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'Kabhi Kabhi...!' -
30th January 2006, 03:06 AM
Kabhi kabhi
Zindagi ke kitaab ke pan.non par kuch lafz paata houn… Magar we mere ungliyon ke likhe houe nahin hein… Kabhi kabhi Meri ankhon se ek bound ansoo tapak jaata hai… Magar mein wo nahin jissne isse bahaaya hai… Kabhi kabhi Apne chehre par kuch sansein mehsoos kar leta houn… Tab samajh main aata hai… Duniya ke dil ki dhadkanein meri sanson se juDe houe hein. Aur tab mein apni ankhon ko bandh kar leta houn… Ouss madhur raag ko sun.ne ki koshish karta houn jiss main pyar ke swar hon… Aur mein oun dhvaniyon main Toum ko bhi paata houn...!  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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30th January 2006, 07:59 AM
Danny ji,
kaise ho? bahut khubsurat aur pyaara sa likha hai. likhte rahiyega! |
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30th January 2006, 11:14 PM
kabhi kabhi mere dil mein...khayaal aata hai....k amanspeare writes wonderfully!! hehe
take care bye! u kno who!  »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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31st January 2006, 04:26 PM
Originally posted by Devangi
Danny ji, kaise ho? bahut khubsurat aur pyaara sa likha hai. likhte rahiyega! Devangi Ji...! Hum zinda hein... aur fine bhi hein ! Aap keissi hein ?Iss kavita ki khubsurti ko pehchan.ne ke liye shukriya...! Younhi aate rahiyega aur apna khayaal bhi thik se rakhna...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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31st January 2006, 04:29 PM
Originally posted by Mukhra
kabhi kabhi mere dil mein...khayaal aata hai....k amanspeare writes wonderfully!! hehe take care bye! u kno who! Aur mere dil main khayaal aata hai ki Amanspeare has the Sweetest Little Friend...! Take care you too... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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2nd February 2006, 12:54 PM
Kabhi kabhi
Zindagi ke kitaab ke pan.non par kuch lafz paata houn… Magar we mere ungliyon ke likhe houe nahin hein… Khoobsurat ehsaas...! Kabhi kabhi Meri ankhon se ek bound ansoo tapak jaata hai… Magar mein wo nahin jissne isse bahaaya hai… Welll said...! Kabhi kabhi Apne chehre par kuch sansein mehsoos kar leta houn… Tab samajh main aata hai… Duniya ke dil ki dhadkanein meri sanson se juDe houe hein. Waaaaaah....nicely said...! Aur tab mein apni ankhon ko bandh kar leta houn… Ouss madhur raag ko sun.ne ki koshish karta houn jiss main pyar ke swar hon… Aur mein oun dhvaniyon main Beautifulllllll......! Bhaiya, Kaise hain? ummeed hai sab acche se hi hoga... main thhek hoon...just a bit too busy with work...! Bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne bhaiya... har shabd khoobsurat hai.... There's a softness about it which impresses me the most.... Meri daad to aapke saath hi hai... bass yun hi likhte rahiye....Apna kahyal rakhiyega acche se....! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd February 2006, 09:28 PM
Kabhi kabhi
Zindagi ke kitaab ke pan.non par kuch lafz paata houn… Magar we mere ungliyon ke likhe houe nahin hein… Kabhi kabhi Meri ankhon se ek bound ansoo tapak jaata hai… Magar mein wo nahin jissne isse bahaaya hai… Namaskar Mushkil ji A very touching poetry.Beautifully composed.Hamari daad kabul kijeyega.Yuun hi likhtey rahiye Regards |
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7th February 2006, 04:51 PM
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Kabhi kabhi Zindagi ke kitaab ke pan.non par kuch lafz paata houn… Magar we mere ungliyon ke likhe houe nahin hein… Khoobsurat ehsaas...! Kabhi kabhi Meri ankhon se ek bound ansoo tapak jaata hai… Magar mein wo nahin jissne isse bahaaya hai… Welll said...! Kabhi kabhi Apne chehre par kuch sansein mehsoos kar leta houn… Tab samajh main aata hai… Duniya ke dil ki dhadkanein meri sanson se juDe houe hein. Waaaaaah....nicely said...! Aur tab mein apni ankhon ko bandh kar leta houn… Ouss madhur raag ko sun.ne ki koshish karta houn jiss main pyar ke swar hon… Aur mein oun dhvaniyon main Beautifulllllll......! Bhaiya, Kaise hain? ummeed hai sab acche se hi hoga... main thhek hoon...just a bit too busy with work...! Bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne bhaiya... har shabd khoobsurat hai.... There's a softness about it which impresses me the most.... Meri daad to aapke saath hi hai... bass yun hi likhte rahiye....Apna kahyal rakhiyega acche se....! Chote Bhaiya...! Toum ko yaha kavita pyaari si lagi...humein khushi houi...! Younhi daad dete rehna Thik se apna khayaal rakhna...ok ? Aashirvaad sahit Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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7th February 2006, 04:54 PM
Originally posted by sukanya
Kabhi kabhi Zindagi ke kitaab ke pan.non par kuch lafz paata houn… Magar we mere ungliyon ke likhe houe nahin hein… Kabhi kabhi Meri ankhon se ek bound ansoo tapak jaata hai… Magar mein wo nahin jissne isse bahaaya hai… Namaskar Mushkil ji A very touching poetry.Beautifully composed.Hamari daad kabul kijeyega.Yuun hi likhtey rahiye Regards Namaste Sukanya ji ! Thanks for liking the poem...! Tah e dil se daad kaboul karte hein...! Younhi aate rahiyega aur thik se apna khayaal bhi rakhiyega Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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7th February 2006, 04:55 PM
danny sahab..
bahaut pasand aayi aapki kavita mujhe. narm aur khoobsurat ehsaas ki shiddat khoob bayaan horahi hai.. mujhe toh bada pasand aayi aapki yeh rachna.. yuhin likhte rahiye aur hum jaise diljalon ke dilon ko choote rahiye. khush rahiye hamesha..isi dua ke saath ijazat chahungi. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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15th February 2006, 02:06 AM
Originally posted by farhana
danny sahab.. bahaut pasand aayi aapki kavita mujhe. narm aur khoobsurat ehsaas ki shiddat khoob bayaan horahi hai.. mujhe toh bada pasand aayi aapki yeh rachna.. yuhin likhte rahiye aur hum jaise diljalon ke dilon ko choote rahiye. khush rahiye hamesha..isi dua ke saath ijazat chahungi. Farhana Saheeba...! Hamari iss koshish ko pasand karne ke liye bahout shukriya...aur aap ke daad sadaa sar ankhon par...! Younhi hausla dete rahiyega aur apna khayaal thik se rakhna...ok ? Keep always smiling Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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3rd September 2015, 04:30 PM
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Danny bhaiyaa aapke yeh pyare se ehsaas hame acche lge. bazm meiN aapki tazza shayri ka intejaar hai hame. regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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3rd September 2015, 10:21 PM
kishore bhai
bahut achha lagta ha aapko padhna aapki nai rachna ka intzaar hai khoobsoorat ehsaas se bharpoor rahi aapki rachna likhte rahen aate rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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4th September 2015, 06:29 AM
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Bohot khuubsuurat nazm huyi hai. Dil ko chhuu gayi. Aap humare kaafi tajurbakaar aur varishth member haiN lekin aajkal aap kam dikhte haiN sdc pe. Iltijaah hai ke hum jaise naye logoN ka protsaahan bhi kiya karen aur tashreef laaya kareN. Apna khayaal rakheN. Khair andesh **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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4th September 2015, 10:27 AM
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waaahhhhh kyaa khoob andaaz e bayaan hai Danny chachu.............. pata nahi aaj kaise nazar pad gayee is kalaam pe aur ba padh kar dil jhoom uuthaa....... bahut si daad pesh hain aapko.. quboool kijiyega... shaad..... |
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4th September 2015, 10:44 AM
Kabhi kabhi
Zindagi ke kitaab ke pan.non par kuch lafz paata houn… Magar we mere ungliyon ke likhe houe nahin hein… Waaaaahh! Bas waaaaaahhh...kamaal ki peshkash... Bahut sari daad qubool kijiyega... Salamat rahein..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th September 2015, 12:11 AM
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Aap ko ye ehsaas acche lage, so hum behad khush houe...! Thanks so much for inciting me to be what I once was, I'll try my best some day...! Take very good care of yourself,ok...? Ashirvaad ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th September 2015, 12:16 AM
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Aapka hamesha se hamara dene ka bahut bahut dhanyavaad, in ehsaasoN ko bhi pasand karne ke liye aap ka aabhari heiN hum...! Jald hi kuch naye likhne ki ashaa hum bhi rakhte heiN...! Apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...? DuaaoN ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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Bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne iss puraane nazm ko khuubsuurat paaya...! Aap ki iltijaah sar ankhoN par aur hum apni upastithi par jyaada dhyaan diya kareiNge...! Saath dete raheiN aur apna khayaal rakheiN, ok...? DuaaoN ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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