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Har KhwaaHish judi hai teri bandiGii ke saath
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Mangu khudase kya ye to batade Kwahish
Mera to wajud hi juda hai teri zindagi ke sath
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Kab tak kare.N meri khwishe.N yunh tera Intezaar
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24th May 2009, 02:28 PM

hmmm....
chaliye do mahine baad hi sahi ye gazal bhi mukammal hui....

ek nai gazal ki shuruat karte hain...

1st sher:

pal bhar na thehri hamari yaad jinke khayalon mein...
suna hai wo auro ko umr bhar ka dilasa diya karte hain...
-nisha


Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
   
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hmmm....
chaliye do mahine baad hi sahi ye gazal bhi mukammal hui....

ek nai gazal ki shuruat karte hain...

1st sher:

pal bhar na thehri hamari yaad jinke khayalon mein...
suna hai wo auro ko umr bhar ka dilasa diya karte hain...
-nisha



Nisha ji...kaisi haiN aap?

Ghazal ke rules ke mutabiq,ghazal ke pehle sher ko matlaa kehte haiN,aur matle ke dono misron me radeef hona chahiya, maaf kijiye per aapka yeh sher matla nahi ban sakta...aap koi aur sher dijiye ,jiske dono misron me radeef ho......



"What is Matla...?

The very first sher or the first two misra's of a ghazal where radeef is used in both misra's is the "Matla" of a ghazal...!! "




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4th June 2009, 12:09 PM

zainy jee...

i m soooo sorry.....
jaankaari k liye shukriya....
mmmmm....
filhaal to koi aur sher soojh nahin raha....
kuch aap bataiye na....

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Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
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21st June 2009, 01:27 PM

chaliye nayi ghazal shuru karte haiN.............


AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.

__zainy




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21st June 2009, 02:49 PM

QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN


>> OMi


Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......

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3rd July 2009, 09:42 PM

1st sher

AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.
-zainy


2nd sher

QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi




3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.

-sunita virender


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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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1st sher

AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.

-zainy




2nd sher

QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi




3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.

-sunita virender



4th sher

sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN


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1st sher

AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.

-zainy




2nd sher

QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi




3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.

-sunita virender



4th sher

sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN


-zainy

5th sher

Qatl kar k mera yeh aashna-e-diL
humse ishQ k nishan mitane lage haiN

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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
   
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1st sher

AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.

-zainy




2nd sher

QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi




3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.

-sunita virender


4th sher

sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN

-zainy

5th sher

Qatl kar k mera yeh aashna-e-diL
humse ishQ k nishan mitane lage haiN

--OMi

6th sher

Sawar ke jo aaye ho itnaa mere ghar mai
Dekh ke aaina khud se sharmane lage hain...

--naresh mehra





YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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1st sher

AdaaoN se apni rijhaane lage haiN,
Woh chupke se dil me samaane lage haiN.

-zainy




2nd sher

QTAL KAR RAHE APNE TEER-E-NAZAR SE YEH JAHAN
K WOH APNE HUSN KI JADUGIRI DIKHANE LAGE HAIN
-OMi




3rd sher
dekha jo kisi ko barish mein bheegte hue ,
hume bhi beete sawaan yaad aane lage haiN.

-sunita virender


4th sher

sadaa saath rehne ke waade kiye the
wo waade hi dil se bhulane lage haiN

-zainy

5th sher

Qatl kar k mera yeh aashna-e-diL
humse ishQ k nishan mitane lage haiN

--OMi

6th sher

meri izzat ko pamaal ker ke Mujeeb
app bhi to shohrat paane lage haiN



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7th sher

Sawar ke jo aaye ho itnaa mere ghar mai
Dekh ke aaina khud se sharmane lage hain...

--naresh mehra

8th sher
YouN hi nahi mili mohobbat hume
Kya jaano tum kitne zamane lage hai

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Love bas yahi dil se nikalta - 2nd November 2009, 09:54 AM

is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham


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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)

2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)


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Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai,
dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai.....

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Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai..
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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)

2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)


3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham

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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
(Ajay Nidaan)

2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)


3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham

( OMi )
3 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum


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Love Har dosti ke - 20th January 2010, 03:53 PM

Har dosti ke peeche neeyat ka pata nahi hota
samjhta hai jo dosti vo kabhi khafa nahi hota


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Love har raaz khulne tak - 20th January 2010, 03:57 PM

Har raaz khulne tak ham intzaar nahi kar sakte
vo to khud hi raazdaar hai hamare hi safar ke.


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Ajay Nidaan sahab...

Jaisa ki aapne iss bazm ke kaydooN me pada hoga..yaha par hume aapne dostooN ke sath ek-ek sher ko jod kar ek umdaah Qalaam banana hai.. bajayee ek ke baad ek aapne hi sher yaa khayal post karne ke...

Apko yaha previous draft ke pura hote tak kuch bhi naya Qalam chalu karne yaa uss se aalag kuch bhi post karne ki izaazat iss mehfil me nahi hai...!!

ummed karta huN..aagle baar aap inn kaydoo ka khayal rakhenge..!!

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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
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2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)


3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham

( OMi )



4 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum

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dostoN chaliye ees Khoobsoorat se silsile ko fir se aage baDhaate haiN...


1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
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2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)


3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham
( OMi )


4 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum
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5- mujhe haar kar bhee huii jeet haasil "jaanaa"
tujhe kya maaloom tere har inaam mein hum

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1- is bazm se hi to hosh-e-gulfam me hai ham
fir tere liye hi to josh-e-paigam me hai ham
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2- aaji hosh ki mat puchiye ab to kam se kam,
jab tak hai sath tera, tab tak aaram me hai ham
(Neha)


3- Naa judee jab talak ye zindagii tujhse samjh lena
Jaana ! bechirag-e-mohabbat-e-shaam me hai ham
( OMi )


4 - Koi talab hai hayaat ki ummid naa gunjaish
Fanaa ho rahe hia inteha e tamaam men hai hum
( Kwahish )

5- mujhe haar kar bhee huii jeet haasil "jaanaa"
tujhe kya maaloom tere har inaam mein hum

(Dhaval)



6-PhooloN me tum pale ho, kaaNtoN me hum hain khele,
Gulshan meiN tum hue to Gulfaam meiN hain Hum......
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Chalo bhai Matlaa main likh deta hoon................

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Aaj bahut nostalgic mehsoos kar raha hoon phir is mehfil mein aakar...yaad hai kuch das saal pehle ek se ek sher daalne par kitne bechain rehte the is bazm mein...chahta hoon yeh silsilaa phirse shuru kiya jaaye....

Shaad bhai ne kareeb 2 saal pehle matlaa diya tha usi ko aage badhaate haiN..


1st sher

Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....

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-Mast

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-Shaad

2nd sher

dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....

-Mast

3rd sher

bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee



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bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
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Bahut khoob Madhu ji par is bazm ki hidaayat yaad dila doon...apne se pehle sher shaayron ke naam ke saath likhe aur phir apna agla sher pesh kare..is baar ke liye main kiye deta hoon..



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1st sher

Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
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-Shaad

2nd sher

dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....

-Mast

3rd sher

bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee

-Madhu

Chaliye mehfil aage badhaaye



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[QUOTE=mast;478079]1st sher

Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....

-Shaad

2nd sher

dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....

-Mast

3rd sher

bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee

-Madhu

Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi

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Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....

-Shaad

2nd sher

dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....

-Mast

3rd sher

bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee

-Madhu

Chaliye mehfil aage badhaaye
Bahut bahut Shukriya mast jii.............



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Mast bhai accha lga es bazm ko phir se rangeeN hote hue dekh kar...shukriya

1st sher

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Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....

-Shaad

2nd sher

dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....

-Mast

3rd sher

bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee

-Madhu

Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi

- masti

tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
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-Sunita Virender


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Mast bhai accha lga es bazm ko phir se rangeeN hote hue dekh kar...shukriya

1st sher

Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....

-Shaad

2nd sher

dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....

-Mast

3rd sher

bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee

-Madhu

Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi

- masti

tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..

-Sunita Virender
waaaah waaaah waaaah kia khoob meHfil saji hy ...

yeh silsila to bohat hi mazedaar hy .....
maza do-bala ho gaya SDC ka ...

It's an honour and privilege to be a member of SDC....


*hSn* : parStaar

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20th May 2015, 11:08 AM

Matla

Ajab humse yaaroN khataa ho gayee,
Muhabbat meiN dekho Wafaa ho gayee.....

- Shaad

2nd sher

dabi saanson se kaise batlaaye hum
ki kyunn jaan dil se judaa ho gayee.....

- Mast

3rd sher

bhula doon tujhe maine chaha bahut
sanam be asar ye duaa ho gayee

- Madhu

4th sher

Hain chahat ke kisse to sadiyon purane
Kahani humari kahaan kho gayi

- masti

5th sher

tumse bichad kar yeh jana hamne,
zindgi hi hamse khaffa ho gayee..

- Sunita Virender

6th sher

ehd-o-paimaan sab khaak hue!
wafa-e-yaar jafa ho gaye...

- Hassan


ehd-o-paimaan : promises


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Waah waah! Mazaa aa gaya sabko padkar.

Shaad ji, mast, madhu, Sumita di and Hassan ji ab iss silsile ko ek baar phir shuru karne ka bohut bohut shukriya.


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