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Love Woh koun tha - 15th March 2015, 05:59 PM

woh koun tha jo yaadein degayaa
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din me koi chamakte sitare degaya
aye chaand o suraj tumhari ab zarorat nahi hame
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bahot acchaa likha hai aapne Sabhat saahab....................

aage bhi ummeed karenge apko padhne milta arahegaa.. aate rahiyegaa

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Bahut khoob sabhat jee...
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bahot acchaa likha hai aapne sabhat saahab....................

Aage bhi ummeed karenge apko padhne milta arahegaa.. Aate rahiyegaa

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bahoot bahot shukriya shaad sahab,, a mehfil aesi hae jo apni aur kheech laati hae<< zaroor aaenge
   
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