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Arrow Out of sight out of mind - 5th August 2002, 12:13 PM
Kabhi tere deedar ka dard
mujhe itna na tadpata tha,
jab bhi bechen hota teri
galiyoN me chala aata tha,

Wo jamana bhi ab to
ek umr hue gujar gaya,
teri aarju ka nasha bhi
dheere-dheere utar gaya,

Makhmali subhoN me ab to
tera khayal nahi aata,
her sham un rahoN se gujarta hooN,
jahaN tera saya bhi nahi jata,

Laakh koshisheN ki jindgi
teri yaadeN hi bachakar rakhoN,
per itna fijool-kharch hooN ke
ye bachat bhi nahi kar paata.

Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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Re: Out of sight out of mind - 3rd August 2004, 12:29 AM
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Kabhi tere deedar ka dard
mujhe itna na tadpata tha,
jab bhi bechen hota teri
galiyoN me chala aata tha,

Wo jamana bhi ab to
ek umr hue gujar gaya,
teri aarju ka nasha bhi
dheere-dheere utar gaya,

Makhmali subhoN me ab to
tera khayal nahi aata,
her sham un rahoN se gujarta hooN,
jahaN tera saya bhi nahi jata,

Laakh koshisheN ki jindgi
teri yaadeN hi bachakar rakhoN,
per itna fijool-kharch hooN ke
ye bachat bhi nahi kar paata.

mere chaand,

Kabhi tere deedar ka dard
mujhe itna na tadpata tha,
jab bhi bechen hota teri
galiyoN me chala aata tha,


aaj tumhari galiyon maie kyun aayi... muje batane ki koi jaroorat hai?
ab yah rachna muje kaisi lagi ...... tum hi samaj lo apne aap....

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3rd August 2004, 12:20 PM
Makhmali subhoN me ab to
tera khayal nahi aata,
her sham un rahoN se gujarta hooN,
jahaN tera saya bhi nahi jata,


Chaand saahab..

Yun to aapki puuri rachna kamaal hai.. lekin ye sher behad khubsoorat laga..

Faraz saahab ki ghazal ke ashaarr yaad aa gaye.. pesh karte hain..

aa.Nkh se duur na ho dil se utar jaayegaa
vaqt kaa kyaa hai guzarataa hai guzar jaayegaa

zabt laazim hai magar dukh hai qayaamat kaa 'Faraz'
zaalim ab ke bhii na royegaa to mar jaayegaa

Bohat khoob!.. likhte rahiye..

Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge... Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya...
   
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3rd August 2004, 12:39 PM
Meena ji...per ye sahi hai...waqt saari baateiN dhuNdhla deta hai...or khaas kar tab jab wo jazroN ke saamne nahi ...

kuchh arz karooN kya...


Wo meri galiyoN me kyoN aata tha...
Meine ye baat na poochhi us.se....
Mujhe pata tha....mera khier-khwaah hai wo bhi
Mai bhi to uske...aane ko taras jaata tha..


Chaand


aa.Nkh se duur na ho dil se utar jaayegaa
vaqt kaa kyaa hai guzarataa hai guzar jaayegaa
zabt laazim hai magar dukh hai qayaamat kaa 'Faraz'
zaalim ab ke bhii na royegaa to mar jaayegaa

Faraz ...Banno ji...mujhe maalooM nahi tha...ke aap reply me itna khoob soorat tohfa deiNgi...wakai bahut pasand aaya Faraz saahab ka likh ye sher....dil khush ho gaya ise parhkar...

Tahe dil se Shukriya aapkha ise yahaaN post karne ke liye.

Chaand

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4th August 2004, 03:24 AM
Chaand ji,

Sabse pehle to yeh bataana chaahungi ki nazm bahut pasand aayi..

Lekin woh sab.. aise to nahi hota...

Out of sight out of mind... Kehne ko sahi hai, par hota nahi hai.. Yeh main isliye keh rahi hun, kyunki mujhe bhi unko dekhe hue ek saal ho chala hai, lekin hum har din us din us pal ka intzaar karte hain jab ham phir se milenge.. Khair..

Yaadein ek baar jo ban jaati hain, phir kahan jaati hai?? Dil mein jo bas jaata hai, phir woh saamne aaye ya na aaye kya farak padta hai.. aankhen band karo aur chehra saamne aa jaata hai..

Aap bas khush rahiye!

~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Shukriya priya - 4th August 2004, 12:27 PM
Priya...ek baar phir tahe dil se shukrgujaar hooN aapka...jo aap meri rachnaaoN par mera hausla barhati haiN....sach...badi him.mat milti hai aap dostoN ke in replies se...

YahaaN phir mai kahooNga...out of sight out of mind...se yahaaN itna hi matlab hai ....ke milna milana jaroori hai....nazroN ke saamne rehna bhi jaroori hai...agar koi wada nahi hai to....or prem ka sakaaratmak hona bhi jaroori hai....aap khush kismat haiN ke aapki chaahat aapke prem me ek sakaratmak darshan hai.....so aap ek saal hi nahi kitna bhi intzaar kar sakti haiN...

per aapki baat hamesha saath rakhunga...

Thanks

Keep smiling

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Re: Shukriya priya - 5th August 2004, 01:58 AM
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Priya...ek baar phir tahe dil se shukrgujaar hooN aapka...jo aap meri rachnaaoN par mera hausla barhati haiN....sach...badi him.mat milti hai aap dostoN ke in replies se...

YahaaN phir mai kahooNga...out of sight out of mind...se yahaaN itna hi matlab hai ....ke milna milana jaroori hai....nazroN ke saamne rehna bhi jaroori hai...agar koi wada nahi hai to....or prem ka sakaaratmak hona bhi jaroori hai....aap khush kismat haiN ke aapki chaahat aapke prem me ek sakaratmak darshan hai.....so aap ek saal hi nahi kitna bhi intzaar kar sakti haiN...

per aapki baat hamesha saath rakhunga...

Thanks

Keep smiling

Chaand
Sach hai.. nazron ke saamne rehna zaroori hai.. Arsa ho gaya nazre milaaye hue.. yeh bilkul sahi kaha aapne..

Khush rahiye

~Priya


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Love superb.. - 5th August 2004, 03:06 PM
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hi - 6th August 2004, 12:21 PM
Chaand ji,

kya kahe..ki kitani khamoshi odhi thi man ne jab padh raha tha paaki subah-o-sham.. kherchila etana tha yaade bhi bacha ker nahi rakh paya... sachchhi touchable lagi aapki yah rachana... likhate rahiye..



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Shukriya DostoN - 7th August 2004, 12:26 PM
Shukriy Priya....kabhi kabhi dil ki baat aa ji jaati hai laboN par...ham laakh chaaheiN phir bhi...milna jaroori hai.

Chaand

Thanks inpired_humour...thanks a lot for ur touchy reply.

Chaand

akantji ...ye aapka badappan hai jo aap is nacheez ko itna sammaan dete haiN...ye Chaand aapka tahe dil se shukrgujaar hai.

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