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Pa-band nazm= TAQSEEM-E-VATAN - 15th August 2016, 08:47 AM
Tamaam ehel-e-vatan aur sdc ke parivar ko yaum-e-aazaadi mubarak ho
Magar aazaadi ki khushi ke saath batwaarey ka bhi gham hai wabasta.

Aaj mai aap sab ke saamne uss gham ka ek pehlu pesh kar raha hu

Ye sirf ek manzar-kashi hai

Dukh pohchana qatayi mera maqsad nahi

Bas ek gham ko baa.nt' raha hu jo hazaaro laakho parivaar ke saath wabasta hai.

Kheen.ch dee sarhado ne eik adaavat ki lakeer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer
Vo saqaafat vo riwaayat vo tamaddun na rahi
Hai abhi bhi dilo mai taaza vo gham ki tasveer

Jisney hijrat ki muhaajir bhi usey kehne lagey
Jo vahaa reh gaye kaafir bhi usey kehne lagey
Bujh gayi shama voh galya ho gayi be-tanveer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Jiss taraf dekha faqat khoon ka hi manzar tha
Aag mai jalta hua saamney mera ghar tha
Vo ladakpan ke aqaarib gaye ho kar dilgeer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Sirf laashey hi padhi thi sukhey patto ki tarah
Chand afraad nazar aaye bhi murdo ki tarah
Kaam na aayi qaraabat na rahi zinda zameer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Aisi majboori bhi kya thi jo kiya tark-e-chaman
Sirf mazhab ke liye hi huee taqseem- e -vatan
Iss siyaasat ne ki tareekh- e -variq ko tehreer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer


FEW MEANINGS

• Adaavat= hate
• Taqseem-e-vatan= partition of country
• Saqaafat= culture
• Riwaayat= tradition
• Tamaddun= civilization
• Hijrat= migrate
• Muhaajir= immigrants
• Be-tanveer= dark/without light
• Ladakpan= childhood
• Aqaarib= kith & kin/relatives
• Dilgeer= sad
• Afraad= people
• Qaraabat= relation
• Zameer= inner conscience
• Tark-e-chaman= to quit garden
• Tareekh-e-variq= page of history
• Tehreer= written
   
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25th August 2016, 03:29 PM
vah buhet khoob nzm mujahid saheb

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29th August 2016, 11:38 PM
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Originally Posted by Mujahid Ali View Post
Tamaam ehel-e-vatan aur sdc ke parivar ko yaum-e-aazaadi mubarak ho
Magar aazaadi ki khushi ke saath batwaarey ka bhi gham hai wabasta.

Aaj mai aap sab ke saamne uss gham ka ek pehlu pesh kar raha hu

Ye sirf ek manzar-kashi hai

Dukh pohchana qatayi mera maqsad nahi

Bas ek gham ko baa.nt' raha hu jo hazaaro laakho parivaar ke saath wabasta hai.

Kheen.ch dee sarhado ne eik adaavat ki lakeer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer
Vo saqaafat vo riwaayat vo tamaddun na rahi
Hai abhi bhi dilo mai taaza vo gham ki tasveer

Jisney hijrat ki muhaajir bhi usey kehne lagey
Jo vahaa reh gaye kaafir bhi usey kehne lagey
Bujh gayi shama voh galya ho gayi be-tanveer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Jiss taraf dekha faqat khoon ka hi manzar tha
Aag mai jalta hua saamney mera ghar tha
Vo ladakpan ke aqaarib gaye ho kar dilgeer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Sirf laashey hi padhi thi sukhey patto ki tarah
Chand afraad nazar aaye bhi murdo ki tarah
Kaam na aayi qaraabat na rahi zinda zameer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Aisi majboori bhi kya thi jo kiya tark-e-chaman
Sirf mazhab ke liye hi huee taqseem- e -vatan
Iss siyaasat ne ki tareekh- e -variq ko tehreer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer


FEW MEANINGS

• Adaavat= hate
• Taqseem-e-vatan= partition of country
• Saqaafat= culture
• Riwaayat= tradition
• Tamaddun= civilization
• Hijrat= migrate
• Muhaajir= immigrants
• Be-tanveer= dark/without light
• Ladakpan= childhood
• Aqaarib= kith & kin/relatives
• Dilgeer= sad
• Afraad= people
• Qaraabat= relation
• Zameer= inner conscience
• Tark-e-chaman= to quit garden
• Tareekh-e-variq= page of history
• Tehreer= written
Mujahid bhai aankhein bhar aayi aapki yeh rachnaa padh ke....kaash ki yeh faasle mit sakte...bahut umdaa aapki is koshish par khaaksaar ka salaam qubool farmaiye


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13th September 2016, 05:17 PM
waaaahhhhh!!! Mujahid sahab...behad khoob kalaam..

Likhte rahein..


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14th September 2016, 02:43 PM
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Originally Posted by Mujahid Ali View Post
Tamaam ehel-e-vatan aur sdc ke parivar ko yaum-e-aazaadi mubarak ho
Magar aazaadi ki khushi ke saath batwaarey ka bhi gham hai wabasta.

Aaj mai aap sab ke saamne uss gham ka ek pehlu pesh kar raha hu

Ye sirf ek manzar-kashi hai

Dukh pohchana qatayi mera maqsad nahi

Bas ek gham ko baa.nt' raha hu jo hazaaro laakho parivaar ke saath wabasta hai.

Kheen.ch dee sarhado ne eik adaavat ki lakeer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer
Vo saqaafat vo riwaayat vo tamaddun na rahi
Hai abhi bhi dilo mai taaza vo gham ki tasveer

Jisney hijrat ki muhaajir bhi usey kehne lagey
Jo vahaa reh gaye kaafir bhi usey kehne lagey
Bujh gayi shama voh galya ho gayi be-tanveer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Jiss taraf dekha faqat khoon ka hi manzar tha
Aag mai jalta hua saamney mera ghar tha
Vo ladakpan ke aqaarib gaye ho kar dilgeer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Sirf laashey hi padhi thi sukhey patto ki tarah
Chand afraad nazar aaye bhi murdo ki tarah
Kaam na aayi qaraabat na rahi zinda zameer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer

Aisi majboori bhi kya thi jo kiya tark-e-chaman
Sirf mazhab ke liye hi huee taqseem- e -vatan
Iss siyaasat ne ki tareekh- e -variq ko tehreer
Huee taqseem-e-vatan bat gayi sab ki taqdeer


FEW MEANINGS

• Adaavat= hate
• Taqseem-e-vatan= partition of country
• Saqaafat= culture
• Riwaayat= tradition
• Tamaddun= civilization
• Hijrat= migrate
• Muhaajir= immigrants
• Be-tanveer= dark/without light
• Ladakpan= childhood
• Aqaarib= kith & kin/relatives
• Dilgeer= sad
• Afraad= people
• Qaraabat= relation
• Zameer= inner conscience
• Tark-e-chaman= to quit garden
• Tareekh-e-variq= page of history
• Tehreer= written

Ali ji, aapke enehsaasoN par wahhh to nahi nikal sakti...meri taraf se aapke ehsaasoN ko dil se salaam hai.

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14th September 2016, 08:49 PM
Shukriya saba ji, madhu sahiba, qasid sahab aur sunita aapa mere kalaam ko sarahne ke liye

Ye aapko logo ki daad-o-tehseen hi hai jo mujhe aur likhne ka hausla deta hai

Yuhi saath detey rahiye

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15th September 2016, 08:43 AM
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Shukriya saba ji, madhu sahiba, qasid sahab aur sunita aapa mere kalaam ko sarahne ke liye

Ye aapko logo ki daad-o-tehseen hi hai jo mujhe aur likhne ka hausla deta hai

Yuhi saath detey rahiye

Dua ki darkhuwasth
Aate rahiye janaab aapka ilm bhar bhi mehfil mein jaan daal deta hai...


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