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<>*Ye waqt dur nikal jayega*<>
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<>*Ye waqt dur nikal jayega*<>

Fer k nazrein khudse, na soch tera dil badal jayega,
Ik din tadpegaa aur tadapkar, khud hi bahel jayegaa

Masoom dil ka maalik hai tu, banda bada hi nek hai
Isily sun ae nadaan, tu har kadam pe machal jayega

Hai namazi tu aur, karta hai apne Maula par yakeen
Bichhdega jab koi tera, ..ye tera yakeen dahal jayega

Na kar yakeen tu yahan, apne sath chalte saaye par
Aayega jaise hi andhera, ye tere hath se fisal jayega

Sachchaai ki jeet hai aur, neki se hi hume jannat mile
Ye baat samjhega jab tak tu, ye waqt dur nikal jayega...!!!


Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..



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11th December 2011, 08:53 PM

Hai namazi tu aur, karta hai apne Maula par yakeen
Bichhdega jab koi tera, ..ye tera yakeen dahal jayega

Na kar yakeen tu yahan, apne sath chalte saaye par
Aayega jaise hi andhera, ye tere hath se fisal jayega

waaah !! Kya baat hai ... kya baat hai ... Gajab likhte ho aap...
Dil se daad pesh hai ... Qubool karein !!

Keep writing !!


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11th December 2011, 10:08 PM

shukriya .. meharbani JIM ji k aapko hamara likha pasand aaya.... yahan itne achche likhne wale hain k kuch post karte hue bhi dar sa lagta hai..... aapki tareef se thodi si himmat bandhi ji.... yunhi sath dete rahiyega.....


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12th December 2011, 12:23 PM

Sachchaai ki jeet hai aur, neki se hi hume jannat mile
Ye baat samjhega jab tak tu, ye waqt dur nikal jayega...!!!


wah wah kia soch aur khiyaal hai dear.... too good.. hats off


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12th December 2011, 10:31 PM

shukriya janab e hsn ali....... aap aye aur hamare likhe ko pasand bhi kiya...... isse best kya ho sakta hai...... ji.... yunhi hausla badhate rahiye...... khush rahiye....


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15th December 2011, 07:00 PM

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<>*Ye waqt dur nikal jayega*<>

Fer k nazrein khudse, na soch tera dil badal jayega,
Ik din tadpegaa aur tadapkar, khud hi bahel jayegaa

Masoom dil ka maalik hai tu, banda bada hi nek hai
Isily sun ae nadaan, tu har kadam pe machal jayega

Hai namazi tu aur, karta hai apne Maula par yakeen
Bichhdega jab koi tera, ..ye tera yakeen dahal jayega

Na kar yakeen tu yahan, apne sath chalte saaye par
Aayega jaise hi andhera, ye tere hath se fisal jayega

Sachchaai ki jeet hai aur, neki se hi hume jannat mile
Ye baat samjhega jab tak tu, ye waqt dur nikal jayega...!!!
WaaH ! Bahut Khoob !! Anamika Ji !!!

Takhleeq Ke Mazamin AchChhe HaiN ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Wo Narm Lehje Me Bat Karna
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Na kar yakeen tu yahan, apne sath chalte saaye par
Aayega jaise hi andhera, ye tere hath se fisal jayega

Sachchaai ki jeet hai aur, neki se hi hume jannat mile
Ye baat samjhega jab tak tu, ye waqt dur nikal jayega...!!

very well said Anamika ji....... keep writing..


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too good anamika jee, aise hee likhte rahiye.



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