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29th November 2011, 09:21 PM
Ehle bazm ki nazr ek choti si koshish apni qeemti ara se nawaaziyega
“Smarting Pain” Suno ye dard seene ka Bhutt bechain karta hai Kabhi uth_ta hai reh reh kar Musalsal bhi ye tikta hai Suno ye dard seene ka Bhutt bechain karta hai Ajab si baat to ye hai Ke jab socha karuN Tumko To ye seene se Hat kar ke Mere pehloo mai rukta hai Suno ye dard seene ka Bhutt bechain karta hai Suno jab raat ko Aksar Tumhe dhoonda karu Pal pal munderoN par ye palkoN ke bhut khamosh dikhta hai suno ye dard seene ka bhut bechain karta hai suno ye dard seene ka bhut bechain karta hai zara si baat maano tum zara isse ye keh do na mere seene se uth kar ye tumhare dil talak phuchay tumhari baat maanega tumhara shehdaaii jo thehra Suno ye dard seene ka Mujhay acha bhi lagat hai Suno ye dard seene ka Bhut bechain karta hai!!! (aslam noor, aslam) |
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29th November 2011, 10:06 PM
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30th November 2011, 12:25 AM
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Khushaamdeed is bazm e shayree mayn! SUB'HANALLAH! Buhat khoobsoorat nazm! Aapki tehreer say saaf pata chal raha hay ki aap ayk payedaar shayar hayn! umeed hay aapsay hum nauseekiyon ko buhat kuch seekhnay ko milayga (excluding the well established shura of Shayri.Com). Daad is khaaksaar ki jaanib say bhee qabool farmayayn! Duagoh Ahmad |
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30th November 2011, 09:43 AM
janaab aslam saheb pehle to is bazm meN aapka tahe dil se isteqbaal karta huN...khushaamdeed....
aapki ye nazm behad khoobsurat hai, meri jaanib se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....aage bhi apni koshishoN se bazm ko pur noor rakheN....aate raheN... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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30th November 2011, 12:57 PM
Bohat khoob Aslam sahab...Good to see you back on SDC..
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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30th November 2011, 06:21 PM
Welcome Back ... Aslam Bhai !
Kyaa Khoob Naayaab Aur Laajawaab Nazm Se ShuruaaT Huii Hai ... BehtreeN ! Umdaa Peshkash Ke Liye ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad ... !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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30th November 2011, 07:27 PM
waaahhhhh.. kamaal ki nazm likhii hhai aapne Aslam khan saahab.. aapki kalam ke to hum bahot arse se deewane rahe haiN, bas ek shiiqaayat thee ke lutf bahot kam hi mil paata hai.. aaaj jo aapko maujood paaya to khud ko rok na sakaa iskee aagosh me kho jaane se.... bahot hi nayaab koshish ke liye tahe dil se daad mere bhai... Guzaarish hai ke ab jaldi jaldi aaya karenge.... Shukriyaaa
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30th November 2011, 07:49 PM
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Aslam Noor Sahib..........! Be-Had Umdah Nazm Hui Hai............... Rawani Me, Alfaz Ke Chunao Me Andaz-e-Bayan Me Apni Misal Aap Hai.............Dheron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khubsurat Kalaam Pr.........Qabool Farmayen.. Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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30th November 2011, 08:54 PM
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khair........... yakeen maano mai jab bhia apki nazme padjhtaa hun. to aapki awaaz bhi sunayee deti hai use lahje mai jisme aap sunate ho ......... aise lagtaa hai padh nahi raha hun sun rahaa hun aapki nazm padhke ...... bas padhte hi kuch khyaa;l aye pahle unko likhaa fir aapko comment kyaa hai... par hana post ultaa kar raha hun pahle comment fir nazm -- suno tum nazm kahte ho use maiN nazm nahi kahtaa Are....! woh saans leti hai haaN usme jaan hoti hai wo saath hi .... baat karti hai mahkti hai.. chahkti hai........ wo roti muskurati hai jab hi to kah raha hun maiN ki jab tum nazm kahte ho asal maiN nazm nahi hoti...... tumhara hi aks hoti hai tumhara noor hoti hai ho betaa ya ki beti ho wo kuch to zaroor hoti hai...... suno inko yahi tum bhi samjh kar paalte rahnaa ye jo bhi hona chahengi usi mai dhaalte rahnaa haaN maiN bhi nazm kahtaa huN hum apni saari nazmo ko fir apas maiN milaa denge fir inkaa ghar basa denge |
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30th November 2011, 09:18 PM
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Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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1st December 2011, 02:12 PM
Aslam bhai ki amad pe mera nazrana ,, ,,, Aslam bhai meri nazar me wo shair hain jisne aaj ke daur me bhi azatiza ki rawayaton ko barqarar rakha hai ,, Unki shan me jitney bhi kaside likhe jaye.N kamm hi honge ,,, Apni khushi ko alfazon ka jama dena mushkil ho chala hai …Khuch misre zahen me tarteeb paye ..Ap sub hazrat ki nazar
Bhulake sabhi ranj-o-gham aye aslam Thi khawhish yahi dam ba dam aye aslam Ajab kaifiyat hai ye amad pe unki Ke ankhen khushi se hain namm aye aslam Ab ayengi ghazle.N bahut khubsurat Jo haathon me leke qalam aye aslam Hai kismat hamari ya unki mahubbat Na toota hamara bharam aye aslam Khushamad me unki mai kya kar kahonga Adab se mera sar hai kham aye aslam Ke mahefil ki raunaq barhegi musalsal Khuda ka howa hai karam aye aslam Qadeertoopchi |
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1st December 2011, 05:45 PM
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Wah Wah Abdulqadeer Sab............ Kia Khubsurat Kalaam Kaha Hai Aap Ne...... Boht Khooob Laga Aap Ka Ye Kalaam............ Daad Qabool Farmayen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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2nd December 2011, 07:35 PM
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2nd December 2011, 07:39 PM
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Ahmad sahab aapka husne zan jo aap yuN sochte haiN, meri shayri ki dunia mai hasiyat ek talib e ilm ki hai is fan ke samandar mai meri hasiyat ek qatre se ziyadaH nahi, meiN to khud ye umdeed karta huN ke aapse kuch seekhne ko milge yaqeenan is bazm mai mashaAllah se bhut aur bhut achay shora mojood haiN jinse maine bhut kuch seekha hai aur aage bhi seekhta rahunga, bhut nawaazish nazm ki pasndgi ke liyN tahe dil se mamnoon huN dua mai yaad rkahiyega aslam |
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2nd December 2011, 07:41 PM
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Bhut bhut nawaazish is izzatafzaaii ke liyN Vikram sahab, aapne nazm ko sraha mere liyN bais e fakhr hai, jii meiN koshish karunga ke aapki hukm ki tameel ho aslam |
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2nd December 2011, 07:47 PM
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Zainy saheba bhut nawaazish aslam |
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2nd December 2011, 07:49 PM
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Naresh mehra sahab aap hamehsa hi hosalabadhaaya karte haiN bhut bhut shukriyH in mohabbatoN ka nawaazish aslam |
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2nd December 2011, 07:57 PM
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2nd December 2011, 08:00 PM
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2nd December 2011, 08:46 PM
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Dear Vikas puraani id ka password bhool gaya tha koshish ki ke wo recover ho jaaye uske liyN kaafi saare mails bhi kiye but no responce, to nayi id banana padi tumhari mohabbat hai jo aisa hua karta hai warna apni awaaz is qabil nahi jo yuN kisi ke zehen mai mehfooz ho jaaye, haan albatta ye kaifiyat mujhay zaroor us wqt hoti hai jab meiN tumhara koi aisa sher jo tumhare mizaaj ka hai pada karta huN, nazm ki yuN pazeeraii mere liyN bais e fakhr hai bhut bhut nawaazish, ab baat tumhari nazm ki jab bhi likhte ho acha hi likhte ho, soch ka jo andaaz hai wo behad niraala hai ek wajh uski ye hai ke tum bhut badi si baat jo ke tum bade kam lafz istemaal karke keh daite ho misaal ke tour par tumhara sher quote karna chahta huN "usse maagna tum na taaroN se hargis.............gira jo wahaN se mila hi nahi hai" bade saada se lafz na koi aisi baat jisme zehen ko lamhe bhr bhi sochna pade aur baat, baat us maqaam ki ke jahaN kitaabein likh di jaayeiN sirf isi soch par, tumhari nazm bhut mutassir karti hai khoob aur bhut khoob andaaz e bayaaN aur mafhoom bhi bhut hi piyara bhut bhut mubarak baad is soch ki nazr qubool farmaaiye paish e khidmat hai yuN hi meri adna koshishoN par apni nazr e karm banaaye rakheye khush rahiye aslam |
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2nd December 2011, 08:47 PM
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Janaab ka bhut bhut shukriyH aslam |
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2nd December 2011, 08:48 PM
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Qadeer bhai bhut bhut bhut nawaazish is izzatafazaaii ke liyN aslam |
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2nd December 2011, 11:01 PM
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DuaoN meiN yaad rakheiN _____________________________________
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