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27th March 2005, 03:45 PM
well to jisne bhi ye padha hai main uska bahut bada ehsaan hai mujh par
hai qatil tera inkaar,lekin
tere inkaar me andaaz bhi hai
mat jao muskurate chehre par mere
chupa isme rulata raaz bhi hai
dil me jo baat thi aayi na zubaan tak
dafan vo baat dil me aaj bhi hai
ek baar kabhi hamse bhi poocha hota
hamari khamoshi me awaaz bhi hai........
frnds agar aapne ise padha to reply zaroor de bhale hi aapko ye pasand na aaya ho par zaroor reply kare
kyuki ye poem hamare dil se bahut hi kareeb hai....ye maine us waqt likhi thi ..................
khair chodo.....
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27th March 2005, 03:59 PM
hi Jubin,
dil me jo baat thi aayi na zubaan tak
dafan vo baat dil me aaj bhi hai
ek baar kabhi hamse bhi poocha hota
hamari khamoshi me awaaz bhi hai........
bahut achhe,
humko lagta hai ki...
Dard to hai dil mein aapke bahut,
dard-e-bayaan ka andaaz bhi hai...
Mohabbat...
Naina
Ek se musaafir hain, Ek sa muqaddar hai...
Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein...
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27th March 2005, 04:05 PM
thanks naina ji ki hamne aapko pukara aur aap chale aaye
thanks for reading
and thanks for the compliments
aakhon ki zubaan ye aansu kehte hai
chup rehte hai par bahut kuch kehte hai
in aansuo ki kismat to dekho
ye unke liye bhi behte hai jo in aankhon me rehte hai
adaalat husn ki hogi
mukadma tere ishq ka hoga
gawahi tere dil ki hogi
aur mujrim tera saccha pyar hoga
thanks again
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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27th March 2005, 04:52 PM
bahut accha apne likha hai. sach hai ki dil ki baat zubaan par aane se hichkichaati hai aur dil ki baat ko samajhna sach mein mushkil hai.
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27th March 2005, 04:58 PM
mere dard ko samajhne ke liye bahut bahut bahut shukriya
main aapka bahut aabhaari hu ki aap hamari khidmat me hazir hue aur hamari kalam ko padha aapka bada ehsaan hai mujh par
aate rahiye ga
arz hai
saath dete vo to hamari zindagi sawar gayi hoti
khushiyo se hamne apni khali jholi bhar li hoti
unki bewafai ke baad socha tha mar jaye
par saath kalam ne deti to shayad hamne khudkhushi kar li hoti
aapka-jubin
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
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27th March 2005, 05:07 PM
lagta hai apke dil mein bahut dard hai. kya kissine apke saath bewafai ki hai? agar haan, to uske liye main sharminda hoon aur ek baat main kehna chahoongi ki har bewafai ke peeche koi kaaran zaroor hota hai.
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27th March 2005, 05:20 PM
dear jubin, u personally invited me to read ur post. well buddy its really awesome. loved reading it. gr8 as usual. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too. all the best for future
gulshan mein fakat kaante to na they
gul bhi to bahut they eh mere khuda
humnein kya ki khata jo hai aisa hua
kyo ho gaye hum zindaghi se kAFA
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27th March 2005, 05:22 PM
maanta hu adarshgirl ji
isi liye kehta hu
bewafa bewafa nahi hota
khatam ye faisala nahi hota
kam piyein to bahakne lagte hain
zyada piyein to nasha nahi hota
kuch to majbooriyaan rahi hongi unki
yun hi koi bewafa nahi hota
main aur meri tanhayee..............
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jootha hi sahi,
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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27th March 2005, 05:27 PM
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dear jubin, u personally invited me to read ur post. well buddy its really awesome. loved reading it. gr8 as usual. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too. all the best for future
gulshan mein fakat kaante to na they
gul bhi to bahut they eh mere khuda
humnein kya ki khata jo hai aisa hua
kyo ho gaye hum zindaghi se kAFA
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aapka bahut bahut shukriya jas ji
thanks for comming and appreciating
aapka bahut ehsaan jas ji
thanks u
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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27th March 2005, 05:32 PM
jubin in friendship i think u dont need to say thanks. waise tumhara kalam kabliye tarrif tha so it cudnt be avoided by not giving a reply. well jubin all i know is i love reading gud things aur jab bhi padti hoon kuch acha to its my duty to appriciate the poets works. well it was awesome.keep flowing ur thoughts
kehte hai ki likhne ke liye,hona chahiye ek sanam
dil pe khaye ho zakhm kisi se,aankhein bhi rehti ho nam
ehsaan maan e "JAS" TU,aapne us dost ka
jisne banaya likhne ke kabil,dekar tujhko yeh gam!
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27th March 2005, 05:34 PM
meri khwahish bas yehi hai ki aap apne gham se bahaar nikal jaaye. zindagi yehi khatam nahi ho gayee hai apki. manti hoon ki vah dard apko bahut chot pahucha raha hai, par samay ke saath zakhm bhar jaayega. koshish kijeeye ki us dard ko bhool sake aap aur zindagi mein aage badh sake kyunki zindagi bahut chhoti hai. main apka dard sirf samajh sakti hoon, lekin keh zaroor sakti hoon ki agar aap koshish kare, to aap us vyakti ko bhool jaaenge jisne apko dard diya hai.
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jubin in friendship i think u dont need to say thanks. waise tumhara kalam kabliye tarrif tha so it cudnt be avoided by not giving a reply. well jubin all i know is i love reading gud things aur jab bhi padti hoon kuch acha to its my duty to appriciate the poets works. well it was awesome.keep flowing ur thoughts
kehte hai ki likhne ke liye,hona chahiye ek sanam
dil pe khaye ho zakhm kisi se,aankhein bhi rehti ho nam
ehsaan maan e "JAS" TU,aapne us dost ka
jisne banaya likhne ke kabil,dekar tujhko yeh gam!
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ab agar main wapas thanks kahunga to...........
anyways thanks for the support
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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meri khwahish bas yehi hai ki aap apne gham se bahaar nikal jaaye. zindagi yehi khatam nahi ho gayee hai apki. manti hoon ki vah dard apko bahut chot pahucha raha hai, par samay ke saath zakhm bhar jaayega. koshish kijeeye ki us dard ko bhool sake aap aur zindagi mein aage badh sake kyunki zindagi bahut chhoti hai. main apka dard sirf samajh sakti hoon, lekin keh zaroor sakti hoon ki agar aap koshish kare, to aap us vyakti ko bhool jaaenge jisne apko dard diya hai.
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nahi bhul sakta unhe AG ji
kyu ki har pal har jagah mujhe unki yaad satatee hai
bas unki bewafaii ki dastaan ko kalam me utar dete hai aur dard thoda kam ho jaata hai
aur tum bolo........
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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27th March 2005, 08:27 PM
Dost Jubin...
Kya kahu meiN..AAp ne itne acche se likha hai
aur itne dard se likha hai....
Too good! Excellent work!
Keep Writing buddy!
bye cya....
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Listen to your mind...but follow your heart.
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27th March 2005, 09:17 PM
hii zubin.... thanx for sharing with us..bahut hi achha rythm di hai aapne words ko....aur basss ek ke baad ek sher dil mein utarte chale gaye...
its too gud zubin..waiting for next one...
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27th March 2005, 10:38 PM
bohat accha likha hai tumne ye .... saral aur sundar... bas yahi kahuNga ... accha laga ... bohat ...
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
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28th March 2005, 09:09 AM
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Dost Jubin...
Kya kahu meiN..AAp ne itne acche se likha hai
aur itne dard se likha hai....
Too good! Excellent work!
Keep Writing buddy!
bye cya....
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yash sahab thanks for reading
aapne mere dard ko samjha bahut shukriya aapka
aate rahiyega........
aapka-jubin
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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28th March 2005, 09:11 AM
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hii zubin.... thanx for sharing with us..bahut hi achha rythm di hai aapne words ko....aur basss ek ke baad ek sher dil mein utarte chale gaye...
its too gud zubin..waiting for next one...
take care
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thanks for the compliments pallavi keeeeeeep reading
bahut ehsaan aapka......
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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28th March 2005, 09:13 AM
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bohat accha likha hai tumne ye .... saral aur sundar... bas yahi kahuNga ... accha laga ... bohat ...
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kunal ji main aapka bahut aabhaari hu ki aape waqt nikal kar hame padha
aapki daad ke liye bahut shukriya
thanks again keeeeeeep reading
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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28th March 2005, 01:38 PM
ab kya kahoon mein jubin kuch bacha hi nahi kehne ko apke lafz dil ko choo gaye itni aasani se aap ne apne dard ko bayaan kiya apke dil mein buhut dard hai hum ye nahi kehte ki aap use bhool jaye kyuki kisi ko apne dil se apni yaado se bhoolana aasaan nahin koi humse pouche kaise sambhalte hai apni yaado ko apne dil ko ....koshish kijiyega ki aap us dard ko kam kar sake har koi bewafa nahi hota.......
NAA TUJHE CHOD SAKTE HAI,TERE HU BHI NAHI SAKTE
YE KAISI BEBASI HAI AAJ HUM ROO BHI NAHI SAKTE
CHUPA SAKTE HAI AUR NAA HUM DEKHA SAKTE HAI LOOGO KO
KUCH AISA DAAG HAI DIL PER JU HUM DHOO BHI NAHI SAKTE
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28th March 2005, 05:34 PM
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ab kya kahoon mein jubin kuch bacha hi nahi kehne ko apke lafz dil ko choo gaye itni aasani se aap ne apne dard ko bayaan kiya apke dil mein buhut dard hai hum ye nahi kehte ki aap use bhool jaye kyuki kisi ko apne dil se apni yaado se bhoolana aasaan nahin koi humse pouche kaise sambhalte hai apni yaado ko apne dil ko ....koshish kijiyega ki aap us dard ko kam kar sake har koi bewafa nahi hota.......
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thanks for the compliments simran
aapne mere dard ko samjha thanks a lot
koshish bahut ki dil ko ki bhula de unhe par afsos
ishq ke rishte bhi kitne ajeeb hote hai
chup rehte hai par bahut kuch kehte hai
meri halat par afsos mat karna yaaro
ishq me apne apne naseeb hote hai............
thanks for the support simran
keeeeeeeeeeeeeep reading aur aate rahiyega
aapka- <<<-JuBiN->>>
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jootha hi sahi,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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28th March 2005, 11:22 PM
hi jubin
wow!!! i'm glad u r back
achcha likha hai
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29th March 2005, 02:48 AM
Very well written Jubin.... Kya kahu main ki mujhe yeh rachna kitni pasand aayi hai.... aaise hi likhte rehna! Take care*
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hi jubin
wow!!! i'm glad u r back
achcha likha hai
sonal
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thanks for the compliments sonal but i;m not yet back....
thanks again
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jootha hi sahi,
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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29th March 2005, 08:44 AM
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Very well written Jubin.... Kya kahu main ki mujhe yeh rachna kitni pasand aayi hai.... aaise hi likhte rehna! Take care*
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parul bena tamne mari rachna gami jaani ne bau anand thayo
wanchta rehjo
ane malta rehjo
aapno-jubin
main aur meri tanhayee..............
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jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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30th March 2005, 06:08 PM
arz hai doston
aakhon se duur ho par dil se nahi
dil me zaroor ho par milte nahi
yahi to shikwa hai tumse aye dost
tum milte zaroor ho par dil se nahi...........
main aur meri tanhayee..............
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jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
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31st March 2005, 12:25 PM
Jubin ji!.........tame khub j saaru lakhyu chhe....samay nahato mali rahyo ghana diwas thi ..etle pehla reply nahti kari shaki.
but...u have writnn 2 gud really!..thx 4 the PM
tc
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31st March 2005, 04:17 PM
Zubin,
Dost....aap ka andaze bayaan achchha hai.....lekin...achchha kehne se pehle...mein vo situation bhi samaj sakte hun jab aap ke dil se ye nikla hoga....
inkaar me bhi maza hai dost....
apne dard ko palke rakhna dost.....kabhi kaam aayega....
-Ashish
Dard se mera daaman bhar de ya allah...
fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh...
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has de yaar....teri saas ki kasam...:) -
31st March 2005, 04:30 PM
Tu Zinda hai mere dost....Zindagi ki baat kar...
Ai mere yaar..mood bana....mausiki ki baat kar...
Kuchh aisa likh...jo dil me utar jaye nazar bhar me...
khuda ne dil tuje diya hai.....dillagi ki baat kar....
jasbaat aise jaga de...jo unke dil ko chhu le....
Pyar kiya hai dost....Bandagi ki baat kar...
Gar dil na lage....unki yaad bahot aaye...
Bhool ja unhe thodider...Madhuri(dixit) ki baat kar...
Ai mere yaar mood bana.....mausiki ki baat kar.....
Pyaar kiya hai tune....Zindagi ki baat kar....
to kya hua gar kabhi dard se mulakaat kar....
apne hi andar ro le....na khurafaat kar...
aansu chhipa ke tujko....duniya ko hasana hai...
chhed khushiyon ke tarane...mastagi ki baat kar...
Har ek insaani bachcha tere pyaar ke kaabil hai..
siraf ek ka tu chhod ab poori duniya se pyaar kar...
Ai mere yaar.....mood bana.....zindagi ki baat kar...
-"Aas"
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Ham bhi dariya hai....hamein apne hunnar maloom hai.....
Dard se mera daaman bhar de ya allah...
fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh...
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Re: hi!! -
31st March 2005, 06:40 PM
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Originally posted by komal5
Jubin ji!.........tame khub j saaru lakhyu chhe....samay nahato mali rahyo ghana diwas thi ..etle pehla reply nahti kari shaki.
but...u have writnn 2 gud really!..thx 4 the PM
tc
komal
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komal ji thanks
tame maari post wanchi mane bau anand thayo
tame reply na pan karyo hot toy wandho na hot
kem ke tamaro saath to maaro saate che
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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31st March 2005, 06:42 PM
ashish ji thanks for replying mujhe khushi hai ki aap mere jazbat ko samajh paaye
aur aapka bhi likha bahut accha hai
arz hai
gham ki baat mat kar
hame to patthar pighalte dekha hai
irada faulaad tha jis "jubin" ka
patton sa bikharte dekha hai..........
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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hi -
2nd April 2005, 01:30 PM
dard ji,
aapne wakai bahot hi aachi post likhi hai,
mujhe aaisi post, ya shayri's bahot acchi lagti hai,
jisme dard bhi ho, aur pyaar bhi ho............
keep it up..........
bye,
take care..........
ab gawara nahi koi aur bhi ho jo meri tarah u tumpe mare.....
tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di.......
**~ Aashi ~**
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Re: hi -
2nd April 2005, 01:38 PM
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Originally posted by aashika
dard ji,
aapne wakai bahot hi aachi post likhi hai,
mujhe aaisi post, ya shayri's bahot acchi lagti hai,
jisme dard bhi ho, aur pyaar bhi ho............
keep it up..........
bye,
take care..........
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aashika ji aapko meri post pasand aayi
jaaan kar khushi hui
thanks for the compliments......
keeeeeeeeeeep reading
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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3rd April 2005, 08:35 AM
jubin ji,
aashika ji is right, is shayri main pyar bhi hai aur dard bhi, wht makes this poetry fantastic is that you have successfully expressed both feelings, which can be pretty hard to do
keep up the good work, i will be waiting for more of our poetry
take care
mukhra
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»~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~«
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I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...
~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~
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3rd April 2005, 10:14 PM
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Originally posted by Mukhra
jubin ji,
aashika ji is right, is shayri main pyar bhi hai aur dard bhi, wht makes this poetry fantastic is that you have successfully expressed both feelings, which can be pretty hard to do
keep up the good work, i will be waiting for more of our poetry
take care
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mukhra ji mere jazbaat ko samajhne ke liye shukriya
thanks for the compliments
keeeeeeeeep reading
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
(¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸)
log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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9th April 2005, 04:06 PM
«·´`·.(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*).·´`·»
«·´¨*·.¸¸ asgher¸¸.·*¨`·»
«·´`·.(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸).·´`·»
TuM Yeh KehTi Ho MaiN TanHaYee Se KYuN DaRta HooN
Tu SuNo
JaB MaiN TanHaa HoTa HooN
Tu TeRi YaaDeiN AaTi Hai
Ab TuM Yeh KaHo Gi
Tu TuM MuJhe YaaD Nahi KaRNa ChahTe
BaaT Yeh Nahi Hai
BaaT Yeh Hai Ke TeRi YaaDeiN MeRi JaaN Le LeiN Gi
Tu TuM MauT Se DaRte Ho
BaaT Yeh Bhi NaHi Hai
BaaT Yeh Hai Ke
AGaR MaiN MaR GaYa Tu
TeRi YaaDeiN KiS Ko TaLaaSh KaReiN Gi ...
ApNa AsGheR....
Where we live is home, Home that our feet may
leave, But not our hearts.
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9th April 2005, 06:31 PM
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«·´¨*·.¸¸ asgher¸¸.·*¨`·»
«·´`·.(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸).·´`·»
TuM Yeh KehTi Ho MaiN TanHaYee Se KYuN DaRta HooN
Tu SuNo
JaB MaiN TanHaa HoTa HooN
Tu TeRi YaaDeiN AaTi Hai
Ab TuM Yeh KaHo Gi
Tu TuM MuJhe YaaD Nahi KaRNa ChahTe
BaaT Yeh Nahi Hai
BaaT Yeh Hai Ke TeRi YaaDeiN MeRi JaaN Le LeiN Gi
Tu TuM MauT Se DaRte Ho
BaaT Yeh Bhi NaHi Hai
BaaT Yeh Hai Ke
AGaR MaiN MaR GaYa Tu
TeRi YaaDeiN KiS Ko TaLaaSh KaReiN Gi ...
ApNa AsGheR....
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badhiya
kya baat hai yaaaar
likhte rehna
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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10th April 2005, 04:05 PM
hi jubin ji
kashh...! humare khamoshi ki awaz koi sun leta aur samjhta.....
likhte rahiyega........
bye
"tum na jane kis jaha main kho gaye"
khushiiiiiiiiiiiii
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10th April 2005, 04:11 PM
thanks khushi ji
yahi hai na aapki halat
Sapna dekhte hain raat ko aashiqui ka
aur darte hain ki jaldi subah na ho
mashooq dhoondhte hain khoobsurat koi
aur darte hain ki wo bewafa na ho
main aapki halat samajh sakta hu
main bhi aise hi daur se guzar chuka hu........
aapka-jubin
main aur meri tanhayee..............
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying
jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
«´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`»
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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....
hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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10th April 2005, 04:23 PM
wah bhai wah kya baat hai bari hi safai se aapne apna haal bayaan kar diya.
dil ki baat jab jubaan pe nahi aati hai,
tab use samajh pana mushkil ho jata hai.
na jaane kyon gam milenge sirf jante hue bhi,
deewana ye dil ho jata hai.
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