Mind Games

[Rohin]

Hi Everyone,

If you can't understand the poem read again..
and if you still can't... read again...
read read read till you can...
and if you still cannot...
Read again.. coz it's Mind games

I Love playing mind games.. do you?

Mind games

A black dot on a white wall
It enlarges till finally it blurs
transported into another world
A maze surrounds you
It has no rules
You are the rule
It has no boundaries
You are the boundary
You are the king
You are the pawn
Every move you make counts
What to do?
Which road to take?
At every step a mystery unfolds
Only you can solve it
Its all a big maze
And only you can find the way out
The darkness spreads its wings
Your heart begin to race
As the time keeps running you out
run! run! run!
as fast as you can
A tornado is approaching
The waves have begun to rise
They are coming to get you
What you gonna do?
What you gonna do about it?
No place to hide
No place to go
As you loose breath and fall
you wait for the inevitable
The earth below you shakes
And you fall into a bottomless pit
The temperature begins to rise
All seems to be upside down
You are wrapped in chains
You try to break free
But all is in vain
No choices left
No light at the end of the tunnel
The world begins to spin
You begin to sweat
A deep last breath
Everything is going to end
A loud scream
And then lightening
The dot reappears
It moves around
It is looking for something
The window is open
The sun is out
Good Morning

-- Rohin Bhargava

[shayri12345]

HI Rohin

As i read this poem for real u had played a game with the mind, as the words i read, my mind was imagining what u wrote, the hoshposh...the running..the sweat....wow I am stilll in the loop pf wat u wrote..

The poem started with a black dot...and ended up as Sun - the power, the new morning, the new enthusiasm.. ( I hope ur each mroning starts with a new energy and great success - wrapped in warmth of luv),

well i should say the reverse way cuz the sun is actually the starting..

a lot of energy and vibration this poem has!

Amazing! how u captured so much expressions and made us feel it also

I must say - mind games are really amazing and u did it well

Luv ya
Priya

[Pulkit_gupta]

Rohin,

Hmmmmmm... started playing mind games again.... chhutti khatam.... sahi hai maamu...

This one is nice.... kaafi ghumaav create kiye hain.... idhar se udahar.. dark to light...

Keep writing... or shall i say... Keep Playing...

[shrdh]

abhi ek baar padhi hai nahi samjhi

tumhe to maloom hai na didi buddhu hai

to bus koshish jari hai nahi aayi samjh mai mind games to plz samjha dena na


mera to aajkal dimag bulu fuse hai theek karake wapis aaungi

[Rohin]

Originally posted by LuvPriya
HI Rohin

As i read this poem for real u had played a game with the mind, as the words i read, my mind was imagining what u wrote, the hoshposh...the running..the sweat....wow I am stilll in the loop pf wat u wrote..

The poem started with a black dot...and ended up as Sun - the power, the new morning, the new enthusiasm.. ( I hope ur each mroning starts with a new energy and great success - wrapped in warmth of luv),

well i should say the reverse way cuz the sun is actually the starting..

a lot of energy and vibration this poem has!

Amazing! how u captured so much expressions and made us feel it also

I must say - mind games are really amazing and u did it well

Luv ya
Priya

Priya,

thanks for reading my poetry.. it seemed all jumbled up and i am glad you understood its significance... i like to write such pieces... where there are a lot of layers in what the writer writes....every time you read you will find something new....

tc
luv ya
Rohin

[Rohin]

Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Rohin,

Hmmmmmm... started playing mind games again.... chhutti khatam.... sahi hai maamu...

This one is nice.... kaafi ghumaav create kiye hain.... idhar se udahar.. dark to light...

Keep writing... or shall i say... Keep Playing...

Pulkit,

Kaam khatam ho gaya hai... to socha thoda games hi kehl loon... all work and no play makes rohin a dull boy...

I am glad u liked it...

tc
Rohin

[Rohin]

Originally posted by shrdh
abhi ek baar padhi hai nahi samjhi

tumhe to maloom hai na didi buddhu hai

to bus koshish jari hai nahi aayi samjh mai mind games to plz samjha dena na


mera to aajkal dimag bulu fuse hai theek karake wapis aaungi

Shrdha di,

Thanks for reading...

tc
Rohin

[sukanya]

Hello Rohin

Lots of imaginations put into this poetry.......sach mein it's really hard to write such a poetry......good work done....and a good title mind games.....

keep writing
Take care
di

[Rohin]

Originally posted by sukanya
Hello Rohin

Lots of imaginations put into this poetry.......sach mein it's really hard to write such a poetry......good work done....and a good title mind games.....

keep writing
Take care
di

Sukanya di,

Well I consider this to be my best effort till date in english poetry... coz it has wrapped me completly within it....

thanks for appreciating...

tc
Rohin

[Amanush...]

Hmmm...! I like mind games

While reading this poem, an image came into my mind...! A
serpent biting its own tail...!

Beginning with void, ending with dawn....! A black dot... the
universe in the celestial sphere...! Dawn... Light you are, light
you will be...!

.

A black dot speaks for more than a thousand words...

And I love dots, specially when they are in Trio...! And I love
your poem too...Rohin Bhai !

Do keep writing like this and take care...ok ?

Thanks

[Rohin]

Originally posted by Mushkil
Hmmm...! I like mind games

While reading this poem, an image came into my mind...! A
serpent biting its own tail...!

Beginning with void, ending with dawn....! A black dot... the
universe in the celestial sphere...! Dawn... Light you are, light
you will be...!

A black dot speaks for more than a thousand words...

And I love dots, specially when they are in Trio...! And I love
your poem too...Rohin Bhai !

Do keep writing like this and take care...ok ?

Thanks

Danny bhai,

Thanks for all the encouragement...
I am glad you liked it...

tc
Rohin