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Yunhi yeh mehfil badhti rahein, isi dua mein... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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ek aur umda sharing ke liye shukriya shaad ji...aap sab ki meharbaniya ki hame is thread par itni behatreen ghazlein padhne ko mil rahi hain ... bahut khoob..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Jigar kaa ek behad khoobsurat sher...
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shukriya ji..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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dil ko jab dil se raah hotii hai -
27th May 2015, 10:32 AM
meri pasand ki aik aur gazal...aap sabki nazar
 dil ko jab dil se raah hotii hai dil ko jab dil se raah hotii hai aah hotii hai vaah hotii hai ik nazar dil kii simt dekh to lo kaise duniyaa tabaah hotii hai husn-e-jaanaa.N kii manzilo.n ko na puuchh har nafas ek raah hotii hai kyaa Khabar thii ki ishq ke haatho.n aisii haalat tabaah hotii hai saa.Ns letaa huu.N dam ulajhataa hai baat karataa huu.N aah hotii hai jo ulaT detii hai safo.n ke safe ik shikastaa-sii aah hotii hai .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th May 2015, 11:13 AM
kyaa Khabar thii ki ishq ke haatho.n
aisii haalat tabaah hotii hai saa.Ns letaa huu.N dam ulajhataa hai baat karataa huu.N aah hotii hai waahhhh, ye sher bayaan karte hain ke kyon inhe mashhoor shaayar kahaa jaataa hai........ thanks for sharing deee...... |
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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niyaaz-o-naaz ke jhaga.De miTaaye jaate hai.n ham un me.n aur vo ham me.n samaaye jaate hai.n ye naaz-e-husn to dekho ki dil ko ta.Dapaakar nazar milaate nahii.n muskuraaye jaate hai.n mere junuun-e-tamannaa kaa kuchh Khayaal nahii.n lajaaye jaate hai.n daaman chhu.Daaye jaate hai.n jo dil se uThate hai.n shole vo a.ng ban ban kar tamaam ma.nzar-e-fitarat pe chhaye jaate hai.n mai.n apanii aah ke sadaqe ki merii aah me.n bhii terii nigaah ke a.ndaaz paaye jaate hai.n ye apanii tark-e-muhabbat bhii kyaa muhabbat hai ji.nhe.n bhulaate hai.n vo yaad aaye jaate hai.n |
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Waaaaaaah...lajwaaaab sharing...dil khush ho gaya padhkar...... shukriya shaad ji.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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muddat me.n vo phir taazaa mulaaqaat kaa aalam -
28th May 2015, 11:09 AM
muddat me.n vo phir taazaa mulaaqaat kaa aalam muddat me.n vo phir taazaa mulaaqaat kaa aalam Khaamosh adaao.n me.n vo jazbaat kaa aalam allaah re vo shiddat-e-jazbaat kaa aalam kuchh kah ke vo bhuulii hu_ii har baat kaa aalam [shiddat=intensity] aariz se Dhalakate hu_e shabanam ke vo qatare aa.Nkho.n se jhalakataa huaa barasaat kaa aalam vo nazaro.n hii nazaro.n me.n savaalaat kii duniyaa vo aa.Nkho.n hii aa.Nkho.n me.n javaabaat kaa aalam .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th May 2015, 11:19 AM
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lovely ghazal shared dee....... and this sher is amaing.... allaah re vo shiddat-e-jazbaat kaa aalam kuchh kah ke vo bhuulii hu_ii har baat kaa aalam waahhhh kyaa khoob sher hai....... |
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28th May 2015, 12:29 PM
Jigar ji ki ek aur umdaa ghazal se hazraat ko waaqif karwaa raha hoon....
ishq ko be-naqab hona tha aap apna jawab hona tha mast-e-jam-e-sharab hona tha be-KHud-e-iztirab hona tha teri aankhon ka kuchh qusur nahin han mujhi ko KHarab hona tha ao mil jao muskura ke gale ho chuka jo itab hona tha kucha-e-ishq men nikal aaya jis ko KHana-KHarab hona tha dil ki jis par hain naqsh-e-ranga-rang usko sada kitab hona tha humne nakaamiyon ko DhunD liya aaKHirash kaamyab hona tha hae wo lamha-e-sukun ki jise mashar-e-iztirab hona tha nigah-e-yar KHud taDap uThti shart-e-awwal KHarab hona tha kyun na hota sitam bhi be-payan karam-e-be-hisab hona tha kyun nazar hairaton men Dub gai mauj-e-sad-iztirab hona tha ho chuka roz-e-awwalin hi 'jigar' jis ko jitna KHarab hona tha Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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28th May 2015, 12:51 PM
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Jigar sahiib ki har gazal la-jawaab hai...bahut umda gazal share ki aapne MAST bhai, shukriya .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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mehfil yun hi badti rahe isi dua ke saath radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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28th May 2015, 02:29 PM
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waahhh mast sahaab.... kyaa nazraana pesh kiyaa hai aapne... is khoobsurat ghazal ne baazm me chaar chaand lagaa diye.... bahot khoob..... teri aankhon ka kuchh qusur nahin han mujhi ko KHarab hona tha ao mil jao muskura ke gale ho chuka jo itab hona tha ye aashar to bas laajawaab hain......TFS mast saahab.... aate rahen. khush rahen..... shaad.... |
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Waaaaah...bahut khoob...kya samaa bandha hai is nayaab ghazal ne... TFS di... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th June 2015, 01:18 PM
Jigar ka ek sher khaas SDC ko nazar......
Aadat ke baad dard bhii dene lagaa mazaa, haNs haNs ke aah aah kiye jaa rahaa hoon main.... -Jigar |
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..................share karne ka shukriya shaad.!अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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18th June 2015, 02:36 PM
dosto Jigar sahiib ki aik aur khoobsurat gazal, bade seede se lafzoN meiN bhi kamaal ki gazal kehne ka hunar sab meiN kahan hota hai..lijiye padiye
inhii.n Khush_gumaaniyo.n me.n kahii.n jaa.N se bhii na jaao inhii.n Khush_gumaaniyo.n me.n kahii.n jaa.N se bhii na jaao vo jo chaaraagar nahii.n hai use zaKhm kyuu.N dhikhaao ye udaasiyo.n ke mausam kahii.n raayegaa.N na jaaye.N kisii zaKhm ko kuredo kisii dard ko jagaao vo kahaaniyaa.N adhuurii jo na ho sake.ngii puurii unhe.n mai.n bhii kyuu.N sunaa_uu.N unhe.n tum bhii kyuu.N sunaao mere ham_safar puraane mere ab bhii muntazir hai.n tumhe.n saath chho.Danaa hai to abhii se chho.D jaao ye judaa_iyo.n ke raste ba.Dii duur tak gaye hai.n jo gayaa vo phir na lauTaa merii baat maan jaao kisii bevafaa kii Khaatir ye junuu.N 'Faraz' kab tak jo tumhe.n bhulaa chukaa hai use tum bhii bhuul jaao .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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'Faraz' ab ko_ii saudaa ko_ii junuu.N bhii nahii.n |
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'Faraz' ab ko_ii saudaa ko_ii junuu.N bhii nahii.n -
18th June 2015, 02:42 PM
'Faraz' ab ko_ii saudaa ko_ii junuu.N bhii nahii.n 'Faraz' ab ko_ii saudaa ko_ii junuu.N bhii nahii.n magar qaraar se din kaT rahe ho.n yuu.N bhii nahii.n lab-o-dahan bhii milaa guftaguu kaa fan bhii milaa magar jo dil pe guzaratii hai kah sakuu.N bhii nahii.n [lab = lips; dahan = mouth; guftaguu = conversation] [fan = art/skill] merii zubaa.N kii luknat se bad_gumaa.N na ho jo tuu kahe to tujhe umr bhar miluu.N bhii nahii.n [luknat = stammering; bad_gumaa.N = suspicious] 'Faraz' jaise ko_ii diyaa turbat-e-havaa chaahe hai tuu paas aaye to mumkin hai mai.n rahuu.N bhii nahii.n [turbat = grave/tomb] .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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baraso.n ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dil_rubaa saa -
18th June 2015, 02:46 PM
Faraz ji ki aik aur lajwaab gazal
baraso.n ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dil_rubaa saa baraso.n ke baad dekhaa ik shaKhs dil_rubaa saa ab zahan me.n nahii.n hai par naam thaa bhalaa saa abaruu khi.nche khi.nche se aa.Nkhe.n jhukii jhukii sii baate.n rukii rukii sii lahajaa thakaa thakaa saa alfaaz the ke jugnuu aavaaz ke safar me.n ban jaaye jangalo.n me.n jis tarah raastaa saa Khvaabo.n me.n Khvaab us ke yaado.n me.n yaad us kii niindo.n me.n ghul gayaa ho jaise ke rat_jagaa saa pahale bhii log aaye kitane hii zindagii me.n vo har tarah se lekin auro.n se thaa judaa saa agalii muhabbato.n ne vo naa_muraadiyaa.N dii.n taazaa rafaaqato.n se dil thaa Daraa Daraa saa kuchh ye ke muddato.n se ham bhii nahii.n the roye kuchh zahar me.n bujhaa thaa ahabaab kaa dilaasaa phir yuu.N huaa ke saavan aa.Nkho.n me.n aa base the phir yuu.N huaa ke jaise dil bhii thaa aabalaa saa ab sach kahe.n to yaaro ham ko Khabar nahii.n thii ban jaayegaa qayaamat ik vaaqi_aa zaraa saa tevar the beruKhii ke andaaz dostii ke vo ajanabii thaa lekin lagataa thaa aashnaa saa ham dasht the ke dariyaa ham zahar the ke amrit naahaq thaa zo.Num ham ko jab vo nahii.n thaa pyaasaa ham ne bhii us ko dekhaa kal shaam ittefaaqan apanaa bhii haal hai ab logo 'Faraz' kaa saa .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th June 2015, 04:25 PM
dee...................... ye Faraz ke kalaam Jigar ke naam pe kyuuunnnnnnn
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 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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