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A Beautiful Ghazal -
30th October 2010, 02:55 PM
Ajnabi hai to mery zehan main rehta q hai
Wo jo pather hai to sheeshon ka maseeha q hai Wo hawa hai to guzatar hay hawaun ki trah Wo samunder hai to thehra rahay, behta q hai... Mery aangan main nahi koi umeedon ka gulab Phir ye mausam meray aangan main utarta q hai Jis k chehry pe saji jhoot ki tehreerain hain Dil ussi shakhas k waadon se bahelta q hai Ye mera dil, ye mausam, ye anjan sa dil Phir na'janay teray naam se dharakta q hai |
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30th October 2010, 02:58 PM
Bitmap HAWA KO ITNI KHABAR KARO TUMHawa ko itni khabar karo tum!!Hawa jo mujh se ulajh rahi hay!Hawa jo mitti mein dafan hoti huwi udasi say ajnabi hayHawa jo rastay mitta rahi hayHawa jo meray ujar dil ka diya bujha rahi hayHawa ko itni khabar kero tum!!K meray ehsas ka asaasa!Yeh mera dil hayYeh mera apna ujar dil hayJO khaima e jaan k kunj e veeran kaAkhri kam nafas diya hay!Yeh hi diya hayJO shaam e veeran meinSubh e umeed ka sabab hayHawa ko itni khabar kero tum!!Yeh hi diya kaayinat meriYeh hi mata’e hiyaat meriUdasion say utay huwe dasht e bekaran meinYeh hi mera “rakht e shab” hay
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31st October 2010, 11:30 PM
Jis k chehry pe saji jhoot ki tehreerain hain
Dil ussi shakhas k waadon se bahelta q hai ......................daaaad bhai shakil saab bahut daad khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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5th November 2010, 03:21 PM
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bahut khoob............................ Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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8th November 2010, 05:57 PM
Boht Boht Shukria Aap Ka.....
Ye Sb Aap Ka Acha Zoq Hai Janab..... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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9th November 2010, 02:43 AM
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aadaab aap ki ghazal se andaazah ho raha hai ki aap kaafee kohna mashq shaair hain aap ke alfaaz ye pata dete hain ki mash shaaq shaks ke haathon ki gazal hai haan magar bahr ke silsile me ap mazeed mehnat karen to fan ko kamaal haasil ho saktaa hai( ye baat bhi kisee khaas ta"alluq se darj kiyaa hun agar naa gawaare khaatir guzre to peshgee ma"azarat khjwaah hun ) doa go masood hassaas |
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9th November 2010, 08:16 AM
http://www.ranjish.com/ghazal-shayar...ery-zehan.html
http://smskraze.com/category/ghazal/page/3 http://www.funfreez.com/?page_id=44 (Aisi boht si links aur haiN...!) Ghazal copy karna boht aasaan hota hai Shakil Saheb, Likhna boht mushkil.............  tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th November 2010, 11:37 AM
Dear Hassan Sahib Main Aap Ki Baat Se Ittefaq Krta Hun....
"Ghazal Copy Krna Boht aasan Hota Hai Or Likhna Boht Mushkil" Magr Mere Piyaray Bhai Me Ne Kahan Likha Hai K Ye Meri Apni Ghazal Hai...? Ye Sirf Or Sirf Meri Selection Hai..... Agr Aap Ko Meri Personal Shayri Parhni Ho To Plz "Aap Ki Shayri" Me Meri Kuch Ghazlen Aap Parh Saktay Hain.... Or Phir Un K Baray Me Apni Qeemti Raaye Se Zarur Nawaziye Ga..... Ye Ghazal Mujhy Achi Lagi Me Ne Post Kr Di.....Ab Mujhy Nahi Pata Tha K Yahan Jo Ghazal Post Ki Jaye Usay Usi Se Mansoob Kr Dia Jata Hai.... Main Jb Bhi Apna Zaati Kalam Post Karun Ga To Sath Zarur Wazeh Krun Ga K Ye Mera Apna Kalam Hai Aap Ki Rehnumayi Ka Shukriya..... Duaon Ka Talib: Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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10th November 2010, 01:53 PM
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Bhai saheb, Mere khiyaal meiN, aap ne shayri.com k sub-forum Shayri-e-Ishq per yeh Instruction nahi padh'hi hooN gi:- Shayri-e-Ishq:- Post all your shayri related to that wonderful feeling... The feeling of being in LOVE. Is meiN clearly likha hai, k apni "ZAATI" shayri yahaN post kijiye. Abhi yahan aap ne post ki hai, to koi baat nahi lekin neeche 'not mine' likh dete, ya phir issay anjuman-e-shayri meiN post kar dete. Umeed karta hooN aap meri baat se ittifaaq karieN ge, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th November 2010, 04:36 PM
Dear Hassan Sahib....
Main Aap Ka Boht shuarguzaar Hun K Aap Ne Meri Rahnumayi Farmayi.... Darasal Me Ne Recently He Ye Forum Join Kia Hai.... Or waqae Post Se Pehlay Instructions Nahi Parhi Thi..... INSHALLAH Aayinda aap Ki Instruction Pr Amal Krnay Ki Koshish Karun Ga... ALLAH AAP KO AASANIAN De... Duaon Ka Talabgar: Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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10th November 2010, 04:41 PM
aapka istaqbaal hai shakeel saahab....
keep sharing. |
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10th November 2010, 07:54 PM
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Meri koi baat agar aap ko buri lagi ho to us k liye muaafi chahta hooN... Shayri.com per aap ko maiN welcome kehta hooN... DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th November 2010, 08:25 PM
Shakil saaHeb:
namaste! Shayri Parivaar mei.n aapka tah-e-dil se swaagat kartaa huuN... Shakil saaHeb aap jab bhee kisii aur ki koShiShe.n yahaaN baaNTnaa chaahate ho.n to aap uss koShiSh ke niche "NOT MINE" liKh diyaa keejiye.. taa.k saheeh liKhane waale ko hausalaah afzA'ii mile.n! aap naye.n hai.n to yeh honaa laazami haii.. ummid kartaa huuN aap baat ko samjhe.nge.. Shayri ka yeh safar KhuShiyo.n bharaa ho.n yahee duaa hai dil se..! aise hi koShiSho.n ko baaNTte rahiye! KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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11th November 2010, 08:31 PM
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Shakil jii, thanks for nice sharing Dhaval jii aur HasaN jii ki kahi baat ka khayal rakhiyega. god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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