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15th December 2012, 07:36 AM

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Waise di pe doubt hai mujhe thoda... still...

Ban-2, Di-X, sh-1
Ghalat. (Generally takti karte waqt hum badi ye ko chhoti ye par le sakte hai'n. Chhoti ye ko badi ye par mushkil hi liya jaayega.)

Ban-2, dish-2

Next word-

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Nw this was a nyc piece of information, thanks for it bro,

Khid-2, ki-x...

Yahaan to badi hai, to i hope flexiblity will be allowed.....



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Nw this was a nyc piece of information, thanks for it bro,

Khid-2, ki-x...

Yahaan to badi hai, to i hope flexiblity will be allowed.....
Ji bilkul.

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15th December 2012, 08:42 AM

Tension wala word hai baba....

ta-1, maa-2, sh-1, bee-x, n-1......



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Tension wala word hai baba....

ta-1, maa-2, sh-1, bee-x, n-1......
Do words hai'n ye

tamaash been
ta-1, maa-2, sh-1 bee-2, n-1

ab agar aap 'been' ki badi ye ko flexible karna bhi chahe'n to ye 'bin' ho jaayega

ta-1, maa-2, sh-1 bin-2

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okay sir ji................ samajh gaya, shukriyaa................



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21st December 2012, 02:11 PM

rishtey ka kya hoga....??

rish-2, tey-x

ya fir

ri-1, sh-1, tey-x



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ya fir

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are bhai plz, u r supposed to be here, are yaar pehli muqammal ghazal khatm kar raha huN.... so u r most welcome to help me out over here...

what about udaan-

u-1, daa-2, n-1


do sher uljhe the, ab bas maqte pe atak gaya huN..... :P



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are bhai plz, u r supposed to be here, are yaar pehli muqammal ghazal khatm kar raha huN.... so u r most welcome to help me out over here...

what about udaan-

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do sher uljhe the, ab bas maqte pe atak gaya huN..... :P
udaan = 121 is perfect..........................
   
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jitna dukh aaj ka vo mudda dekh kar hua tha, shayad usse bhi bahut jyada khushi kambakht is ghazal ko khatm karke mili hai...... chain ki saans lunga aaj maiN....



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Hashr..

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Hashr ka sahi wazan hogaa.... 21

hash2 r1 aur spelling yahi... hash'r

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Hashr ka sahi wazan hogaa.... 21

hash2 r1 aur spelling yahi... hash'r

jahaan tak mujhe lagtaa hai....
taqtee' to appko shaad bhaii ne bataa dee hai , lafz^ hai HaShr

Hey + Sheen + rey = HaShr

Hay mutaHarik hai kiyoN keh us per zabar hai
Sheen saakin hai kiyoN keh us per jazm hai
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Hay mutaHarik hai kiyoN keh us per zabar hai
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rey saakin hai kiyoN ke us per jazm hai
Aap dono ka bohat bohat shukriyah.....

Mujeeb sahab....sheen aur rey dono per jazm?....zara urdu me likh ker bataiye tou....




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taktee to sahi hai ...matlab end result
waise
socho

zee / s / t...aise nahi hota?

maghar last ke [s] aur [t] sakin hai matlab looseely translated chote wazn hai
gar agar ek hi lafz me ek saath do saaqit aa jaaye to ek cancel ho jata ...

isliye
zee 2 / s1 / t1 hokar bhi
zee 2 / s0 / t1 ho jaayega

finally u are right

zees 2 / t1

next.........

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zidd bhaii appko naheeN lagta yahaN appne do saaqit^ likha hai isko teen saaqit^ hoona chahiye ?

kiyoN keh pehly saaqit^ Harf to saaqit^ hee manaa jaaey ga or dossra saaqit^ mutHarik ho ker choTee awaz kehlaaey ga or teesry ko giraa diya jaaygaa

jis lafz meiN teen Harf aik saath saakin aa jaaey us per jo taqtee' ka uSool bantaa hai woh appne opper bayaaN kiya hai

pehla Harf saakin maana jaaey ga aur dosra Harf taqtee' mai mutaHarik maana jaaey ga or teesre Harf ko taqtee' se giraa diya jaaey ga

jaisy lafz hai dost

daal + wao + seen + tey = dost

daal (mutaHarik) + wao (sakin/saaqit^) + seen (saakin/saqit^) + tey (Saakin /saaqit^)

ab iskoo taqtee maiN bhee dos hee maanaa jaata hai


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Mujeeb sahab....sheen aur rey dono per jazm?....zara urdu me likh ker bataiye tou....
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jazm matlab saakin . in per koi ae'raab naheeN hai

Shukriyah!...


next: JaaN..




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JaaN..

Kya iska wazn sirf 2 bhi ho sakta hai?....

N silent hai. ?..




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Haan. Agar jaaN ka N angoor wala " an" ki. Tarah hai to jaaN ka wazan 2 ho saktaa hai.. Lekin agar jaan ka talaffuz Paan ki tarah hai. To iska. Wazan 21 hoga...

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jaa2 n1

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darmiyaan = 2 1 2 1
darmiyaaN = 2 1 2 ( noon gunaaN)

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N silent hai. ?..
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Ummmeed hai samjha paane me qamyab hua hounga..
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darmiyaan = 2 1 2 1
darmiyaaN = 2 1 2 ( noon gunaaN)



jaan = 2 1
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it may be either 1 2 2 2 or 11 22

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Yeh tou badi mushkil ho gayi..

Agar "shab-e-furqat" hameiN...122.122.122.122 behr me use karna ho tou kaise kiya jaaye...???




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Yeh tou badi mushkil ho gayi..

Agar "shab-e-furqat" hameiN...122.122.122.122 behr me use karna ho tou kaise kiya jaaye...???
hahahahaha..... ab zabardastii to koi cheez nahi ki ja saktii na... do teen options detaa hoon....


1) ya to uske jaisaa doosra word use kar lo,

2) ya shabe-furqat ko toD kar shab alag aur furqat alag use karo...

3) yaa fir to baba behar hi change karnii hogii....


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hahahahaha..... ab zabardastii to koi cheez nahi ki ja saktii na... do teen options detaa hoon....


1) ya to uske jaisaa doosra word use kar lo,

2) ya shabe-furqat ko toD kar shab alag aur furqat alag use karo...

3) yaa fir to baba behar hi change karnii hogii....



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Hmmmm.................................
ok dont be sad... lemme try it once.

aapki behr hai... 122 122 122 122

shabe furqat ki jagah aap "judaai ki raateN" istemaal kar sakti hain..

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aapki behr hai... 122 122 122 122

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Meaning bhi wahi hoga.. behr me bhi baith jaaegii'..

ju1 da2 ii2 ki1 raa2 teN2... 122 122

ok...kuch try karti huuN....

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ju1 da2 ii2 ki1 raa2 teN2... 122 122
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agar kisi ka takhallus hai alif se shuru hota hua to aur easy ...

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zidd bhaii appko naheeN lagta yahaN appne do saaqit^ likha hai isko teen saaqit^ hoona chahiye ?

kiyoN keh pehly saaqit^ Harf to saaqit^ hee manaa jaaey ga or dossra saaqit^ mutHarik ho ker choTee awaz kehlaaey ga or teesry ko giraa diya jaaygaa

jis lafz meiN teen Harf aik saath saakin aa jaaey us per jo taqtee' ka uSool bantaa hai woh appne opper bayaaN kiya hai

pehla Harf saakin maana jaaey ga aur dosra Harf taqtee' mai mutaHarik maana jaaey ga or teesre Harf ko taqtee' se giraa diya jaaey ga

jaisy lafz hai dost

daal + wao + seen + tey = dost

daal (mutaHarik) + wao (sakin/saaqit^) + seen (saakin/saqit^) + tey (Saakin /saaqit^)

ab iskoo taqtee maiN bhee dos hee maanaa jaata hai


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mujeeb sahab aap jo kah rahe hai vo metrical andaaz se irrelevant hai.

baat simple hai..agar ek takhte me me do sakin saath ho to ek cancel ho jayega...uske preceeding takhte ki baat yaha applicable nahi.
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mai metrical scanning bata raha hu....bahr ke hisaab se......
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agar kisi ka takhallus hai alif se shuru hota hua to aur easy ...

sha be fur qa taa tish....shabe furqat 'aatish'

Mere khayaal se zidd bhai sahi keh rahe hain....

Agar furqat ke baad koi vouvel se starting word aayega, to ye lafz aaapki takhtii me fit baithega..

sha be fur qa t ab

sha be fur qa t is

sha be fur qa t us ko

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Agar furqat ke baad koi vouvel se starting word aayega, to ye lafz aaapki takhtii me fit baithega..

sha be fur qa t ab

sha be fur qa t is

sha be fur qa t us ko

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2nd February 2013, 10:53 AM

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Zainy jii ... iske pehle maine aapse sawaal kiyaa tha,....

Shiddat-e-dard ki takhti bataaiye......
2122???

shid2 da1 te2 dard2......not sure??

or may be

2122 1

shid2 da1 te2 dar2 d1


can it also be?

shid2 dat2 e1 dard2......???




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