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15th October 2005, 09:05 PM
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aap sabhi ko mera aadaab........ well....this is a story one of my very good friend wrote an year ago....bahut pyari story hai....its about a pregnant woman jise uske ghar wale kis kadar pressure me daal dete haiN....usi pressure ke tale wo kuch faislaa karti hai......is story ko agar yahaaN koi maa padhegi to wo iske matlab ko bakhoobi samjhegi.....waise apko ye kahaani thodi jaani-pehchaaNi lagegi....but iski endiNg mujhe bahut pyari lagi.... ----------- Aaj raat Poonam ko neeNd nahi aa rahi thi....wo reh-reh kar kar karvateiN badal rahi thi....samay ke saath uski bechaiNi bhi badh rahi thi.Subah ki ghatnaa yaad karke wo andar hi andar kaanp si jaati thi.Apni saas ke dwaara kaha gaya ek ek lafz uske kaanoN me gooNj rahaa tha. Roz ki tarah jab wo subah naashta lekar apni saas ki kamre ki taraf jaa rahi thi,to uski saas ke kuch udte huye shabd uske kaanoN me pade the.Wo apne bete sameer se keh rahi thi,'are! bahu ko hamari baat maan_ni hi padegi.maine doctor se bhi baat karli hai.kal ka appointment bhi le liya hai.'in shabdoN ne Poonam ke mann me shak paidaa kar diya.wo khud ko rok na saki aur naashte ki plate lekar usne kamre me enter kiya.Kamre me uske is tarah achaanak aane se ajeeb saa sannaata chhaa gaya.Poonam khud bhi us sannaate ke tootne ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Kuch pal baad uski saas boli,'bahu!doctor ne to bataa hi diya hai ki tumhe beti hone waali hai.Maine to pote(grandSON) ko lekar kitne sapne dekhe the.Lekin hamari to jaise kismat hi footi nikli.Are!pote ke haath ka gangaajal naseeb hota to seedhe swarg me jaati main.Are,beta hota to tum logoN ke budhape ka sahaara banta.'Poonam kuch koshish karke boli,'maa ji!aap aisa kyuN kar rahi haiN?bachche to eeshwar ka roop hote haiN.Ladka ho ya ladki,kya fark padta hai?aaj ladkiyaaN wo sab cheezeiN kar sakti haiN jo ladke kar sakte haiN.'Poonam ki saas ne ghusse se kaha,'bahu!mujhe ye ulte-seedhe updesh nahi sun_ne!meri baat kaan khol kar sunle.main apne ghar me beti ke roop me ek aur pareshaani aur bojh nahi lena chahti.hoga to beta hi hoga!'Poonam aashankit hokar boli,'matlab'?saas seedhe seedhe apna order dete huye boli,'maine aur sameer ne ye faislaa kiya hai ki tumhe ye bachcha giraana hoga.maine doctor se baat karli hai.kal subah 8 baje taiyaar ho jaaNa.Poonam ne dheere se kaha,'lekin maa ji,ye paap hai.Ek ajanme bachche ko.........,'bahu!mujhse behes mat kar.agar is ghar me sukhi rehna hai tomeri baat tujhe maan.ni hi padegi,samjhi!'saas ne kade shabdoN me kaha. Bistar par pade huye Poonam sone ki bahut koshish kar rahi thi.Lekin neeNd uski aankhoN se koNso door thi.Wo sochne lagi ki kya jo wo karne jaa rahi hai,wo paap nahi hai?is sansaar me aankheN kholne se pehle hi ek bachche ko maut ki neend sulaa dena kya insaaf hai?Kya ek maa aisa kar sakti hai? Poonam ke maathe par paseene ki booNdeiN ubhar aayi thi.wo sochne lagi kya ladki hona koi paap hai?kyuN aaj bhi samaaj me ladki ko ladke ke comparisoN me tuchch samjha jaata hai?sabhyataa ka raag aalaapne waala varg,jis varg me wo jee rahi hai,wo bhi aisi maansiktaa,aisi thinking se achhoota to nahi tha!kyuN ladki ko janm se pehle hi kayi gharoN me maut ke ghaat utaar diya jaata hai?kyuN ladki ke janm ko ashubh maana jaata hai?bachche to bhagwaan ka hi ansh hote haiN....wo to parivaar me khushiyaaN laate haiN. Poonam ko wo din yaad aa gaya jab use ape pregnant hone ka pataa chalaa tha.Kitni khush thi wo.aur hoti bhi kyuN nahi.....sansaar ki sabse badi khushi jo use mil gayi thi..maa banne ki sirf feeliNg se hi wo excited ho gayi thi.usne apne aane waale bachche ke liye sab kuch soch liya tha..bachche ka kamra,uske kapde,uske khilone,sabke baare me...Poonam ne to us din ko imagine bhi kar liya tha jab uske aangaN me bachche ki kilkaariyaaN goonjegi. Lekin aaj raat ke sannaate me kilkaariyoN ki jagah bachche ki tadap bhari cheekh Poonam ke kaanoN me gooNj rahi thi.Use lag raha tha ki maano koi use aawaaz de rahaa hai,madad ke liye pukaar rahaa hai,maa,mujhe bacha lo.maiN is sundar sansaar ko dekhna chahti hoon.Main hansnaa chahti hooN,khelna chahti hooN!maa,maiN marna nahi chahti.Maa,mujhe bachaa lo.mujhe bachaa lo.' Poonam ne apne dono haathoN se kaan band kar liye.wo is chitkaar ki peeda seh nahi saki.doosre hi pal usne mehsoos kiya ki kamre me shamshaan jaisaa sannaata chhaa gaya hai.Poonam ne idhar-udhar us awaaz ko dhoondne ki koshish ki.lekin kahiN koi na tha.ye cheekh to uske apne bachche ki thi,jo uske bheetar se hi maano use madad ke liye pukaar raha tha. Poonam apne bachche ki ye karunaa bhari pukaar,sunkar chup na reh saki.uske bheeta ki mamtaamayi maa ne uske andar chhipi kamzor stree ko paraajit kar diya tha.Poonam ne ye soch liya ki wo apne kashtoN ki aashanka ke kaaran ye paap na hone degi.wo sabhi kasht sehkar,apni bachchi ki rakshaa karegi. US raat poonam ne ek drid-nishchay kiya tha.subah ka sooraj uske jeewaN me vishwaas ki nayi kiran laaya.Poonam ne apne pet par haath rakha aur dheere se apne nishchay ko duhraati hui boli,'mat ghabraao,maiN hooN na!' --------------- thanx, KasaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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17th October 2005, 07:54 AM
sach badi acchi kahani thi..dil ke taar taar hiljate hain jaabhi aisi ghatna kahin bhi hoti hai....aksar sasuralwale ladke aur ladki paida hone ka mamle ko bahaut tool dete hain....
lekin jahan tak mera khyaal hai ab logon ke dimaag khul rahe hain..aur woh ladkiyon ko bhi khule dil se khushi k saath swikar rahe hain......haan kuch aise log bhi hain khaaskar woh jo itne padhe likkhe nahi hain..unke man mein aajtal ladkiyon ko leke kadwahat hai.....meri uparwale se yahi dua hai ke wo har aurat ko himmat de aur samajh de ke woh apne faisle le sake. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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17th October 2005, 05:02 PM
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di ye to sheher ki baat hai..lekin gaanv ki gaadi aaj bhi atki hui hai....wo log kuch sunte hi nahi aur nayi nayi dhaarnaayeiN bana lete haiN......phir bhi...mujhe ghabraao mat,main hoon na....ye shabd bahut hi pyare lage....... thanx, KasaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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20th October 2005, 12:08 PM
Kasak this story really depicts the true scenario of Indian village where the birth of girl is considered as liability, and this story has remind me of kya kehana…..if u watched the film preeity zinta especially that dialogue “maa BACHA LO MUJHE…..”,but truely this really touches anybodies heart
pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra" -------------------Brizesh_kol_------------------------------------- 
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20th October 2005, 05:50 PM
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passionatelover janaab...... maine to shuru me hi kahaa tha ki ye kahaani apko jaani pehchaani lagegi.....apne sahi pehchaana.....jab maine ise padhaa tab mujhe bhi ye bilkul wahi lagi.....but iski ending bahut hi pyari hai....esp wen poonam says,ghabraao mat,main hoon na!.......that really touched my heart...... thanx 4 coming.... luv, KasaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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22nd October 2005, 01:22 PM
thank you Kasak JII FOR POSTING SUCH A WONDERFULL AND TRUE STORY. IT IS CONNECTED TO EVRYONES HEART.
THANX VERY MUCH. HaPPy SAtURdaY ~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~ 
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i liked it too.....thanx 4 coming, luv, KasaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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24th October 2005, 07:34 PM
priy kasak,
ghabraao mat,main hoon na.... kaash... har maa apne bache k liye hi nahi ... par har stree khud ke liye bhi yah kah sake... khud mai aatmvishwaas bhar sake... kaash....... yah ho sake... shukria ... is kahani ko ... is baat ko is tarah sab k saamne laane k liye... di |
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apne bilkul theek kaha...ye samaaj kabhi ladki ke liye badal hi nahi sakta.....duniya chahe kitni bhi aage badh jaaye magar ek ladki hameshaa wahiN ki wahiN rahegi......zaroori ye hai ki aaj ladki ko apni surakshaa khud karni aani chahiye....kisi ka bharosaa nahi hai.....isliye agar self-dependent raho to hi achcha hai...... apko pasand aayi.....jaan kar khushi hui..... yunhi aate rahiyega....... urs respectfully, KasaK...... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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31st October 2005, 04:30 PM
sach me!
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2nd November 2005, 03:38 PM
waise do panktiyaan yaad aa gayin gupt ji ki,bilkul yahi bhav darshati hain wo bhi,
abla jeevan hay tumhari yahi kahani, aanchal me hai doodh aur aankhon me pani. aapka GHAYAL     ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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2nd November 2005, 08:15 PM
lucky.......
tumhare do shabdoN ne bahut kuch keh diya.....i understood it after i read this story agaiN.....keeping u in mind.....thanx 4 coming dear..... keep smiling(be it fake)...... bye, KasaK........ Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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2nd November 2005, 08:24 PM
are yahi to khushkhabar hai ki ghayal phir se wo ghayal ban gaya hai jo sirf ghayal karna jaanta hai,hona nahi.aur jise sirf masti karni aati hai.logon ke tang kheechni aati hai.aur pehle se bhi jyada mast aur khatarnak ghayal.pesh hai aapki khidmat me.bas ek hi antar hoga ki iske dil me ek tees rahegi par wada hai ye ghayal sirf hansta hai iske aansu shookh chuke hain.aur ye hadd se jyada mast hai.ise sirf masti aati hai.umeed hai aapko jaan kar khushi hui hogi.
aapka LUCKY      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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