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Love Bohot bhari hai dard-e-dil - 6th January 2015, 09:30 PM

Bohot bhari hai Dard-e-dil sah payenge maloom nahi
Girayenge ye boozh vo k uthaenge maloom nahi

Bateen to badi karte the vo saat janmo ki magar
Karenge yad bhi hamen k bool jayenge maloom nahi

Fitrat huzoor ki rahi hai badloon me chand si
Aayenge roo-ba-roo k chup jayenge maloom nahi

Khate rakhe habeeb ne kise gum or khushi kitni mili
Hasaenge ab ye hisaab k rulange maloom nahi

Nas nas se vakif hain unki ek umr sohbat thi magar
Pachtayenge dil tod vo k itrayenge maloom nahi

Sazish-e-husn se kab tak gafil rahe ishk-e-junoo
basaenge vo ghar mera k jalaenge maloom nahi

Wadaparast hain vo bade har haal milne aayenge
Aaenge bahana liye k gale lag jaenge maloom nahi

Aab-e-hayat se lagte hain paigam-e-yaar ab humen
Jagayenge fir aas k zehar de jayenge maloom nahi

Na pooch "bhushan" kaise gira ishk-o-dariya-e-aag me
Dubenge ab ishk me k jal jayenge maloom nahi

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8th January 2015, 08:26 AM

waaahh kya baat hai bhushan saahab........... khoobsurat rachna.

likhte rahen...

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8th January 2015, 02:02 PM

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waaahh kya baat hai bhushan saahab........... khoobsurat rachna.

likhte rahen...

Shaad.....

Shaad bhai.....zarranawazi ka tahe dil se shukriya....muzhe ilm hai ki ye peshkash technically bohot galat hai...aage se aapko shikayat ka mauka nahi milega..

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8th January 2015, 03:25 PM

bhai main technically koi baat nahi kar raha hoon...... aap aisa mat sochiye...

doosri baat jo cheez niyam kanoon se jitnaa door rahe bandishon se jitnaa door rahe usme utnii hi masoomiyat aa jaatii hai aur wahi ehsaas hamaare dil ke andar tak utarte hain... yaqeen maniye bahot pasand aaye hame aapke jazbaat...... bas duaa karte hain ke aap aur accha likhte rahiye....

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8th January 2015, 09:06 PM

kya baat hai.......bahut hee khoob kalaam hai...daad kubul farmaayein...keep it up...



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9th January 2015, 02:39 PM

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kya baat hai.......bahut hee khoob kalaam hai...daad kubul farmaayein...keep it up...
Aru ji......aapko ehsaas pasand aaye aapki dariyadili hai...housala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya

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11th January 2015, 02:01 PM

Waaah....Bahut khoob bhushan ji......



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11th January 2015, 02:20 PM

Bhushan ji, bohot badhiya.
aapki rachnayein din ba-din nikharti ja rahi hain, har baar naya rang..
isko yunhi barqarar rakhein.

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11th January 2015, 06:53 PM

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Waaah....Bahut khoob bhushan ji......
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Bhushan ji, bohot badhiya.
aapki rachnayein din ba-din nikharti ja rahi hain, har baar naya rang..
isko yunhi barqarar rakhein.

aapka apna

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Aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi......aapki dariyadili aur uparwale ka kqrqm hai...
Housala afzahi ka tahe dil se shukriya...

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11th January 2015, 07:56 PM

Na pooch "bhushan" kaise gira ishk-o-dariya-e-aag me
Dubenge ab ishk me k jal jayenge maloom nahi

Maar dala sanam tere ehsaas e ishq ne mujhe ...kya khoonb likha Bhushan joshi ji ..

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Na pooch "bhushan" kaise gira ishk-o-dariya-e-aag me
Dubenge ab ishk me k jal jayenge maloom nahi

Maar dala sanam tere ehsaas e ishq ne mujhe ...kya khoonb likha Bhushan joshi ji ..

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14th January 2015, 05:53 PM

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Bohot bhari hai Dard-e-dil sah payenge maloom nahi
Girayenge ye boozh vo k uthaenge maloom nahi

Bateen to badi karte the vo saat janmo ki magar
Karenge yad bhi hamen k bool jayenge maloom nahi

Fitrat huzoor ki rahi hai badloon me chand si
Aayenge roo-ba-roo k chup jayenge maloom nahi

Khate rakhe habeeb ne kise gum or khushi kitni mili
Hasaenge ab ye hisaab k rulange maloom nahi

Nas nas se vakif hain unki ek umr sohbat thi magar
Pachtayenge dil tod vo k itrayenge maloom nahi

Sazish-e-husn se kab tak gafil rahe ishk-e-junoo
basaenge vo ghar mera k jalaenge maloom nahi

Wadaparast hain vo bade har haal milne aayenge
Aaenge bahana liye k gale lag jaenge maloom nahi

Aab-e-hayat se lagte hain paigam-e-yaar ab humen
Jagayenge fir aas k zehar de jayenge maloom nahi

Na pooch "bhushan" kaise gira ishk-o-dariya-e-aag me
Dubenge ab ishk me k jal jayenge maloom nahi

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Bahut khoob Bhushan bhai - dilchasp khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne is rachnaa mein..Yun to har sher tasliim hua par ek sher jo do teen bar padha uspar khaaskar ke daad dena chahungaa


Sazish-e-husn se kab tak gafil rahe ishk-e-junoo
basaenge vo ghar mera k jalaenge maloom nahi


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Bahut khoob Bhushan bhai - dilchasp khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne is rachnaa mein..Yun to har sher tasliim hua par ek sher jo do teen bar padha uspar khaaskar ke daad dena chahungaa


Sazish-e-husn se kab tak gafil rahe ishk-e-junoo
basaenge vo ghar mera k jalaenge maloom nahi


Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa..



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Aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi ye aapki zarranawazi aur uparwale ka karam hai...

Aap ki daad sar aankhon pe..

Inayat banaye rakhiyega

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