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ik raat mere ishq wargi... -
27th May 2008, 10:24 PM
ik raat si mere ishq wargi,
ik chan si ohdi shakal wala,
ik baddal si wich opra jeha,
te ik tara ci mere dil warga,
hauli hauli badla ne chan lako lia,
os tare to kise ne usda sajjan kho lia,
jad chan puri tarah badla wich luk giya,
bina kise chanan to oh tara vi tut gaya,
hauli hauli ishq wali raat muk gai,
mere vi ishq wali baat muk gai,
par hun ohi chan khaure kiniyan te apni channie sutda hai,
afsos ta ese gal da ki mithi hatho har raat ik nava tara tut da hai...
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Aadwinder ji maiN tuhanu pehli waar padhiyaa hai ajj. But u r awsome. This is fantastic piece of poetry. Agar maiN rate karaaN te hun takk diaaN top 10 nazmaaN wich aayegi tuhadii eh nazm. Jithey vi oN wasdey raho. likhdey raho.. Aakhri line wich "mithi" shabd nu maiN samajh nahi sakiaa. But this is fantastic
tilak
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
sab to phela main tuhada es pariwaar walo.n dil to suwagat kardi haan, umeed hai tusi aithey baut vadiya waqt guzarogey, te apniya.n vadiya vadiya nazam te gazal padan da saanu mokka devogey....
tuhadi eh nazam bahut vadiya lagi, chan....taariya.n da zikar te apne pyar da zikar....sab behad khoobsurti naal bayaaN kita tusi.....!
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
ik raat si mere ishq wargi, ik chan si ohdi shakal wala, ik baddal si wich opra jeha, te ik tara ci mere dil warga, hauli hauli badla ne chan lako lia, os tare to kise ne usda sajjan kho lia, jad chan puri tarah badla wich luk giya, bina kise chanan to oh tara vi tut gaya, hauli hauli ishq wali raat muk gai, mere vi ishq wali baat muk gai, par hun ohi chan khaure kiniyan te apni channie sutda hai, afsos ta ese gal da ki mithi hatho har raat ik nava tara tut da hai... __________________________________________________ ______
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Aadwinder ji, tusi vi aje new ho, tuhanu das deyiye ke Iss website te je kise hor di poetry post karni hundi hai ta phir "Unknown" or "Not mine" vi naal likhna peinda hai, kyon ke jo tusi poetry post kiti hai, eh mai pehla read kar chuki hai,
** Prabjyot Kaur **
Ek pasan pyaar cho ki milna, ek JYOT yaad di baldi A.
Ek kami jo puri nahi honi, unjh duniyadaari chaldi A
Last edited by prabhjyot; 29th May 2008 at 08:11 AM..
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1st June 2008, 10:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender
sab to phela main tuhada es pariwaar walo.n dil to suwagat kardi haan, umeed hai tusi aithey baut vadiya waqt guzarogey, te apniya.n vadiya vadiya nazam te gazal padan da saanu mokka devogey....
tuhadi eh nazam bahut vadiya lagi, chan....taariya.n da zikar te apne pyar da zikar....sab behad khoobsurti naal bayaaN kita tusi.....!
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