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Angry gam di sugaat....... - 10th June 2008, 04:59 PM
Gam di oh sugaat de ke tur gae,
ek aadhori baat de ke tur gae,
jo kade duphar wich nhi badli,
aasi oh parbaat de ke tur gae,
loch de sa pyar bazzi jitni,
par oh sanu maat de ke tur gae,
dil da sohna mehal khandar ho gaya,
zakhmi oh zazbaat de ke tur gae,
main os toh chahi c soohi saver,
par oh kali raat de ke tur gae,
mangian ohna ton c main khusian char,
par dukhan di oh daat de ke tur gae............
   
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11th June 2008, 01:29 AM
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Gam di oh sugaat de ke tur gae,
ek aadhori baat de ke tur gae,
jo kade duphar wich nhi badli,
aasi oh parbaat de ke tur gae,
loch de sa pyar bazzi jitni,
par oh sanu maat de ke tur gae,
dil da sohna mehal khandar ho gaya,
zakhmi oh zazbaat de ke tur gae,
main os toh chahi c soohi saver,
par oh kali raat de ke tur gae,
mangian ohna ton c main khusian char,
par dukhan di oh daat de ke tur gae............
Balraj ji bahut hi sohni poem likhi hai
kai vaar sochida kuch hor hai kuch hor hi ho janda hai

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11th June 2008, 04:59 AM
Sahi gal a heer g........kayi vaar ta apne parchawein v saath chad jande ne...
bt eh v ta jaroori nahi k jo asi chahiye ohi howe...j inj hunda ta dukhan da ta kise ehsas v nai hona c....anyhow....thanx meri nimani jehi koshish d shlaga karn lai...
   
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14th June 2008, 10:14 PM
Balraj ji tusi vi mehfil ch rang jama rahe ho, very good

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16th June 2008, 01:06 AM
bahut sohna likhday ho balraj ji. thanks tohada ehni sohni poem likhan layi.

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SONAy nu ta lut lai gayi, YARI dildara di.
   
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16th June 2008, 09:07 AM
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17th June 2008, 06:38 AM
thanx tilak g apne keemti samey cho thoda jeha time kad k meri poetry nu read karn lai,n apne sujavh dein lai, next time i'll try better
   
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3rd July 2008, 04:34 PM
meharbani bai...j tussa v salaheya.....bt tuhade waang ni likh sakda
   
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10th July 2008, 07:31 PM
22 G wadhiya likhea.

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28th July 2008, 12:51 AM
dil Vich Rahu Hamesha Ik Pyaas,
jisde Bhujan Di Nahi Koi Aas,
tu Supna Ban K Reh Gya Mere Layi,
jo Tutteya Adhi Raat,
taare Bhaddlan Ch Luk Gaye Ne ,
kalla Paavan Kihde Naal Baat,
asin Baldey Deewey Han ,
jinna Bhuj Jaana Haneri Raat,
bas *romy* Kare Duaavan Tere Layi ,
teinu Aaye Jawaani Raas ! Teinu Aaye Jawaani Raas!

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28th July 2008, 08:10 AM
wah bai g kya baat a,,,,,,bahut khoob and meharbani ene sohne msg lai

Main duniya shorh kar jannat na loonga...
waha sab kuj hai lekin gam nahi hai...!
   
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