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23rd May 2009, 10:52 PM
Badkismatiii aaii merii khudkismati ke sath
Shikwa karoon bhii kaise main zindgii ke sath
-Dilip Jii
KhwaaHishe.n laaKho.n hai.N puurii Hone Ke liye
Har KhwaaHish judi hai teri bandiGii ke saath
-Pooja
Mangu khudase kya ye to batade Kwahish
Mera to wajud hi juda hai teri zindagi ke sath
-Khwahish
Kab tak kare.N meri khwishe.N yunh tera Intezaar
Khatam na ho jaye zindagi koi tishnagii ke saath
-Purvi
Maine to apne dil mein basaya tha aapko
kyon khelte hain aap meri zindagi ke saath
-Fezan
tera rooTh jaana, jaanaa.n lagta hai aise
zindagii khafaa ho jaise zindagiii ke saath
-Mayank
tuufaan chalte hain saath kashtii ke mere
dil ki lagii bhii lagi hai dillagii ke saath
-ghaafil
karte rahe tumse har pal kuch umeed 'sakhi'
tooti hai aash saari dhalti is jindagi ke saath
-sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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24th May 2009, 02:28 PM
hmmm....
chaliye do mahine baad hi sahi ye gazal bhi mukammal hui....
ek nai gazal ki shuruat karte hain...
1st sher:
pal bhar na thehri hamari yaad jinke khayalon mein...
suna hai wo auro ko umr bhar ka dilasa diya karte hain...
-nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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30th May 2009, 10:08 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by NISHA_VIRGO16
hmmm....
chaliye do mahine baad hi sahi ye gazal bhi mukammal hui....
ek nai gazal ki shuruat karte hain...
1st sher:
pal bhar na thehri hamari yaad jinke khayalon mein...
suna hai wo auro ko umr bhar ka dilasa diya karte hain...
-nisha
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Nisha ji...kaisi haiN aap?
Ghazal ke rules ke mutabiq,ghazal ke pehle sher ko matlaa kehte haiN,aur matle ke dono misron me radeef hona chahiya, maaf kijiye per aapka yeh sher matla nahi ban sakta...aap koi aur sher dijiye ,jiske dono misron me radeef ho......
"What is Matla...?
The very first sher or the first two misra's of a ghazal where radeef is used in both misra's is the "Matla" of a ghazal...!! "
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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4th June 2009, 12:09 PM
zainy jee...
i m soooo sorry.....
jaankaari k liye shukriya....
mmmmm....
filhaal to koi aur sher soojh nahin raha....
kuch aap bataiye na....
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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21st June 2009, 01:27 PM
chaliye nayi ghazal shuru karte haiN.............
AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
__zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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21st June 2009, 02:49 PM
QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
>> OMi
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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3rd July 2009, 09:42 PM
1st sher
AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
-zainy
2nd sher
QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi
3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.
-sunita virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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25th July 2009, 06:04 PM
1st sher
AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
-zainy
2nd sher
QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi
3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.
-sunita virender
4th sher
sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN
-zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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26th July 2009, 02:48 AM
meri izzat ko pamaal ker ke Mujeeb
app bhi to shohrat paane lage haiN
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26th July 2009, 03:27 PM
1st sher
AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
-zainy
2nd sher
QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi
3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.
-sunita virender
4th sher
sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN
-zainy
5th sher
Qatl kar k mera yeh aashna-e-diL
humse ishQ k nishan mitane lage haiN
--OMi
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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28th September 2009, 11:48 AM
1st sher
AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
-zainy
2nd sher
QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi
3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.
-sunita virender
4th sher
sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN
-zainy
5th sher
Qatl kar k mera yeh aashna-e-diL
humse ishQ k nishan mitane lage haiN
--OMi
6th sher
Sawar ke jo aaye ho itnaa mere ghar mai
Dekh ke aaina khud se sharmane lage hain...
--naresh mehra
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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12th October 2009, 03:25 PM
1st sher
AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
-zainy
2nd sher
QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi
3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.
-sunita virender
4th sher
sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN
-zainy
5th sher
Qatl kar k mera yeh aashna-e-diL
humse ishQ k nishan mitane lage haiN
--OMi
6th sher
meri izzat ko pamaal ker ke Mujeeb
app bhi to shohrat paane lage haiN
Mujeeb
7th sher
Sawar ke jo aaye ho itnaa mere ghar mai
Dekh ke aaina khud se sharmane lage hain...
--naresh mehra
8th sher
YouN hi nahi mili mohobbat hume
Kya jaano tum kitne zamane lage hai
Kwahish ( an uncomplete Dream )
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2nd November 2009, 09:54 AM
is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)
2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)
(๏̯͡๏) (๏̯͡๏)
Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai,
dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai.....
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Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai..
Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai.......
hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai....
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18th January 2010, 05:03 PM
1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)
2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)
3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham
( OMi )
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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18th January 2010, 05:13 PM
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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)
2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)
3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham
( OMi )
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3 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum
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Har dosti ke -
20th January 2010, 03:53 PM
Har dosti ke peeche neeyat ka pata nahi hota
samjhta hai jo dosti vo kabhi khafa nahi hota
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har raaz khulne tak -
20th January 2010, 03:57 PM
Har raaz khulne tak ham intzaar nahi kar sakte
vo to khud hi raazdaar hai hamare hi safar ke.
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Har paimaane me utni maiyassr nahi ho sakti saaki
Jitni aaj ke dour me teri aakho me bachi hue hai baaki.
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tere mere gam -
20th January 2010, 04:14 PM
Tere mere gam ke aage ye duniya kya hai
is had se bahar nikalne ka rasta kya hai.
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20th January 2010, 04:22 PM
Yaaro ke yarane tak paimaano ke maikhane tak
in dono jahan se pare nazariye ke jamaane tak
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24th January 2010, 01:09 PM
Ajay Nidaan sahab...
Jaisa ki aapne iss bazm ke kaydooN me pada hoga..yaha par hume aapne dostooN ke sath ek-ek sher ko jod kar ek umdaah Qalaam banana hai.. bajayee ek ke baad ek aapne hi sher yaa khayal post karne ke...
Apko yaha previous draft ke pura hote tak kuch bhi naya Qalam chalu karne yaa uss se aalag kuch bhi post karne ki izaazat iss mehfil me nahi hai...!!
ummed karta huN..aagle baar aap inn kaydoo ka khayal rakhenge..!!
-- OMi
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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5th March 2010, 12:11 PM
1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)
2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)
3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham
( OMi )
4 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum
( Kwahish )
(๏̯͡๏) (๏̯͡๏)
Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai,
dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai.....
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Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai..
Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai.......
hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai....
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27th May 2013, 10:20 AM
dostoN chaliye ees Khoobsoorat se silsile ko fir se aage baDhaate haiN...
1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)
2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)
3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham
( OMi )
4 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum
( Kwahish )
5- mujhe haar kar bhee huii jeet haasil "jaanaa"
tujhe kya maaloom tere har inaam mein hum
(Dhaval)
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)
2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)
3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham
( OMi )
4 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum
( Kwahish )
5- mujhe haar kar bhee huii jeet haasil "jaanaa"
tujhe kya maaloom tere har inaam mein hum
(Dhaval)
6-PhooloN me tum pale ho, kaaNtoN me hum hain khele,
Gulshan meiN tum hue to Gulfaam meiN hain Hum......
(Shaad)
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28th May 2013, 09:08 AM
next--
qaafiya : wafaa...jafaa..duaa... etc.
radeef: ho gayii
chaliye dostoN Shuru keejiye...
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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28th May 2013, 01:40 PM
Chalo bhai Matlaa main likh deta hoon................
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
Next sher plzzzzz........................................... ..............
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19th May 2015, 11:03 PM
Aaj bahut nostalgic mehsoos kar raha hoon phir is mehfil mein aakar...yaad hai kuch das saal pehle ek se ek sher daalne par kitne bechain rehte the is bazm mein...chahta hoon yeh silsilaa phirse shuru kiya jaaye....
Shaad bhai ne kareeb 2 saal pehle matlaa diya tha usi ko aage badhaate haiN..
1st sher
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
-Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
-Mast
Umeed hai mehfil ko teesra sher jald hi mileGaa...
Qasid
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1st sher
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
-Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
-Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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19th May 2015, 11:32 PM
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Bahut khoob mast jii..
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
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Bahut khoob Madhu ji par is bazm ki hidaayat yaad dila doon...apne se pehle sher shaayron ke naam ke saath likhe aur phir apna agla sher pesh kare..is baar ke liye main kiye deta hoon..
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19th May 2015, 11:34 PM
1st sher
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
-Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
-Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
-Madhu
Chaliye mehfil aage badhaaye
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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19th May 2015, 11:36 PM
[QUOTE=mast;478079]1st sher
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
-Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
-Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
-Madhu
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
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19th May 2015, 11:37 PM
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1st sher
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
-Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
-Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
-Madhu
Chaliye mehfil aage badhaaye
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Bahut bahut Shukriya mast jii.............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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20th May 2015, 09:57 AM
Mast bhai accha lga es bazm ko phir se rangeeN hote hue dekh kar...shukriya
1st sher
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
-Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
-Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
-Madhu
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
-Sunita Virender
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th May 2015, 10:33 AM
Ek funny wala not to be included....
Kal tak tha jisko ammi banana
Aaj humare bachon ki Bhua ho gayi.
Gustakhi maaf...
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20th May 2015, 10:46 AM
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Ek funny wala not to be included....
Kal tak tha jisko ammi banana
Aaj humare bachon ki Bhua ho gayi.
Gustakhi maaf...��
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Ha ha ha....good one sarika.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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20th May 2015, 10:48 AM
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ek funny wala not to be included....
Kal tak tha jisko ammi banana
aaj humare bachon ki bhua ho gayi.
Gustakhi maaf...��
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rofl................................
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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20th May 2015, 10:51 AM
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Mast bhai accha lga es bazm ko phir se rangeeN hote hue dekh kar...shukriya
1st sher
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
-Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
-Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
-Madhu
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
-Sunita Virender
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waaaah waaaah waaaah kia khoob meHfil saji hy ...
yeh silsila to bohat hi mazedaar hy .....
maza do-bala ho gaya SDC ka ...
It's an honour and privilege to be a member of SDC....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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20th May 2015, 11:08 AM
Matla
Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....
- Shaad
2nd sher
dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....
- Mast
3rd sher
bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee
- Madhu
4th sher
Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi
- masti
5th sher
tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..
- Sunita Virender
6th sher
ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...
- Hassan
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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20th May 2015, 11:31 AM
Waah waah! Mazaa aa gaya sabko padkar.
Shaad ji, mast, madhu, Sumita di and Hassan ji ab iss silsile ko ek baar phir shuru karne ka bohut bohut shukriya.
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