se Tapak Paday Sar-e-Shaam Dheere Dheere...!! - 4th May 2015, 12:48 PM

ashQ aankhoN se tapak paday sar-e-shaam dheere dheere
aatish-e-ishq meiN sulag utha dil-e-badnaam dheere dheere

sar-e-shaam = about evening

nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz
nikamma yeh dil hua un ka ghulaam dheere dheere

dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per
mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam dheere dheere


abhaam = haze, uncertainness (dhundh)

hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat!
woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere

jahan un ko dekha tha hum wohin hue panaah-guzeen
khatam ho gaye jaawani ke din tamaam dheere dheere

panaah-guzeen = refugee


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ashQ aankhoN se tapak paday sar-e-shaam dheere dheere
aatish-e-ishq meiN sulag utha dil-e-badnaam dheere dheere

sar-e-shaam = about evening

nihaayat Khamooshi se hote gaye woh dil per qaabiz
nikamma yeh dil hua un ka ghulaam dheere dheere

dil-e-daghdaar ko boht naaz tha kabhi apni wafaooN per
mohabbat per bhi chaa gaya abhaam dheere dheere


abhaam = haze, uncertainness (dhundh)

hum tou samjhe the unhieN apni zindagi ki zamaanat!
woh karte rahe hamare kafan ka intizaam dheere dheere

jahan un ko dekha tha hum wohin hue panaah-guzeen
khatam ho gaye jaawani ke din tamaam dheere dheere

panaah-guzeen = refugee
Wah wah!

Aur aap bhi le aaye iss mehfill Mein muskaan dheere dheere....

Har baat Ki tarah phir se sixer....


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