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Ye Alag Baat Ke Kaha Hi Nahi - 28th September 2010, 10:27 PM

Ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni raaye se nawaaziyega



Ye alag baat, ke kaha hi nahi
Bin tere mai kabhi jiya hi nahi


Bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
Zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi


Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi


Dard dunia ke baanNta hi raha
Apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi


Mujhko lai jaaye jo nagr tere
aaii aisi koi saba hi nahi


wo mujhay choD kar chala bhi gaya
Aur ashqoN ka kuch pata hi nahi


uske qadmo ki bas mile jannat
Yaad iske siwa dua hi nahi


Raat aankhoN mai kaise na kat_ti
Chaand baadal mai tu, chupa hi nahi


Itna gum tha meiN teri baton mai
Shor ruswaaii ka suna hi nahi


Tum hi aslam na rakh sake qaboo
Isme ashkoN ki kuch khta hi nahi




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Bohat bohat khoob Aslam Miya agar 2 ya 3 shero ko alag kar diya jaye to aapki yeh Ghazal ghazab dha rahi hai...........dil khush kar diya tumne.

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Kis Saadgi Se Dil Ko Chhuaa Hai ... Aslam Ji ! aapki Peshkash Ne ... Padhte hi banta hai ... sabhi ashaar ka fikR o Khayal umdaa raha ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi umdaa khayaloN se bazm ki shaan badhaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

Very Nice Creation ....

duaaon ke saath....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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Ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni raaye se nawaaziyega



Ye alag baat, ke kaha hi nahi
Bin tere mai kabhi jiya hi nahi


Bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
Zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi


Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi


Dard dunia ke baanNta hi raha
Apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi


Mujhko lai jaaye jo nagr tere
aaii aisi koi saba hi nahi


wo mujhay choD kar chala bhi gaya
Aur ashqoN ka kuch pata hi nahi


uske qadmo ki bas mile jannat
Yaad iske siwa dua hi nahi


Raat aankhoN mai kaise na kat_ti
Chaand baadal mai tu, chupa hi nahi


Itna gum tha meiN teri baton mai
Shor ruswaaii ka suna hi nahi


Tum hi aslam na rakh sake qaboo
Isme ashkoN ki kuch khta hi nahi




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aslam bhai
radhe radhe

bahut hi sundar ehsaas aur bayaani har ashar khoob hai dil se daad likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath


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[QUOTE=noor_noor;411501]Ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni raaye se nawaaziyega



Ye alag baat, ke kaha hi nahi
Bin tere mai kabhi jiya hi nahi


Bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
Zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi


Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi



aslam bhayee ... kyaa baat hai, bahut hi dil fareb sher hai yeN........

Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi

iske liye hazar daaaad
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Bohat bohat khoob Aslam Miya agar 2 ya 3 shero ko alag kar diya jaye to aapki yeh Ghazal ghazab dha rahi hai...........dil khush kar diya tumne.

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Kis Saadgi Se Dil Ko Chhuaa Hai ... Aslam Ji ! aapki Peshkash Ne ... Padhte hi banta hai ... sabhi ashaar ka fikR o Khayal umdaa raha ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi umdaa khayaloN se bazm ki shaan badhaate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

Very Nice Creation ....

duaaon ke saath....

Naresh sahab aapka husn e zan hai, ghazal ki pasndgi ke liyN aapka shukurguzaar huN yuN hi hosla baDhaate rahiye khus rahiye


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bahut hi sundar ehsaas aur bayaani har ashar khoob hai dil se daad likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath

Rajindar jii aapki daad sar aankhoN par nawaazish


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Ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni raaye se nawaaziyega



Ye alag baat, ke kaha hi nahi
Bin tere mai kabhi jiya hi nahi


Bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
Zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi


Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi



aslam bhayee ... kyaa baat hai, bahut hi dil fareb sher hai yeN........

Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi

iske liye hazar daaaad

janaab nawaazish, hosla afzaaii ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN yun hi hosla baDhaate rahiye khush rahiye



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Ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni raaye se nawaaziyega



Ye alag baat, ke kaha hi nahi
Bin tere mai kabhi jiya hi nahi


Bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
Zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi


Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi


Dard dunia ke baanNta hi raha
Apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi


Mujhko lai jaaye jo nagr tere
aaii aisi koi saba hi nahi


wo mujhay choD kar chala bhi gaya
Aur ashqoN ka kuch pata hi nahi


uske qadmo ki bas mile jannat
Yaad iske siwa dua hi nahi


Raat aankhoN mai kaise na kat_ti
Chaand baadal mai tu, chupa hi nahi


Itna gum tha meiN teri baton mai
Shor ruswaaii ka suna hi nahi


Tum hi aslam na rakh sake qaboo
Isme ashkoN ki kuch khta hi nahi




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ji bhaut kaha aapne.....................very nice..........



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Ehle bazm ki nazr ek adna si paishkash, apni raaye se nawaaziyega



Ye alag baat, ke kaha hi nahi
Bin tere mai kabhi jiya hi nahi


Bawafaaii ka dars yaad rahe
Zakhm yuN, jaan kar siya hi nahi


Roothne par koi manata hai
Humko is baat ka, pata hi nahi


Dard dunia ke baanNta hi raha
Apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi


Mujhko lai jaaye jo nagr tere
aaii aisi koi saba hi nahi


wo mujhay choD kar chala bhi gaya
Aur ashqoN ka kuch pata hi nahi


uske qadmo ki bas mile jannat
Yaad iske siwa dua hi nahi


Raat aankhoN mai kaise na kat_ti
Chaand baadal mai tu, chupa hi nahi


Itna gum tha meiN teri baton mai
Shor ruswaaii ka suna hi nahi


Tum hi aslam na rakh sake qaboo
Isme ashkoN ki kuch khta hi nahi




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Aslam Ji,

Aapko padhkar bahut acha laga bahut Khoob likha hai aapne....!!! Har sher tareef-e-kabil hai....!!!


Dard dunia ke baanNta hi raha
Apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi

Ye sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya....!!! Aise hi likhte rahiye...!!! Khush rahiye...!!!


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Aslam Ji,

Aapko padhkar bahut acha laga bahut Khoob likha hai aapne....!!! Har sher tareef-e-kabil hai....!!!


Dard dunia ke baanNta hi raha
Apne zakhmoN ka kuch kia hi nahi

Ye sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya....!!! Aise hi likhte rahiye...!!! Khush rahiye...!!!

bhut bhut shukriyaH Kavita jii................hosala afzaii ka tahe dil se mamnoon hun


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