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Tujhe bhoolne ki koshish mein, Jab dil ye zid pe aa gaya, Main aankh moond ke baith gayi, Tu khayaal pe phir chaa gaya… Ye dhadkan kahin ruk jaaye naa, Meri nabz Thehr naa jaaye kahin, Tune Waqt kiya mera lamha lamha, Magar maut ko aasaan bana gaya… Meri har daleel ko kiya ansuni, Meri fariyaad bhi to suni nahin, Main Hairaan hu, haa Kuch Pareshaan hu, Aisa Faislaa tu mujhe suna gaya… Mujhe chaand ki kabhi talab na thi, Mujhe suraj ki bhi fikar nahi, Bas aankh kholna hi chahte the ham, Magar Tu roshni hi bujha gaya… Beshak bhoolna tujhe chaha bahut, Hans kar kabhi, ro kar kabhi, De kar ye aansuon ki saugaat mujhe, Tu daaman apna bacha gaya ................ tujhe bhool na chahati hoon magar tu meri sansoo me samaghea dil khe rehi hoon khudha kare kise naal pyar na hove je ho jave ta oh bewafa na bane usto rabh kadhi door na kare nahi ta bas zindghi ch yadda te sirf ansu h reh jande ne zindghi ini berangh ho jandi hai ki khuhsi ta nede bhi nahi ondhi sirf aur sirf rohna pale pe janda hai ..................meri tara ............. i love someone why he don't love me es sawal da jawab shet khudha ko bhi a hove???? pyar karte hai jinse umar bhar kare ghe sirf unse khatam karde deghe je sanse hbi jabh unke ilava aur kisi ka name lena padda i love my rajveer ab izat chahati hoon aj who sabh likha hai jo dil me tha sath dete rehna khush rehna kamal preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya  kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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20th May 2007, 07:36 AM
hi preet ji
kese ho aap? preet ji aapke ye dil se nikle dard bhare ehsaash achchhe hai, par aaj aapki rachna padhke dil jarur dukha hai ki wo bhale hi dur chala gaya par hamare dost ko dard ke sahare kyu chhod gaya? preet ji aapke alfaaz bare hi achchhe hai, kyu nahi hoge dil se jo nikle hai... Ye dhadkan kahin ruk jaaye naa, Meri nabz Thehr naa jaaye kahin, Tune Waqt kiya mera lamha lamha, Magar maut ko aasaan bana gaya… Beshak bhoolna tujhe chaha bahut, Hans kar kabhi, ro kar kabhi, De kar ye aansuon ki saugaat mujhe, Tu daaman apna bacha gaya ................ khas karke preet ji aapki ye lines hamein bahut hi achchhi lagi.... aaj bhi khuda se yehi dua karta hu ki aapki har dua aaj kabul ho jaye chahe khuda aapki dua ke liye hamari khushi kyu na kam karte jaye... ese hi likhte rahe aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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sabse pehle appse maffi chahati hoon ki meine appka dil dhukae par meine to appni asliat likhi si tuhada dil dhukhe sorry tuhanu meri rachna pasand aye ude le tuhada bhot bhot jyada thanks merul ji me je mere naseeb ch khushi hove hgy mil jae ghy par menu kadhi es tara khushi nahi ho sakdi ki mere dost diya khushia kut jan te menu mil jaan es le khudha nu e dua kardi ha ki tuhadia khushi 4 ghuna badh jan ese sath dinde rehna appdi dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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21st May 2007, 09:14 PM
HELLO BHAIYA
NAMASKAR TUHANU ITHE DEKHEA TA BHOT HI KHUSHI HUI KAISE HO APP? kamal bahot hi geHrii baat kahi hai tumneY kisii ko bhoolnaa dil ke liye bahot musShkil hotaa hai maiN samajH saktaa huN BHAI AB APP TO JANTE HI HAI HAMARE VARE ME TO ITNA SAMJHIE ONKO TO EK PAL KE LIYE BHI NAHI BHUL PATE EK SANS BHI NAHI ASI LETE HUM JINME UNKA NAME NA LE yeH lines bahot hi pasaNd aaYi tumhaari har kosiSh ki yehi khaasiyaT hoti hai kii tum jaZbaatoN ko baRii geHraayiYoN ke saath peSh karti ho THANKS JE GEHRAIO ME JAUGHI TABHI TO DARD KO APP SABSE BANDH SAKTI HOON umdaa andaaz-e-bayaaN ..! SHUKRIYA wah kamal kyaa baat kahi hai tumneY bahot hi dard chhipaa hai in meiN THANKS hm maine jo baat samjhaaYi thi useY yaad raKHnaa bas ess sher pe aage aur kuch nahiN kahuNgaa baaki tum samajHdaar ho JI BHAIYA WHO BAAT HAMESHA YAAD RAKHU GHI APPPNE JO BATAI HAI IS LIYE dear kamal: tumhaari yeH kosiSh dil meiN utar gaYii sach meiN ehsaaSoN ko tumneY bahot hi khoob peSh kiYe haiN bas yuuNhi liKhti raho tum ..aur haMeShaa khuSh raho isis duaoN ke saath ijaazaT letaa huN apnaa khayaal raKhnaa tumhaaraa bhaii dhaval[/quote] BAIYA MUJHE BHOT KHUSHI HUY HAI KI MERA LIKHA HUA APPKO PASAND AYE AGHE BHI KOSHISH KARUGHY ISE BHI BEHTER LIKHNE KI BAS APP SABH KA SATH YUHI MILTE RAHE TO KHUSH HI RAMA GHY APPNA KHIYAL RAKHNA KHUSH REHIGHA TUMARI BAHEN KAMAL har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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Aadab preet ji, kaisi hai aap? preet ji yakin maniye aapki yeh nazm dil ko chhu gayi, humne aapki kuch nazme padhi hai, magar kya kare aaj tak kabhi reply karna ka mauka hi nahi mila, magar is nazm ko padhkar,hame pyar k un ehsaason ka pata chala,jo ek dard bhara dil hi likh sakta hai, is nazm ke aapke pyar ki tadap,apka intezaar,aur apke ek un chahe yakin ka pata chalta hai, preet ji dua karungi,k aapko har khushi mile, preet ji wese to apki puri nazm kabile tarif hai, ,per aapke yeh 2 ashaar jese hamare dilme ghar kar gaye......... Mujhe chaand ki kabhi talab na thi, Mujhe suraj ki bhi fikar nahi, Bas aankh kholna hi chahte the ham, Magar Tu roshni hi bujha gaya… Beshak bhoolna tujhe chaha bahut, Hans kar kabhi, ro kar kabhi, De kar ye aansuon ki saugaat mujhe, Tu daaman apna bacha gaya ................ hamesha khush rahiye. apna khayal rakhiye, ALLAH HAFIZ apki dost sony ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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27th May 2007, 06:52 PM
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kaisi hai app? me thek hoon appko jaha par dekh kar bhot khushi hoy shukriya hume padhne ke liye aur hamara likha hua pasand karneke ke liye sony ji dard to ab zindghy ban chuka hai ab to us ehsason ko dil se likhne ki koshish karti hoon hamesha jabh vo kisi ko pasand aata hai to bhot acha lagta hai aur hosal bhot milta hai jabh app jaise dost ki reaply milti hai thnaks so much sony ji umid hai aghe bhi app ka sath yuhi milta rahe gha shukriya sony ji dua karne ke liye meri bhi yehi dua hai ki app aur hussan ji ka pyar yuhi barkarar rahe aur hamesha badhta jae khush rehiye apna khiyal rakhiye apppki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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ya to nahi kahugi ki per ke acha laga ....kyoki me kisi ko dukhi nahi dekh sakti .........mann karta he aapka ara dard aapne andar sametlu......me janti hu ki ye agar kahu ki usa bhul jayo to meri nadani hogi....per khush rahne ki kosi kigiyega.... iske aalawa bhi bahut sii chiz hei jo aapko milii hei .........jase hum dosto kaa sath ......jo nasib walo ko hii milta hei... asaa karti hu aap khush rahne ki kosi karegi... aapki dost~ saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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28th May 2007, 01:44 AM
Bahut hi gehri baat likhi hai aapne, shayad ye kisi ke liye inspiration ho.
Par aap se mein yahi kehna chahunga ki 'dil ke har aawaz ko bahar kar dijiye, par har aawaz ko dil pe mat lijiye'. Best of luck for Happy Journey of ur life. |
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hello pyari saloni kaisi ho tum? shukriya saloni app ne itna khe diya ki mera dhukh app le lo mera dhukh kam ho ghea saloni me itni burri nahi ha ki apna dhukh kise nu de dama meri eh dua hai sare le je meri kismat ch koi khushi bhi hai oh bhi sare nu mil jave kyon ki menu hun gum ch jeen di aadat ho chuki a har vele rohn di aadat ho chuki a dhukh ta hun zindghy ban ghe ne.......... saloni ji use bulana namunkin hai mere le kyon dil se pyar karti hoon aj bhi uske intzar me bethi hoon chahe vo kabhi palat ke bhi na dkeh par jitni bhi umar hai uske intzar me hi nikalni hai ji theek appne saloni ji nasseb valo ko aisa pyar parvar milta hai mujhe sach me jabh se is parvar me aye hoon jenne ki ek tamana si hoy var na hamesha khudha se mout hi manghti thi.. khush rehne ki koshish me hi to hai aghe us khudha ki amrji jo use changha lagge og kari jave asi ta jenna hai oh hi jo us khudha ne khe ditta umid hai aghe bhi idha hi sath milda rahe gha appda khush rehiye apna khiyal rakhna tumari dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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30th May 2007, 01:06 AM
preet ji
kasi ho aap bahut hi aachi tarah se ehsaso ko baya kiya hai aapni....aapko padh kar aach laga...bahut hi aach likha hai aapni...aapki ye koshish muje bahut aachi lagi...aap aise hi likhti raho...take care.... aapki dost, sandhya |
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30th May 2007, 10:23 PM
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hello sanju ji kaise ho app? ji ha je kisi ke liye likha hai appko pasand aye us ke liye bhot sara thanks shukriya itni achi advanse dene ke liye ji zarror es tara karn di koshish kara ghy tuhanu hbi bhot sara best of luck for ur life rabh nu dua kardi ha ki tuhadi zindhghi ch harar khushi on khush rehiye appki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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hello sadhya ji app kaisi ho? appko humne meri post apr pehli var dekha bhot khushi hoy appda bhot bhoot shukriya ada karti hoon appko pasand aye je jan kar bhot khushi hoy umid hai aghe bhi appka yuhi sath milda rahe gha khush rehiye apna khiyal rakhna appki dost preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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31st May 2007, 10:19 PM
Pyari Preet..
Bahut hi gehraayi bhari baaton ko tumne khooobsoorti se likha hai.. bahut khoob.. Daad kubool karo.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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hello Mani diiii kaisi ho app? shukriya yaha ane ke liye aur mujhe reaply karne ke liye bhot khushi hoy tuhanu ithe dekhkar thanks so much MANI DIIIIII mani di zindghy agar udasi aur gum hi die jae to khush kaise rahu gum me hi jenna padhe gha agar khudha je chahata hai ki hamesha zindghy me roh ke aur dard ke sath guzaru to kaise badl sakti hoon apne nasseb jiene to padhe ghe hi app ne mere dard ko mehsus kiya uske liye dil se shukrguzar hu thanks dua karne ke liye meir bhi dua hai tuhade le ki rabh tuhanu hazara khushiya dave koi dhukh tuhade nede bhi na ave tuhade dhukh menu a javan umid hai aghe bhi appka sath yuhi milta rahe gha khush rehiye appki preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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hello PYARI PRIYA DIIIIIIIII kais hai app? appko yaha par dekhkar bhot khushi hoy me bian nahi kar sakti kitni khushi hoy jabh appki reaply dkehi to ankhon me ansu aghe shukroya PRIYA di yaha apr ane ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye apki daab dil se kabul karti hoon umid hai appka sath yuhi milta rahe gha khush rehna take care appki preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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5th June 2007, 09:54 AM
hi kamal preet ji
kisi ek saks par duniya katam nahi hoti. apne kisi ko chah par usne parwa na ki tho kya vijay saat hai apke. apse dosti karna chata hu.pls reply jarror karna yaan ke liye b or ? ke liye b Apki duniya me rang barna chata hu ek mauka tho de sakti hai mere |
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kaisi ho app? vijay ji chahat hoti hi aisi hai jise ek var chah liya who chahe ja na chahe dil sirf usi ko chahata hai bas uski tamana rakhta hai je hbi theke kaha appne dhuniya nahi khatam hoti magar hum to whohi ke wohi ruk jate hai app yaha aye shukriya aisi hi sath dete rehna theke hai hum appse dosti karlete hai khush rehiye apna khiyal rakhna appki dost kamal preet har kisi ke nahi preet ne aj tak jise bhi dosti ki usne hi dhoka de diya aur jise mohabat ki usne to jeene ka arman hi shen liya kamalrajpreet jaan raj
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Aap ki halaat par dukh hua...
Preet ji bas ek hi guzarish hai aapse. Kisi aur ki likhi Rachna ko apna naam naa de. Original Likhne waalo ko ye baat achhi nahin lagti.  Agar kisi ki shayari aap ko achhi lagi hai, aur aap usey likhna chahe to aap unke naam ke saath likh sakti hai ya "not Mine" to likh hi sakti hai. Aasha hai, Aap samajheingi.  Please Dont Copy Other's Work. That's Really Sad. |
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13th June 2007, 06:13 PM
Preet..
Mujhe bahut dukh hua, tum jo yeh sab kar rahi ho.. yun hum sab ki bhavnaao ke saath kyun khel rahi ho? Tumhari doosri post "Uski Baatein" se Roohi ji ke reply se is rachna ki sachaai ke baare me pata chala.. http://shikha12.wordpress.com/ "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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