Bheed bhaage takra ke mujhse..
Par raasta khaali lagne lage..
Saabit kar deta hai sab kuch ..
Ki tum nahi ho aas paas mere..
Aur phir bas khamoshi se..
Baat karte hue main aksar ..
Tumhari tasveer har jagah
Is kadar bana deta hu JO ..
Bas mujhe hi dikhaai deti hai..!
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Kunaal :- 03-12-2012
Kunaal bhai ko shaad ka aadaab.....
Zamaane ke baad aaj aapko yahaan dekh kar yoon lagaa ke banzar zamee pe baarish ki do boonden chalak padee hain... aisi raahat to bas aapke kalaamo se naseeb hoti hai...
Jitnii khoobsurti se aapne ehsaas baante hain.. utne hi aalaa tarqqe se lafzon ka tanabana bunaa hai... meri jaanib se daad qubool frmaaeN... aur itnisi guzaarish hai ke aate raheN... likhte raheN..
Bheed bhaage takra ke mujhse..
Par raasta khaali lagne lage..
Saabit kar deta hai sab kuch ..
Ki tum nahi ho aas paas mere..
Aur phir bas khamoshi se..
Baat karte hue main aksar ..
Tumhari tasveer har jagah
Is kadar bana deta hu JO ..
Bas mujhe hi dikhaai deti hai..!
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Kunaal :- 03-12-2012
Kunaal ji, bahut khushi hue aapko bazm meiN dekhkar...aapne jo ahsaas hamare saath baante hai wo gazal hai ya nahi yeh to muje maloom nahi....hame gazal ki jayada jaankaari to hai nahi...par ahsaas bahut bahut bahut apne se lge....ahsaaoN ko lafzoN meiN bayaaN karna, har koi nahi jaanta...aapne bakhoobki kiye hai...!!
bazm meiN aate rhiye aur bazm ki ronak badate rahiye.
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
dil kamla jiha mera pyar diya tanda bun betha..
na chaundeya hoya v ohdi kahi gal sun betha..
mai nhi kita muhabat to inkaar jad kar hi liya...
sada ta rab hi oh ae, sada dil jo hai ohnu chun betha..