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har roz hum nashe me hote hain
aur ye shaam guzar jaati hai
ek din aayega jab
ye shaam nashe me hogi aur
hum guzar jayenge
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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15th February 2005, 09:31 AM
Wah Jubin ji, Accha to laga par tumhari haalat pe taras aa raha hai, very well written. keep writing!
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15th February 2005, 09:43 AM
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Wah Jubin ji, Accha to laga par tumhari haalat pe taras aa raha hai, very well written. keep writing!
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aapko pasand aaya jaan kar khushi hui
par ek baat kehna chahta hu,shayad aap samajh jayengi
ishq ke rishte bhi kitne ajeeb hote hai
duur rehkar bhi kitne kareeb hote hai
meri halat par afsos mat karna yaaro
ishq me apne apne naseeb hote hai
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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15th February 2005, 09:47 AM
Wah,Wah, Wah Jubin Ji, Kya baat hai... Kitna accha likha hai, Dil ko bhaa gaya, Huzur ek aur...
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Wah,Wah, Wah Jubin Ji, Kya baat hai... Kitna accha likha hai, Dil ko bhaa gaya, Huzur ek aur...
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to thik hai chalo ab mehfil jam hi gayi hai
to ek aur arz hai
kaise keh du mulakaat nahi hoti
roz milte hai par baat nahi hoti
roz rota hu teri bewafaai me aye sanam
kab meri aankh me sanam barsaat nahi hoti
jaam tutne ka bahana mat kar
ham to teri aankhon se pee lenge
tu mat aa par aane ka waada to kar
ham tere intezaar me hi jee lenge
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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15th February 2005, 10:17 AM
Wah, Jubin ji, aapne to is mehfil me aake mehfil ka rang hi badal diya, asai hi likhte rehna, tumhare chahne walo ke liye hi sahi..
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Wah, Jubin ji, aapne to is mehfil me aake mehfil ka rang hi badal diya, asai hi likhte rehna, tumhare chahne walo ke liye hi sahi..
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meri ek post hai "dil ki lagi ya dillagi"
iska likha post kar raha hu shayad aapne padha ho
aapki mehfil me hamara chale aane
ek ittefaaq ho jaise
hamri dastak par aapka puchna
aap kaun aur yaha kaise
shayad khuda ko yahi manjur tha
ki ham mile hi kuch aise
dil ki lagi bhi kya dil lagi ban gayi
ki ham ban gaye aap aur
aap ban gaye ham jaise
kaisa laga zaroor bataye....
shayri shayro ki wo ada hoti hai
dil se nikli awaaz ko jo shabdo me piroti hai
lekin is duniya me mohabbat to sabhi kar lete hai
par shayar sab nahi ban paate hai
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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15th February 2005, 10:39 AM
Nice one! bas asai hi apne chahne walon se dil ki baat zahir (share) karte rahiye....
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Nice one! bas asai hi apne chahne walon se dil ki baat zahir (share) karte rahiye....
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thanks parul ben
Badan main aag si,
chehra gulab jaisa hai
tere gham ka nasha bhi
sharab jaisa hai
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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6th April 2005, 11:02 PM
Cool!
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7th April 2005, 08:10 AM
cooooool here too
thanks parul ben
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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8th April 2005, 11:56 AM
bohat zabardast likha hai aapne tamam shayri hi bohat achi hai keep writing
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bohat zabardast likha hai aapne tamam shayri hi bohat achi hai keep writing
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moon ji thanks for the compliments
keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppp reaaaaaaaaddddddiiiiiiinnnnnng
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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8th April 2005, 04:28 PM
Achha qatta likha hai aapne...
behadd pasand aaya..
Varinder
kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
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8th April 2005, 04:38 PM
hi jubin ji;
ishq ke rishte bhi kitne ajeeb hote hai
duur rehkar bhi kitne kareeb hote hai
meri halat par afsos mat karna yaaro
ishq me apne apne naseeb hote hai
aaj to such naseeb ki baat kar ke rula diya aap ne hume...
yaar humara naseeb bhi bada hi bekar hai pyaar ke mamle main kya kare
bas yehi kah sakte hai ...ki yaro afsos mat karna...aisa hi humara naseeb hai
bye
"tum na jane kis jaha main kho gaye"
khushiiiiiiiiiiiii
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8th April 2005, 05:49 PM
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Achha qatta likha hai aapne...
behadd pasand aaya..
Varinder
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varindar ji aapko pasand aaya jaan kar khushi hui
keeeeeeeeeeeeeeep reading
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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8th April 2005, 05:52 PM
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hi jubin ji;
ishq ke rishte bhi kitne ajeeb hote hai
duur rehkar bhi kitne kareeb hote hai
meri halat par afsos mat karna yaaro
ishq me apne apne naseeb hote hai
aaj to such naseeb ki baat kar ke rula diya aap ne hume...
yaar humara naseeb bhi bada hi bekar hai pyaar ke mamle main kya kare
bas yehi kah sakte hai ...ki yaro afsos mat karna...aisa hi humara naseeb hai
bye
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maaf karna khushi ji maine aapko rula diya par mera aisa koi irada nahi tha ye aap bhi jaanti hai
pyar me to hamara bhi naseeb kharaab hai
vo ek sher hai purana
vo mehek vo fiza bhi uske saamne kam thi
chehre par hasi thi par aankhen nam thi
ham bhi pyar karna chahte the
par kya kare hamare haath me pyar ki lakeer hi kam thi...
thanks for the compliments
keeeeeeeeeeep reading(par rona mat)
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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9th April 2005, 10:08 AM
its cooooolllllll .....
A'ARZ HAY ..........................
Tum ko dekha to yeh khyaal aya
zindagee dhoop tum ghata saya
ajj phir dil nay aik tamnaa kii
ajj phirr dilk o ham nay samjhya
tum chaley jaoo gey to sochain gey
kiya ham nay khoya kiya paya hay
HAM JISAY GUNGUNA NAHII SAKTEY
WAQT AYSA GEET KIUN BANAYA HAY
Jostejo, talash, safer hai yeah zindagi
Jo chaha woh mil gya KIA yahi hai zindagi
Qarz, haq, farz hai yeah zindagi
Rastay sab mil gay KIA yahi hai zindagi
Rait, sehra, Kari dhop hai yeah zindagi
Talash e khuda Jo ho tu KIA yahi hai zindgi
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Re: tum ko dekh to khyaal aya -
9th April 2005, 10:15 AM
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its cooooolllllll .....
A'ARZ HAY ..........................
Tum ko dekha to yeh khyaal aya
zindagee dhoop tum ghata saya
ajj phir dil nay aik tamnaa kii
ajj phirr dilk o ham nay samjhya
tum chaley jaoo gey to sochain gey
kiya ham nay khoya kiya paya hay
HAM JISAY GUNGUNA NAHII SAKTEY
WAQT AYSA GEET KIUN BANAYA HAY
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kiran ji thanks for the compliments
and thanks for sharing these words
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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9th April 2005, 10:56 AM
har roz hum nashe me hote hain
aur ye shaam guzar jaati hai
ek din aayega jab
ye shaam nashe me hogi aur
hum guzar jayenge
Likha to accha hai dost lekin tum jaante hi ho... mujhe aise ehsaas zara kam hi bhaate hain... neways... tum Accha likh rahe ho... Doo keep it Up!!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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9th April 2005, 11:04 AM
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Likha to accha hai dost lekin tum jaante hi ho... mujhe aise ehsaas zara kam hi bhaate hain... neways... tum Accha likh rahe ho... Doo keep it Up!!
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thanks for the compliments pulkit sahab
main jaanta hu aapko aisi baatien nahi pasand aati
par kya karu
ab jis insaan ne jivan ke har pehlu me dukh dekha ho vo aur kya soch sakta hai
anyways
thanks for reading
aapka-jubin
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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9th April 2005, 12:42 PM
wow jubin again nice wording no wordz to say
mujhe ap pe koi taras nahi aa raha shayad humari halat bhi yehi hai ju apki hai kisi ko pata bhi na chalega aur hum chale jayega duniya chod......us bewafa ke inteaar mein bas chale jayenge
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unforgetable simran
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Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO
sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho......
love is seeing yourself in someone's
eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*)
(¨`·.·´¨) Always
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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9th April 2005, 06:46 PM
main aapki halat samajh sakta hu
but anyways thanks for the compliments
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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9th April 2005, 07:04 PM
jubin bhaiya aapne aakhir itne aaram se itni bari baat kaise kah di.main aapki baat se kuch had tak to sahmat hoon par puri tarah nahi.kyonki mera manns hsi ki-
is duniya ne itne gam diyeen hain mujhe,
kimeri halat dekh maut bhi laut jayegi.
is duniya aisa kuch ka gujrna hai mujhe,
ki ye duniya chah kar bhi mujhe bhula na payegi.
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9th April 2005, 07:08 PM
shayar sahab
thanks for the compliments
aap meri baat se sehmat nahi kyuki aaapne mere halaat ko mere nazariye se nahi dekha
is me aapka koi dosh nahi
thanks again
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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jubin
simply awesome!!!!
sonal
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jubin
simply awesome!!!!
sonal
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thanks........sonal
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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