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Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 7th April 2006, 10:24 AM
khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na mile ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

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Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 7th April 2006, 10:49 AM
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khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na mile ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

SHRDH
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Aapki lekhni se behtey hue shabdon ko parha.
Bahaut accha laga parhkar. aapka dhanyavaad

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bahot khoobsurat likha hai! mai pahle se hi aapke andaz ki kayal hun....aap ke sabhi sher jazbaton se bhare hue hai....shukriya........
   
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7th April 2006, 05:28 PM
very beautiful shraddha.....

Destiny is what you beleive in,
Destiny is what you make off,
Be the creator of your destiny,
For all have the force within....

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Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 7th April 2006, 08:07 PM
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khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na mile ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

SHRDH
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aapki har ek line muje bohat achi lagi or ye < uljhee SHRDDHA, khud se hi pareshaan > bohat kuch kerahi hei.
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7th April 2006, 09:34 PM
Namaskaar Shrdh Ji
kaisi hain aap?....dua hai aap khush rahein.

Main jaan-na chaha raha tha ki kya woh Material aapke kuch kaam aaya hai?

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hi chatpatti dd, likha to bahut acha hai, bas ek baat batana- mirgtrishna kya hota hai??????????
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Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 8th April 2006, 09:01 AM
khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na milne ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

Wah....

MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

good...


Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan


Sahi likha hai bahut khoob....

Shrdha,

Padha aur laga ko jo likha hai sahi likha hai... ehsaas tumhare shabdon mein ghule hue dikh rahe the... bahut ache... aise hi likhte raho...

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8th April 2006, 10:12 AM
khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na mile ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

waaah... nice thought...


MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

waaaahh... too good...bahut sahi kaha hai...


Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

hmmmmmmmmm.....

Hi Shraddha,

Deep thoughts expressed beautifully... I loved it as always... do keep expressing ur heart... take care

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Re: Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 9th April 2006, 10:52 AM
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9th April 2006, 11:16 AM
MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Hello Shradha

Acha likha hay tumney.....Yuun hi likhtey raho...

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MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Hello Shradha

Acha likha hay tumney.....Yuun hi likhtey raho...

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thnks sukanya ji bataane ke liye....waise kya karu, itni gehri baatein samajh mein nahi aati!!
hmm meri sweetu ko samjh nahi aaya achha chlo samjh dete hai mrigtishna is jo registaan mai pani k talash mai log nikalte hai aur har jagah unhe ye doubt hota hai ki pani ka jheel hai but jab waha pahunchte hai to sirf jhoot hota hai ise hi mrigtrishna ka naam diya hai

hope aap samjhi
na samjhi ho to main fir se samjhunagi

samjha kar hi dum loongi
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hmm meri sweetu ko samjh nahi aaya achha chlo samjh dete hai mrigtishna is jo registaan mai pani k talash mai log nikalte hai aur har jagah unhe ye doubt hota hai ki pani ka jheel hai but jab waha pahunchte hai to sirf jhoot hota hai ise hi mrigtrishna ka naam diya hai

hope aap samjhi
na samjhi ho to main fir se samjhunagi

samjha kar hi dum loongi
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Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 11th April 2006, 04:25 PM
Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

pareshaaaan hain hamaare dost......khud hi ki talaash mein

kyaa khoob kaha hai aapne....
hamara kehna sach hota ja raha hai dost..
koi na koi aisa dard hai jaroor jisne aap ki shayari ko itna nikhar diya hai...
kyoki shayri or dard ka bahut nazdeek ka rishta hai......

lekin hamari dua hai ki aap shayri mein bhi improve karte raho ..

orr dard bhi aap se meelon doooor rahen....
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bahut khoob - 12th April 2006, 02:55 PM
bahut khoobsoorat ek baar phir tumahree baat
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wah
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Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

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14th April 2006, 11:34 AM
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bahot khoobsurat likha hai! mai pahle se hi aapke andaz ki kayal hun....aap ke sabhi sher jazbaton se bhare hue hai....shukriya........
zarra ji sorry dnt know ur name

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Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 14th April 2006, 06:12 PM
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khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na mile ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

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30th April 2006, 05:19 PM
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aapki har ek line muje bohat achi lagi or ye < uljhee SHRDDHA, khud se hi pareshaan > bohat kuch kerahi hei.
shukriya shraddha ji

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Re: Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 30th April 2006, 05:23 PM
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khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na milne ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

Wah....

MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

good...


Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan


Sahi likha hai bahut khoob....

Shrdha,

Padha aur laga ko jo likha hai sahi likha hai... ehsaas tumhare shabdon mein ghule hue dikh rahe the... bahut ache... aise hi likhte raho...

Take Care
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THNX FOR READING THIS AND SAMJHNE K LIYE BHI SUKRIYA

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30th April 2006, 05:24 PM
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khud se khud ki jo karwaaee pahchaan
Aainaa poochhe sawal, jawab kaha.n aasaan

Mila jo khushi nahi ,na mile ka gum raha
sada un bujhe hi rahe, mere armaan

waaah... nice thought...


MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Aarzoo.n jo tham leti ,mil jata sakoon
Talash mai nikli khushi k ,raste anjaan

waaaahh... too good...bahut sahi kaha hai...


Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

hmmmmmmmmm.....

Hi Shraddha,

Deep thoughts expressed beautifully... I loved it as always... do keep expressing ur heart... take care
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30th April 2006, 05:25 PM
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MIRGTRISHNA HAI KHWAHISHE.N peeche na jaao
ye chhoti si baat ,samjhi nahi naadan

Hello Shradha

Acha likha hay tumney.....Yuun hi likhtey raho...

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SUKANAY JI AAPKO YAHA DEKHKAR BHAUT KUSHI HUI

AAPNE PADHA BHAUT ACHHA LAGA AISE HI KABHI KABHI AAP AATI RAHENGI ISI UMEED MAI

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thnks dd batane ke liye, ab puri achi se samajh mein aayi


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Re: Re: Mirgtrishna Hai Khwahishe.n - 30th April 2006, 05:28 PM
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Bhagti rahi umar bhar jiski talash mai
Wo manjile nahi mili ,khhoya apna jahan

Kise ilzam doon gulsahn-e- tabahi ka
Uljhee SHRDDHA ,khud se hi pareshaan

pareshaaaan hain hamaare dost......khud hi ki talaash mein

kyaa khoob kaha hai aapne....
hamara kehna sach hota ja raha hai dost..
koi na koi aisa dard hai jaroor jisne aap ki shayari ko itna nikhar diya hai...
kyoki shayri or dard ka bahut nazdeek ka rishta hai......

lekin hamari dua hai ki aap shayri mein bhi improve karte raho ..

orr dard bhi aap se meelon doooor rahen....
sadaa khush raho...
JEET JI AAP AAYE DEKHKAR ACHHA LAGA
AATE RAHENGE ISI TARAH YE HI UMEED HAI

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Re: bahut khoob - 30th April 2006, 05:29 PM
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bahut khoobsoorat ek baar phir tumahree baat
har ashar motee kee tarah ek dhage main piro diya tum ne
wah
par ye sher mere nazar main sab se khoobsoorat hai
wah sharddha

Manjil nahi thi ye ,kaanton ka safar tha
Ab lagi jo chot ,chhipaun kaha nisan

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ANIL JI AAPKA HAMESHA HI SAATH RAHA HAI FIR SE IS SAFAR MAI SAATH DENE KA SUKRIYA ,AAPKO PASAND AAYA MUJHE ACHHA LAGA

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30th April 2006, 05:31 PM
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zyada samajh me to nahi aai par ritham aur radeef me fit thi.sorry dd itni typical hindi mujhe aati nhai hai par itne log jab tareef kar rahe hain to achi hi hogi.by d way hope u don mind aur ek baar aur share karne k ;liye thanx likhte rahiega dd aur apna khayal rakhiega.aapka
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SAMJHA NAHI AAYI FIR BHI AAPNE PADHI AUR SARAHI ACHHA LAGA WAISE KYA SAMJH MAI NAHI AAYA THA YE MIRGTIRSHAN MEANS KHWAHSHIHE JO HUM JANTE HAI KI PURI NAHI HONGI FIR BHI USKE LIYE APNE PASS RAKHA HUA DHAN BHI KHO DETE HAI ZINDGI IS DUKH MAI GUJAR JAATI HAI KI WO NAHI MILA JO MILA USKA KHYAAL KABHI HOTA HI NAHI

YE HI EK CHHOTA SA KHYAAL THA ZEHAN MAI USE HI KAGAJ PAR UTARA THA

UMEED HAI KI AB AAP SAMJH GAYE HONGE
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