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27th March 2005, 03:45 PM
well to jisne bhi ye padha hai main uska bahut bada ehsaan hai mujh par
hai qatil tera inkaar,lekin tere inkaar me andaaz bhi hai mat jao muskurate chehre par mere chupa isme rulata raaz bhi hai dil me jo baat thi aayi na zubaan tak dafan vo baat dil me aaj bhi hai ek baar kabhi hamse bhi poocha hota hamari khamoshi me awaaz bhi hai........ frnds agar aapne ise padha to reply zaroor de bhale hi aapko ye pasand na aaya ho par zaroor reply kare kyuki ye poem hamare dil se bahut hi kareeb hai....ye maine us waqt likhi thi .................. khair chodo..... aapka {:}}}>>>Jubin<<<{{{:} I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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27th March 2005, 03:59 PM
hi Jubin,
dil me jo baat thi aayi na zubaan tak dafan vo baat dil me aaj bhi hai ek baar kabhi hamse bhi poocha hota hamari khamoshi me awaaz bhi hai........ bahut achhe, humko lagta hai ki... Dard to hai dil mein aapke bahut, dard-e-bayaan ka andaaz bhi hai... Mohabbat... Naina Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein... |
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27th March 2005, 04:05 PM
thanks naina ji ki hamne aapko pukara aur aap chale aaye
thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments aakhon ki zubaan ye aansu kehte hai chup rehte hai par bahut kuch kehte hai in aansuo ki kismat to dekho ye unke liye bhi behte hai jo in aankhon me rehte hai adaalat husn ki hogi mukadma tere ishq ka hoga gawahi tere dil ki hogi aur mujrim tera saccha pyar hoga thanks again I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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27th March 2005, 04:52 PM
bahut accha apne likha hai. sach hai ki dil ki baat zubaan par aane se hichkichaati hai aur dil ki baat ko samajhna sach mein mushkil hai.
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27th March 2005, 04:58 PM
mere dard ko samajhne ke liye bahut bahut bahut shukriya
main aapka bahut aabhaari hu ki aap hamari khidmat me hazir hue aur hamari kalam ko padha aapka bada ehsaan hai mujh par aate rahiye ga arz hai saath dete vo to hamari zindagi sawar gayi hoti khushiyo se hamne apni khali jholi bhar li hoti unki bewafai ke baad socha tha mar jaye par saath kalam ne deti to shayad hamne khudkhushi kar li hoti aapka-jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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27th March 2005, 05:07 PM
lagta hai apke dil mein bahut dard hai. kya kissine apke saath bewafai ki hai? agar haan, to uske liye main sharminda hoon aur ek baat main kehna chahoongi ki har bewafai ke peeche koi kaaran zaroor hota hai.
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27th March 2005, 05:20 PM
dear jubin, u personally invited me to read ur post. well buddy its really awesome. loved reading it. gr8 as usual. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too. all the best for future
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27th March 2005, 05:22 PM
maanta hu adarshgirl ji
isi liye kehta hu bewafa bewafa nahi hota khatam ye faisala nahi hota kam piyein to bahakne lagte hain zyada piyein to nasha nahi hota kuch to majbooriyaan rahi hongi unki yun hi koi bewafa nahi hota I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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27th March 2005, 05:27 PM
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aapka bahut bahut shukriya jas ji thanks for comming and appreciating aapka bahut ehsaan jas ji thanks u I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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27th March 2005, 05:32 PM
jubin in friendship i think u dont need to say thanks. waise tumhara kalam kabliye tarrif tha so it cudnt be avoided by not giving a reply. well jubin all i know is i love reading gud things aur jab bhi padti hoon kuch acha to its my duty to appriciate the poets works. well it was awesome.keep flowing ur thoughts
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27th March 2005, 05:34 PM
meri khwahish bas yehi hai ki aap apne gham se bahaar nikal jaaye. zindagi yehi khatam nahi ho gayee hai apki. manti hoon ki vah dard apko bahut chot pahucha raha hai, par samay ke saath zakhm bhar jaayega. koshish kijeeye ki us dard ko bhool sake aap aur zindagi mein aage badh sake kyunki zindagi bahut chhoti hai. main apka dard sirf samajh sakti hoon, lekin keh zaroor sakti hoon ki agar aap koshish kare, to aap us vyakti ko bhool jaaenge jisne apko dard diya hai.
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27th March 2005, 07:04 PM
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ab agar main wapas thanks kahunga to........... anyways thanks for the support I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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27th March 2005, 07:07 PM
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kyu ki har pal har jagah mujhe unki yaad satatee hai bas unki bewafaii ki dastaan ko kalam me utar dete hai aur dard thoda kam ho jaata hai aur tum bolo........ I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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27th March 2005, 08:27 PM
Dost Jubin...
Kya kahu meiN..AAp ne itne acche se likha hai aur itne dard se likha hai.... Too good! Excellent work! Keep Writing buddy! bye cya.... : : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : : Listen to your mind...but follow your heart. "Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain." ---------------------------------------------- : : Yogesh : : |
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27th March 2005, 09:17 PM
hii zubin.... thanx for sharing with us..bahut hi achha rythm di hai aapne words ko....aur basss ek ke baad ek sher dil mein utarte chale gaye...
its too gud zubin..waiting for next one... take care ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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27th March 2005, 10:38 PM
bohat accha likha hai tumne ye .... saral aur sundar... bas yahi kahuNga ... accha laga ... bohat ...
kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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28th March 2005, 09:09 AM
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aapne mere dard ko samjha bahut shukriya aapka aate rahiyega........ aapka-jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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28th March 2005, 09:11 AM
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bahut ehsaan aapka...... I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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28th March 2005, 09:13 AM
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aapki daad ke liye bahut shukriya thanks again keeeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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28th March 2005, 01:38 PM
ab kya kahoon mein jubin kuch bacha hi nahi kehne ko apke lafz dil ko choo gaye itni aasani se aap ne apne dard ko bayaan kiya apke dil mein buhut dard hai hum ye nahi kehte ki aap use bhool jaye kyuki kisi ko apne dil se apni yaado se bhoolana aasaan nahin koi humse pouche kaise sambhalte hai apni yaado ko apne dil ko ....koshish kijiyega ki aap us dard ko kam kar sake har koi bewafa nahi hota.......
NAA TUJHE CHOD SAKTE HAI,TERE HU BHI NAHI SAKTE YE KAISI BEBASI HAI AAJ HUM ROO BHI NAHI SAKTE CHUPA SAKTE HAI AUR NAA HUM DEKHA SAKTE HAI LOOGO KO KUCH AISA DAAG HAI DIL PER JU HUM DHOO BHI NAHI SAKTE UNFORGETABLE SIMRAN ~~~***~~~***~~~***~~~ PYARR KARO,PYARR KI INTEHA DEKHO PYARR KARO,PYARR KA INTEZAAR KARO. |
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28th March 2005, 05:34 PM
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aapne mere dard ko samjha thanks a lot koshish bahut ki dil ko ki bhula de unhe par afsos ishq ke rishte bhi kitne ajeeb hote hai chup rehte hai par bahut kuch kehte hai meri halat par afsos mat karna yaaro ishq me apne apne naseeb hote hai............ thanks for the support simran keeeeeeeeeeeeeep reading aur aate rahiyega aapka-<<<-JuBiN->>> I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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28th March 2005, 11:22 PM
hi jubin
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29th March 2005, 02:48 AM
Very well written Jubin.... Kya kahu main ki mujhe yeh rachna kitni pasand aayi hai.... aaise hi likhte rehna! Take care*
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thanks again I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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wanchta rehjo ane malta rehjo aapno-jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th March 2005, 06:08 PM
arz hai doston
aakhon se duur ho par dil se nahi dil me zaroor ho par milte nahi yahi to shikwa hai tumse aye dost tum milte zaroor ho par dil se nahi........... I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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31st March 2005, 12:25 PM
Jubin ji!.........tame khub j saaru lakhyu chhe....samay nahato mali rahyo ghana diwas thi ..etle pehla reply nahti kari shaki.
but...u have writnn 2 gud really!..thx 4 the PM tc komal |
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31st March 2005, 04:17 PM
Zubin,
Dost....aap ka andaze bayaan achchha hai.....lekin...achchha kehne se pehle...mein vo situation bhi samaj sakte hun jab aap ke dil se ye nikla hoga.... inkaar me bhi maza hai dost.... apne dard ko palke rakhna dost.....kabhi kaam aayega.... -Ashish fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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has de yaar....teri saas ki kasam...:) |
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has de yaar....teri saas ki kasam...:) -
31st March 2005, 04:30 PM
Tu Zinda hai mere dost....Zindagi ki baat kar...
Ai mere yaar..mood bana....mausiki ki baat kar... Kuchh aisa likh...jo dil me utar jaye nazar bhar me... khuda ne dil tuje diya hai.....dillagi ki baat kar.... jasbaat aise jaga de...jo unke dil ko chhu le.... Pyar kiya hai dost....Bandagi ki baat kar... Gar dil na lage....unki yaad bahot aaye... Bhool ja unhe thodider...Madhuri(dixit) ki baat kar... Ai mere yaar mood bana.....mausiki ki baat kar..... Pyaar kiya hai tune....Zindagi ki baat kar.... to kya hua gar kabhi dard se mulakaat kar.... apne hi andar ro le....na khurafaat kar... aansu chhipa ke tujko....duniya ko hasana hai... chhed khushiyon ke tarane...mastagi ki baat kar... Har ek insaani bachcha tere pyaar ke kaabil hai.. siraf ek ka tu chhod ab poori duniya se pyaar kar... Ai mere yaar.....mood bana.....zindagi ki baat kar... -"Aas" ------------ Ham bhi dariya hai....hamein apne hunnar maloom hai..... fir chaahe deewana kar de...ya allahh... |
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tame maari post wanchi mane bau anand thayo tame reply na pan karyo hot toy wandho na hot kem ke tamaro saath to maaro saate che I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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31st March 2005, 06:42 PM
ashish ji thanks for replying mujhe khushi hai ki aap mere jazbat ko samajh paaye
aur aapka bhi likha bahut accha hai arz hai gham ki baat mat kar hame to patthar pighalte dekha hai irada faulaad tha jis "jubin" ka patton sa bikharte dekha hai.......... I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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2nd April 2005, 01:30 PM
dard ji,
aapne wakai bahot hi aachi post likhi hai, mujhe aaisi post, ya shayri's bahot acchi lagti hai, jisme dard bhi ho, aur pyaar bhi ho............ keep it up.......... bye, take care.......... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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jaaan kar khushi hui thanks for the compliments...... keeeeeeeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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3rd April 2005, 08:35 AM
jubin ji,
aashika ji is right, is shayri main pyar bhi hai aur dard bhi, wht makes this poetry fantastic is that you have successfully expressed both feelings, which can be pretty hard to do keep up the good work, i will be waiting for more of our poetry take care mukhra »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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thanks for the compliments keeeeeeeeep reading I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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«·´¨*·.¸¸ asgher¸¸.·*¨`·» «·´`·.(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸).·´`·» TuM Yeh KehTi Ho MaiN TanHaYee Se KYuN DaRta HooN Tu SuNo JaB MaiN TanHaa HoTa HooN Tu TeRi YaaDeiN AaTi Hai Ab TuM Yeh KaHo Gi Tu TuM MuJhe YaaD Nahi KaRNa ChahTe BaaT Yeh Nahi Hai BaaT Yeh Hai Ke TeRi YaaDeiN MeRi JaaN Le LeiN Gi Tu TuM MauT Se DaRte Ho BaaT Yeh Bhi NaHi Hai BaaT Yeh Hai Ke AGaR MaiN MaR GaYa Tu TeRi YaaDeiN KiS Ko TaLaaSh KaReiN Gi ... ApNa AsGheR.... leave, But not our hearts. |
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badhiya kya baat hai yaaaar likhte rehna I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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10th April 2005, 04:05 PM
hi jubin ji
kashh...! humare khamoshi ki awaz koi sun leta aur samjhta..... likhte rahiyega........ bye khushiiiiiiiiiiiii |
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10th April 2005, 04:11 PM
thanks khushi ji
yahi hai na aapki halat Sapna dekhte hain raat ko aashiqui ka aur darte hain ki jaldi subah na ho mashooq dhoondhte hain khoobsurat koi aur darte hain ki wo bewafa na ho main aapki halat samajh sakta hu main bhi aise hi daur se guzar chuka hu........ aapka-jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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10th April 2005, 04:23 PM
wah bhai wah kya baat hai bari hi safai se aapne apna haal bayaan kar diya.
dil ki baat jab jubaan pe nahi aati hai, tab use samajh pana mushkil ho jata hai. na jaane kyon gam milenge sirf jante hue bhi, deewana ye dil ho jata hai. |
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