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Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kash ma kash mai raheti hai - 5th August 2010, 03:48 AM

Jab hota hu tanhaai ke ghanghor andhere mein
Kisi ki yaade meri ankhon ko binaaii deti hai

Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmakash me raheti hai
Jab bhi milti hai mujhse dosti ki duhaaii deti hai

Besakta hi kadam nikal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Kya imaan wala hu mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai

Woh raasta iqtiyaar kar ley ab tuu aazaadi se "Parwaaz"
Zabt e meyaar se teri jaan tujhe rihaaii deti hai


Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti

Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga
Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti


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Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmakash me raheti hai
Jab bhi milti hai mujhse dosti ki duhaaii deti hai

Besakta hi kadam nikal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Kya imaan wala hu mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai

Very Impressive........Parwaaz Sahab ! maqta bhi khaas raha .... !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai........ qubuul farmaayeN...


khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....




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Besakta hi kadam nikal padte hai masjid ki taraf
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ji bhaut khoob.......................



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Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmakash me raheti hai
Jab bhi milti hai mujhse dosti ki duhaaii deti hai

Besakta hi kadam nikal padte hai masjid ki taraf
Kya imaan wala hu mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai

Woh raasta iqtiyaar kar ley ab tuu aazaadi se "Parwaaz"
Zabt e meyaar se teri jaan tujhe rihaaii deti hai

Kasam upar wale ki, shayi ho to aisi ho
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8th August 2011, 01:17 AM

Aap sab ka tahe dil se shukriyaa janab .....


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Parwaaz Sahab ko Ajnabi da Adab,
Shayri ka lutf o saroor dil se mehsus hua aapki ye tehreer perh kr! Changa ji bout changa!
Sadi or se dhero daad hajir ha, kaboul kerleo!


Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
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Ajnabi jee aadaab...... tehreer ko pasand karne aur waqt dene ke liye shukra guzaar hain...
khuda hafez......


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bahut khuub parwazz ji aur janumanu ji apki daad ko daad kya daad di hai wah..tu jab payal likhta hai sunai deti hai..


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Baagi jee bahut bahut shukriya aapka....


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Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmakash me raheti hai
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Besakta hi kadam nikal padte hai masjid ki taraf
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Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmakash me raheti hai
Jab bhi milti hai mujhse dosti ki duhaaii deti hai

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Kya imaan wala hu mujhe azaane sunaai deti hai

Woh raasta iqtiyaar kar ley ab tuu aazaadi se "Parwaaz"
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