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Originally Posted by abdulqadeert
Aslam bhai ki amad pe mera nazrana ,, ,,, Aslam bhai meri nazar me wo shair hain jisne aaj ke daur me bhi azatiza ki rawayaton ko barqarar rakha hai ,, Unki shan me jitney bhi kaside likhe jaye.N kamm hi honge ,,, Apni khushi ko alfazon ka jama dena mushkil ho chala hai …Khuch misre zahen me tarteeb paye ..Ap sub hazrat ki nazar
Bhulake sabhi ranj-o-gham aye aslam
Thi khawhish yahi dam ba dam aye aslam
Ajab kaifiyat hai ye amad pe unki
Ke ankhen khushi se hain namm aye aslam
Ab ayengi ghazle.N bahut khubsurat
Jo haathon me leke qalam aye aslam
Hai kismat hamari ya unki mahubbat
Na toota hamara bharam aye aslam
Khushamad me unki mai kya kar kahonga
Adab se mera sar hai kham aye aslam
Ke mahefil ki raunaq barhegi musalsal
Khuda ka howa hai karam aye aslam
Qadeertoopchi
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Qadeer bhai aapka qalam khud apni misaal aap hai, mere liyN aapka ye mohabbat naama aapki belos mohabbat ki daleel hai, bhut aur bhut chota sa insaan huN jo apni hadoN mai rehkar hi khush rehta huN, kehne ke liyN aapke is qaseeday ke liyN mere pass itne lafaaz haiN ke bas itna hi kehna chahunga ke mere liyN aapki ye qeemti mabloos mai libte huway lafz mere liyN bais e fakhr haiN shayad meri hasiyat se ziyadaH aapne mujhay izzat bashq di.................hamesha khush rahiye Allah aapko tamaam khushiyoN se nawaaze aameen summa aameen
duaaoN ka talib
aslam