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17th May 2005, 06:49 PM
Kucch log sitam karne ko taiyar baithe hain
kucch log mager humpe dil har baithe hain wah..! ishq ko aag ka darya hi samjh lijiye huzoor koi is paar tou koi us paar baithe hain bahot khubb! kaun kehta hai ke is sheher me sare hain bewafa humare samne wafadar do chaar baithe hain  nice one....!jubin ji...is gazal...mein dil ke taar chedne ki....khwahish hai! i liked it...alot!.....yahi kehna hai..yun hi nikharti rahe apki shayri...! tc komal ------------ |
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17th May 2005, 08:50 PM
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thanks ha ye shayri nahi thi ye mere dil ka tukda tha apna keemti waqt hame dene ke liye thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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17th May 2005, 08:51 PM
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thanks for the compliments hamre liye dua maange ke liye shukriya padhte rahiyega aapka-jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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18th May 2005, 12:14 PM
thanks for inviting.
Sher padha acha laga. Kiya Rakha Hai Zamaney Mein Churaney Ke Liya Sab Ki Sab Bekar Ki Cheeze Hai Utaney ke Liya Ek Tera Hi Dil Tha Jo Ab Nahi Hain Ek woh Hi Tha Tanha Zamaney Ko Dekhaney Ke Liya Kaisey Kahdey Ki Yeh Dil Deewana Nahi Hai Tanha Hai Magar Awara Nahi Hai |
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19th May 2005, 08:23 AM
Dear Jubin,
Thanks for the invitation. Really liked reading something after a long time. Keep writing and keep Smiling |
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19th May 2005, 03:20 PM
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thanks for the reply thanks for the compliments I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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19th May 2005, 03:22 PM
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thanks for liking my post thanks for comming I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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19th May 2005, 11:30 PM
Wah Jubin ji, Kaise hai aap??? bahut accha likha hai aap ne.... likhte rehna...khush rehna!
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20th May 2005, 08:10 AM
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aap kaise ho thank for the compliments I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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20th May 2005, 09:55 PM
yu to lakhon haseen hai is duniya me
tum jaisa kisi zamane me nahi waise to kitne jaan peete hai roz hai par tumhari aankhon ka nasha kisi paimane me nahi I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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25th June 2005, 01:45 PM
dear jubin,
aapki shayri bahoot hi achi aur khubsurat words hai aise hi likhte rahiye aur isse bhi sunder words piro ke pyari pyari shyari likhiye pallavi you don't need to have anything else. If you don't have it, it doesn't matter much what else you do have. |
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19th July 2005, 08:06 PM
" duniya se rooth jane ki khwahish hai humari
kya karoon is khwahish pe pehredaar baithe hain" Wah wah Bahut khoob.... kitni achi baat kahee aapne.. Sorry for replying late Dard Ji... i had`nt chked my messages.. aur ji nahi bilkul nahi..aapk posts bahut ache lage mujhe . Aise hi likhte rahiyega... |
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21st July 2005, 05:56 PM
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ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi...... ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz magar yuhi kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai ---not mine |
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21st July 2005, 05:57 PM
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thanks frnd aapko pasand aayi jaan kar khushi hui keep reading ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi...... ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz magar yuhi kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai ---not mine |
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31st July 2005, 11:06 PM
very nice bohat acha likha hai aap ne aur kafi mukhtalif andaaz apnaya acha laga ye andaz
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5th August 2005, 11:22 PM
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thanks moon ji padhte rahiye ke zindagi teri zulfo ke narm chao me guzarne pati to shadaab ho bhi sakti thi...... ye ranj-o-gham ki syaahi jo dil pe chaai hai tere nazar ki shuwao.n me kho bhi sakti thi.....magar ye ho na saka magar ye ho na saka aur ab ye aalam hai ki tu nahi tera gham teri justajoo bhi nahi guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise ise kisi ke sahare ki aarzoo bhi nahi na koi raah na manzil na roshni ka suraag bhatak rahi hai andhero me zindagi meri inhi andheron me reh jaunga kabhi kho kar main jaanta hu meri ham nafaz magar yuhi kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayaal aata hai ---not mine |
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